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Gankyū Eguriko's used a pose as accurate as a precise machine to gouged out eyeballs.
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Gankyū Eguriko's pose that she used to gouged out eyeballs was as accurate as a precise machine.
   
 
The spoon in her hand aimed and extended with a lightning fast speed as if it was a thrown marble, and pierced into Zekiguchi Nashinori’s completely undefended eyeballs, the entrance to his brain. It entered the eye socket at an angle and pierced right through, completely disrupting the contents within.
 
The spoon in her hand aimed and extended with a lightning fast speed as if it was a thrown marble, and pierced into Zekiguchi Nashinori’s completely undefended eyeballs, the entrance to his brain. It entered the eye socket at an angle and pierced right through, completely disrupting the contents within.
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He was the man who killed her a thousand years ago.
 
He was the man who killed her a thousand years ago.
   
And now he had taken away Rinne for an unknown reason. He was still an obvious and dangerous enemy for her.
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And now he had taken away Rinne for an unknown reason. He was still am obvious and dangerous enemy for her.
   
 
“Zekiguchi!”
 
“Zekiguchi!”
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Zekiguchi looked as if he didn’t feel the fatal damage to his brain at all. He was still terrifying. Zekiguchi Nashinori was the leader of Long-Armed Demon and Berobōchō. He was the Greater Fragment named {{Furigana|The Weakest|Ultimate Shield}}, one that had the ability to alter and modify the flesh.
 
Zekiguchi looked as if he didn’t feel the fatal damage to his brain at all. He was still terrifying. Zekiguchi Nashinori was the leader of Long-Armed Demon and Berobōchō. He was the Greater Fragment named {{Furigana|The Weakest|Ultimate Shield}}, one that had the ability to alter and modify the flesh.
   
Guriko was very aware of the power of a Greater Fragment after having fought them numerous times.
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Guriko was very aware of the power of a Greater Fragment after having battled them numerous times.
   
 
However, it was as if this man could not feel anything after receiving damage. What should she do? If she didn’t know what to do, then she should just kill him.
 
However, it was as if this man could not feel anything after receiving damage. What should she do? If she didn’t know what to do, then she should just kill him.
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An eyeball immediately regenerated from the emptied eye socket. Not only that, three or four new eyeballs also inexplicably grew out of Zekiguchi’s face. He did not change at all, still as despicable an opponent as before. She felt like her attacks were not working at all.
 
An eyeball immediately regenerated from the emptied eye socket. Not only that, three or four new eyeballs also inexplicably grew out of Zekiguchi’s face. He did not change at all, still as despicable an opponent as before. She felt like her attacks were not working at all.
   
“Usagawa Rinne-san is an existence more important than you were ever aware of. That’s why I’m putting her under my care – as for Sakaki-kun, hehehe,” Zekiguchi Nashinori laughed enigmatically, “would you be upset, Yono, if I said that I… killed him?”
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“Usagawa Rinne-san is an existence more important than you are ever aware of. That’s why I’m putting her under my care – as for Sakaki-kun, hehehe,” Zekiguchi Nashinori laughed enigmatically, “would you be upset, Yono, if I said that I… killed him?”
   
 
Guriko’s sight instantly went red.
 
Guriko’s sight instantly went red.
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Her soft skin metamorphosed into red, carapace-like armor. The sharp claws at her fingertips extended out as if they were knives.
 
Her soft skin metamorphosed into red, carapace-like armor. The sharp claws at her fingertips extended out as if they were knives.
   
Apart from her arms, her legs, feet, shoulders, face, and even the color of her hair changed their appearance after sensing Guriko’s excitement and rage. Endless threads suddenly grew out of Guriko’s back with a whoosh, and instantly intertwined with each other and formed a pair of wings. As if she was an avenging witch, Guriko revealed her original form, the shape of a devil.
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Apart from her arms, her legs, feet, shoulders, face, and even the color of her hair changed their appearance after sensing Guriko’s excitement and rage. Endless threads suddenly grew out from Guriko’s back with a whoosh, and instantly intertwined with each other and formed a pair of wings. As if she was an avenging witch, Guriko revealed her original form, the shape of a devil.
   
“Oh – ” Zekiguchi opened his mouth as if he was about to make a joke, but he was too late. Guriko’s left arm, which had completed its transformation, instantly pierced his chest right through the middle. Right now, Guriko’s entire body was only full of power and the desire to destroy and to kill. What was left of her humanity had been completely eroded away, and all that was left was the evil parts full of destruction.
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“Oh – ” Zekiguchi opened his mouth as if he was about to make a joke, but he was too late. Guriko’s left arm, which had completed its transformation, instantly pierced his chest right through the middle. Right now, Guriko’s entire body was only full of power and the desire to destroy and to kill. What was left of her humanity had been completely eroded away, and all that was left was the evil parts of full of destruction.
   
 
Apples, which immortals such as Guriko use as the source of their supernatural powers, otherwise known as the Fragment, were contained in their hearts.
 
Apples, which immortals such as Guriko use as the source of their supernatural powers, otherwise known as the Fragment, were contained in their hearts.
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“Ohoho, dangerous.”
 
“Ohoho, dangerous.”
   
He laughed casually and jumped backwards, ignoring the giant wound in his chest, creating some distance between him and Guriko. Although his blood and flesh flew everywhere, Zekiguchi was not dead. The man with wolf-like eyes was so happy for some reason – he showed a happy expression as if he was playing with children.
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He laughed casually and jumped backwards, ignoring of the giant wound on his chest, creating some distance between him and Guriko. Although his blood and flesh flew everywhere, Zekiguchi was not dead. The man with wolf-like eyes was so happy for some reason – he showed a happy expression as if he was playing with children.
   
“Yono, you didn’t change at all. You could kill without any hesitation. But what a pity. My ability is the alteration of the flesh, so the location of my heart could be anywhere.”
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“Yono, you didn’t change at all. You could kill without any hesitation. But what a pity. My ability was the alteration of the flesh, so the location of my heart could be anywhere.”
   
 
“Then – I will completely cut you up.”
 
“Then – I will completely cut you up.”
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If she can get rid of all these problems, then she can experience those happy times again.
 
If she can get rid of all these problems, then she can experience those happy times again.
   
Guriko fought as she held onto only these expectations. No matter how despairing it was, she should be able to get there as long as she reached out.
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Guriko fought as she held onto only these expectations. No matter how despairing it is, she should be able to get there as long as she reaches out.
   
 
“Hehehehe, how annoying. Don’t get so seriously angry, Yono. No more jokes. Sakaki-kun isn’t dead – oh!”
 
“Hehehehe, how annoying. Don’t get so seriously angry, Yono. No more jokes. Sakaki-kun isn’t dead – oh!”
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This was suddenly heard beside them.
 
This was suddenly heard beside them.
   
It was the astonishing woman who had just dodged a fatal blow as she fought Mina, Mitsuki, and Kajiri all at the same time. It was {{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}}.
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It was the astonishing woman who had just dodged a fatal blow as she fought Mina, Mitsuki, and Kajiri at the same time. It was {{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}}.
   
 
She arrived next to Guriko and Zekiguchi in their one-on-one fight, and looked up towards Zekiguchi, who was flying in the sky. She smiled with one side of her mouth tilted.
 
She arrived next to Guriko and Zekiguchi in their one-on-one fight, and looked up towards Zekiguchi, who was flying in the sky. She smiled with one side of her mouth tilted.
   
“This weakling is almost dead. Since he is already wounded, then go completely destroy him. If he fell once, then he will fall again. This is how the world is – fall all the way to Hell!”
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“This weakling is almost dead. Since he is already wounded, then go completely destroy him. If he falls once, then he will fall again. This is how the world is – fall all the way to Hell!”
   
 
With a whoosh, her fingertips, clad in black gloves, moved downwards as if in command.
 
With a whoosh, her fingertips, clad in black gloves, moved downwards as if in command.
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A confused sound came from the center of the school. It was Rinne, who was confused and had yet to wake up.
 
A confused sound came from the center of the school. It was Rinne, who was confused and had yet to wake up.
   
At the last moment, before Zekiguchi was blown to smithereens, his right hand extended at an astonishing speed as if it was a snake or a whip, and wrapped tightly around Rinne and Breaksun, with the latter sleeping on Rinne's knees.
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At the last moment, before Zekiguchi was blown to smithereens, his right hand extended at an astonishing speed as if it was a snake or a whip, and wrapped tightly around Rinne and Breaksun, who slept on her knees.
   
 
"Wah - " The two of them were wrapped up together and thrown violently towards the school building.
 
"Wah - " The two of them were wrapped up together and thrown violently towards the school building.
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Moreover, no matter what kind of a form {{Furigana|The Weakest|Ultimate Shield}} changes into, or what kind of invisible walls of defence {{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}} could build with her manipulation of space, {{Furigana|Annihilation Mist|Genocide Justice}} could pierce them all and attack the opponent directly.
 
Moreover, no matter what kind of a form {{Furigana|The Weakest|Ultimate Shield}} changes into, or what kind of invisible walls of defence {{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}} could build with her manipulation of space, {{Furigana|Annihilation Mist|Genocide Justice}} could pierce them all and attack the opponent directly.
   
Due to her ability, even immortals cannot recover from the wounds she dealt out.
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Due to her ability, even immortals cannot recover from the wounds she deals out.
   
 
Sterilization Disinfection was fighting against {{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}}.
 
Sterilization Disinfection was fighting against {{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}}.
   
{{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}} determined the positions beneficial to her according to her power to control space, and dodged attacks as she used her ability to impact space to counter-attack. Whereas Unpleasant Counter-Current - Mitsuki - was helping by reflecting back {{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}}'s Crushing Space through her own powers of retribution, putting {{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}} into a situation where she could not fight back.
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{{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}} determined the positions beneficial to her according to her power to control space, and dodged attacks as she used her ability to impact space to counter attack. Whereas Unpleasant Counter-Current - Mitsuki - was helping by reflecting back {{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}}'s Crushing Space through her own powers of retribution, putting {{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}} into a situation where she could not fight back.
   
 
"Rinne!"
 
"Rinne!"
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Before Kajiri's eyes, {{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}}, Guriko, Mitsuki, and Mina - who lagged behind somewhat - also hurried that way.
 
Before Kajiri's eyes, {{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}}, Guriko, Mitsuki, and Mina - who lagged behind somewhat - also hurried that way.
   
Although {{Furigana|The Weakest|Ultimate Shield}} was killed, Kajiri still had a lingering sense of unease. Even though he exploded into smithereens, his heart might not even have been in that body, and therefore they could not be sure whether they defeated Zekiguchi.
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Although {{Furigana|The Weakest|Ultimate Shield}} was killed, Kajiri still had a lingering sense of unease. Even though he exploded into smithereens, his heart might even have been in that body, and therefore they could not be sure whether they defeated Zekiguchi.
   
 
Compared to that - he must take back Breaksun.
 
Compared to that - he must take back Breaksun.
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{{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}} - Sakaki Joker - galloped in the corridors and rapidly leapt up stairs. Although she had the body of an immortal and should not feel sensations such as fatigue, she suddenly found that her mind would not calm down for some reason, and felt a little exhausted.
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{{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}} - Sakaki Joker - galloped in the corridors and rapidly leapt up stairs. Although she had the body of an immortal and should not feel sensations such as tiredness, she suddenly found that her mind would not calm down for some reason, and felt a little exhausted.
   
But she only needed to strive for a little longer. She could go back to her previous peaceful and quiet existence after she retrieved "Lovesong". She was willing to make any kind of sacrifices for that.
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But she only needed to strive for a little longer. She could go back to her previous peaceful and quiet time after she retrieved "Lovesong". She was willing to make any kind of sacrifices for that.
   
 
"There - "
 
"There - "
   
Breaksun, whom Zekiguchi used the last of his strength to throw away, flew into the third floor of the school building, and rolled into the corridor after breaking through the windows. She was lying in the middle of shattered pieces of glass, an image of a sleeping beauty slumbering in the middle of that sea of glass, which sparkled as it reflected the moonlight.
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Breaksun, whom Zekiguchi used the last of his strength to throw away, flew into the third storey of the school building, and rolled into the corridor after breaking through the windows. She was lying in the middle of shattered pieces of glass, an image of a sleeping beauty slumbering in the middle of that sea of glass, which sparkled as if reflected the moonlight.
   
 
There should be someone else as well. That other girl, whom no one seemed to recognize, should be here as well, but she was gone.
 
There should be someone else as well. That other girl, whom no one seemed to recognize, should be here as well, but she was gone.
   
Did she flew into another floor?
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Did she flew into another storey?
   
 
She had always focused her attention on Breaksun and did not notice what happened to the others. If she fully expanded her power to manipulate space, then she should discover the other girl without physically going elsewhere to look for her. However, her enemies were catching up behind her. There was no need to waste the power of her Fragment in this situation. She needed to secure Breaksun first. Joker took the girl up in her arms and sighed deeply.
 
She had always focused her attention on Breaksun and did not notice what happened to the others. If she fully expanded her power to manipulate space, then she should discover the other girl without physically going elsewhere to look for her. However, her enemies were catching up behind her. There was no need to waste the power of her Fragment in this situation. She needed to secure Breaksun first. Joker took the girl up in her arms and sighed deeply.
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"Damn it!"
 
"Damn it!"
   
As {{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}}'s power was to manipulate space, all the air around her started to shiver, and all the windows and walls started to shake. As she considered that someone plotted against her, Joker roared again: "Damn it! This cunning {{Furigana|The Weakest|Ultimate Shield}}! Damn him!!" She hugged Breaksun and started to use her body's ability to control space to decipher the situation. Although she immediately understood that this was the worst population - she still had to check if the other was not simply fainted. No, her heart was dug out. Breaksun Hanselmine was already dead.
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As {{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}}'s power was to manipulate space, all the air around her started to shiver, and all the windows and walls started to shake. As she considered that someone plotted against her, Joker roared again: "Damn it! This cunning {{Furigana|The Weakest|Ultimate Shield}}! Damn him!!" She hugged Breaksun and started to use her body's ability to control space to decipher the situation. Although she immediately understood that this was the worst population - she still had to check if the other was not simply fainted. No her heart was dug out. Breaksun Hanselmine was already dead.
   
 
Joker's face and body immediately paled into a waxen color.
 
Joker's face and body immediately paled into a waxen color.
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She threw Breaksun's body on the ground and yelled with rage. This corpse had no use to her.
 
She threw Breaksun's body on the ground and yelled with rage. This corpse had no use to her.
   
Joker liked Breaksun's voice and personality, but their relationship wasn't so close as to mourn for her death.
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Joker liked her voice and personality, but their relationship wasn't so close as to mourn for her death.
   
Moreover, Joker's body, which was completely controlled by rage due to not having fulfilled her goal, absolutely had no place to maintain sorrow.
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Moreover, this body, which was completely controlled by rage due to not having fulfilled her goal, absolutely had no place to maintain sorrow.
   
Joker's goal was only 'Lovesong' - Breaksun's heart. It was the storage facility of Fragments, which was modified by {{Furigana|The Weakest|Ultimate Shield}}, and could suppress the flow of energy to the ultimate degree.
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Joker's goal was only 'Lovesong' - that is, Breaksun's heart. It was the storage facility of Fragments, which was modified by {{Furigana|The Weakest|Ultimate Shield}}, and could suppress to the ultimate degree the flow of energy.
   
The previous reincarnation of {{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}} and the one before him - no, all the Fragments that {{Furigana|The Weakest|Ultimate Shield}} and God Mushi Emperor had ever collected from all over the world were kept within 'Lovesong', all the way since the beginning. It was a Greater Fragment with an extraordinary density. If that unbelievable source of power can become Joker's own, then she would instantly heal no matter how great a wound she suffered. She should also be able to approach an state of immortality, close to eternity. It would almost be appropriate to call such an existence 'God' - there will be no more fear for her on this world, and she would become an almost omnipotent and undefeatable existence. The problem was that, should she implant a Fragment of such high density into herself, she didn't know if her body would be able to handle that. But she learnt of a method while she was experimenting in the Eternity Institute -
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The previous reincarnation of {{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}} and the one before him - no, , all the Fragments that {{Furigana|The Weakest|Ultimate Shield}} and God Mushi Emperor collected from all over the world were kept within 'Lovesong' all the way from the beginning, and it was a Greater Fragment with an extraordinary density. If that unbelievable source of power can become her own, then she would instantly heal no matter how great a wound she suffered. She should also be able to approach an state of immortality, close to eternity. It would almost be appropriate to call such an existence 'God' - there will be no more fear for her on this world, and she would become an almost omnipotent and undefeatable existence. The problem was that, should she implant a Fragment of such high density into herself, she didn't know if her body would be able to handle that. But she learnt of a method while she was experimenting in the Eternity Institute -
   
 
"Where is it..."
 
"Where is it..."
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Then exactly who took it away?
 
Then exactly who took it away?
   
Thanks to {{Furigana|The Weakest|Ultimate Shield}}'s manipulation of the flesh, combined with Breaksun's ability to corrode cause and effect, her own aura was suppressed and people should not be able to sense its great power.
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Thanks to {{Furigana|The Weakest|Ultimate Shield}}'s manipulation of the flesh, Breaksun's ability to corrode cause and effect could suppress her own aura, and people should not be able to sense.
   
 
The killer should be to someone with the Fragment. But who would it be? {{Furigana|The Weakest|Ultimate Shield}} was already dead, and Sterilization Disinfection's party had not arrived.
 
The killer should be to someone with the Fragment. But who would it be? {{Furigana|The Weakest|Ultimate Shield}} was already dead, and Sterilization Disinfection's party had not arrived.
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She felt something flying rapidly towards her.
 
She felt something flying rapidly towards her.
   
It was a circular piece of cutlery sparkling with a silver light - a spoon. Its speed was very rapid, and its power was proportional to it.
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It was a circular cutlery sparkling with a silver light - a spoon. The speed was very rapid, and its power was proportional to it.
   
 
However, no matter what might be thrown at her, this kind of physical attack was impossible to damage her, who can manipulate the air.
 
However, no matter what might be thrown at her, this kind of physical attack was impossible to damage her, who can manipulate the air.
   
The spoon came into contact with the air around Joker before it touched her, and bounced off in another direction.
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The spoons came into contact with the air around Joker before it touched her, and were bounced off in another direction.
   
It then flew back towards the direction where it was thrown.
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They then flew back towards the direction where they were thrown.
   
 
"..."
 
"..."
   
Those people caught up with her, and she was being very anxious herself - what a bother.
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They caught up with her, and she was being very anxious herself - what a bother.
   
Some people jumped up from the stairway in the depth of the dim corridor. Her enemies - Gankyū Eguriko, Nikuyama Kajiri, Saibara Mina, and Saibara Mitsuki - appeared before her. It was a four-on-one situation, but she did not feel ill at ease, only a sense of being bother. ''It was such a bother'' - that was what Joker thought.
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Some people jumped up from the stairway in the depth of the dim corridor. Her enemies - Gankyū Eguriko, Nikuyama Kajiri, Saibara Mina, and Saibara Mitsuba - appeared before her. It was a four-on-one situation, but she did not feel ill at ease, but only bothersome. It was such a bother - that was what Joker thought.
   
 
"{{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}}, return Breaksun to me!"
 
"{{Furigana|Tear Song|Melodia Noise}}, return Breaksun to me!"
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Her feet shook and her throat felt dry. Many parts of her body was showing signs of fear. "Huff - " She took a deep breath to calm herself down.
 
Her feet shook and her throat felt dry. Many parts of her body was showing signs of fear. "Huff - " She took a deep breath to calm herself down.
   
" - Ha..." The gap between her and her enemies were getting smaller and smaller. This battle was very important for her, and it was the beginning of making everything better. Everything will be decided by the duel that was being initiated.
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" - Ha..." The gap between her and her enemies were getting smaller and smaller. This was very important for her, and the beginning of making everything better. Everything will be decided by the duel that was being initiated.
   
 
She had no intentions of losing. She will kill them all.
 
She had no intentions of losing. She will kill them all.
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She was prepared to use Crushing Space to fight them and prevent them from attacking her, but surprisingly no one attacked her. While she was being puzzled, Mina slammed into the ground and her blood flew everywhere.
 
She was prepared to use Crushing Space to fight them and prevent them from attacking her, but surprisingly no one attacked her. While she was being puzzled, Mina slammed into the ground and her blood flew everywhere.
   
''Mmm. Even if Mina isn't dead, she shouldn't be able to move for a while. That way, one of them wouldn't be able to fight. Not bad.'' As Joker thought this, she looked sideways at the remaining three with her blue eyes, which were shimmering with a cold light.
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Mmm. Even if Mina wasn't dead, she shouldn't be able to move for a while. That way, one of them wouldn't be able to fight. Not bad. As Joker thought this, she looked sideways at the remaining three with her blue eyes, shimmering with a cold light.
   
 
"-- Petrify!"
 
"-- Petrify!"
   
It was Mitsuki's body that stiffened this time. Even her gloves, which could reflect all malicious attacks, had no effect on Joker's ability. ''Why didn't Mitsuki attack me? She also did not have a posture of defense.''
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It was Mitsuki's body that stiffened this time. Even her gloves, which could reflect all malicious attacks, had no effect on Joker's ability. Why didn't she attack? She also did not have a posture of defence.
   
 
"What - what is this? No way. I don't want this!"
 
"What - what is this? No way. I don't want this!"
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"Where am I!? Where is anybody? Ahhhhhh!"
 
"Where am I!? Where is anybody? Ahhhhhh!"
   
She was then tossed outside of the building just like her older sister.
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She was then tossed outside of the building just like her elder sister.
   
''See - it was easy.''
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See - it was easy.
   
 
Mitsuki's body flew out of the window and landed with a bump. She rolled and bounced off the ground, then remained still in a puddle of blood.
 
Mitsuki's body flew out of the window and landed with a bump. She rolled and bounced off the ground, then remained still in a puddle of blood.

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