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=== Part 1 ===
 
=== Part 1 ===
   
There was a group consisting solely of women who lived inside the ‘black forest’ that extended till the remote borders.
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There was a group consisting solely of women, who lived inside the ‘black forest’ that extended till the remote borders.
   
People called them ‘witches’. In other words, they were beings with different and special abilities.
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People called them ‘witches’. In other words, they were beings with different abilities.
   
From the perspective of humans that believed in the one absolute god, who ruled over the overwhelming majority of people, it was clear that witches, who worshipped the protection of hundreds of divine beings, were heretics. For that reason the witches were detested and feared. While feeling fear toward the witches, they also held feelings of envy and jealousy against those who possessed special abilities, unlike them.
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From the perspective of humans that believed in the one absolute god, who ruled over the overwhelming majority of people, it was clear that witches who worshipped the protection of hundreds of divine beings were heretics. For that reason the witches were detested and feared. While feeling fear toward the witches, they held feelings of envy and jealousy against those who possessed special abilities, unlike them.
   
Certainly, not being compatible they continued to fight each other for a long time.
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Certainly, not being compatible with each other, they continued to fight each other for a long time.
   
Witches, who were once proud of numerous comrades, as well as holding the power capable to influence the world, were now declining in number. It seemed as though they were slowly walking along the path of their destruction. While aware of their inferior position, they wouldn’t try looking for any fights. Nevertheless, were their territory to be invaded , they wouldn’t hesitate to fight, even if it meant for their households to decline.
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Witches, who were once proud of numerous comrades, as well as holding the power capable to influence the world, were now declining in number. It seemed as though they were slowly walking along their path of destruction. While aware of their inferior position, they wouldn’t try looking for any fights. Nevertheless, were their territory to be invaded , they wouldn’t hesitate to fight, even if it meant for their household to decline.
   
Because the frequency in the resistance against witches lowered for a while, many of them could live peacefully in a place far away from cities. However, it was only temporary due to the conflicts between fellow human countries that had increased.
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Because the frequency in the resistance against witches lowered for a while, many of them could live peacefully in a place far away from the city. However, it was only temporary due to the conflict between fellow human countries that had increased.
   
Once the great war, which involved many countries and numerous lives concluded, their eyes would return to the witches. It was just the natural course of action for the statesmen of the countries, which surrounded the land of witches, to consider their extermination.
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Once the great war, which involved many countries and numerous lives concluded, their eyes would return to the witches. It was just the natural course of action for the statesmen of the countries, which surrounded the land of witches, to consider the extermination of them.
   
 
The surrounding countries were now preparing for the extermination of witches.
 
The surrounding countries were now preparing for the extermination of witches.
   
While the Church, under the pretext of sweeping witches from this world, supported the assault on them by each country, they schemed the plan of assassination of the leader of the witches by sending assassins.
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While the church, under the pretext of sweeping witches from this world, supported the assault on them by each country, they schemed the plan of assassination of the leader of the witches by sending assassins.
   
Despite such actions taking place, the conflicts between vassals and feudal lords for authority wouldn’t cease.
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Despite such actions taking place, the conflict between vassals and feudal lords for authority wouldn’t cease.
   
There were often times when the conflicts would grow on a national scale, resulting in a new war.
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There were often times when the conflict would grow on a national scale, resulting in a new war.
   
While the conflicts between fellow humans continued, they would still manage to steadily reduce the territory of the witches.
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While the conflict between fellow humans continued, they would still manage to steadily reduce the territory of the witches.
   
Despite the witches having high combat abilities, it was next to impossible for them to battle against hundreds and thousands of deployed units. As a result, while killing a huge number of the enemy’s forces, they would end up carrying out a tactical retreat without gaining a single victory.
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Despite the witches having high combat abilities, it was next to impossible for them to battle against hundreds and thousands of deployed units. As a result, while killing a huge number of the enemy’s forces, they would end up carrying out a tactical retreat without gaining a victory.
   
 
In the end, the vicious cycle of hatred from humans continued together with losing territory and comrades..
 
In the end, the vicious cycle of hatred from humans continued together with losing territory and comrades..
   
Even now, witches were followed by the chain of defeats.
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Even now witches were followed by the chain of defeats.
   
It seemed as though, there was no peaceful place for them left in this world.
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It seemed as though, there was no peaceful place for them in this world.
   
 
=== Part 2 ===
 
=== Part 2 ===

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