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"What - what is this? No way. I don't want this!"
 
"What - what is this? No way. I don't want this!"
   
Mitsuki shook her head and stretched her hands out in a panic as she screamed: "I can't see anything! I can't hear anything - I can't even feel anything with my skin. Ahhh. Where am I?"
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Mina shook her head and stretched her hands out in a panic as she screamed: "I can't see anything! I can't hear anything - I can't even feel anything with my skin. Ahhh. Where am I?"
   
Mitsuki was shaking badly and sank into a state of panic.
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Mina was shaking badly and sank into a state of panic.
   
 
"Where am I!? Where is anybody? Ahhhhhh!"
 
"Where am I!? Where is anybody? Ahhhhhh!"
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''See - it was easy.''
 
''See - it was easy.''
   
Mitsuki's body flew out of the window and landed with a bump. She rolled and bounced off the ground, then remained still in a puddle of blood.
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Mina's body flew out of the window and landed with a bump. She rolled and bounced off the ground, then remained still in a puddle of blood.
   
   

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