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There were several groups among witches.
 
There were several groups among witches.
   
If presently described, these groups were close to the concept of ‘a clan’ . Several of these clans gathered and formed a loose alliance, which was pointed out and referred to by the humans as ‘the Country of Witches’.
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If presently described, these groups were close to the concept of ‘a clan’ . Several of these clans gathered and formed a loose alliance, which was pointed out and referred by the humans as ‘the country of witches’.
   
 
There were no men among their clans, as it consisted only of women, who were born as witches with special abilities. Witches wouldn’t add anyone besides those they considered as witches. Therefore, it was also known as the country of women.
 
There were no men among their clans, as it consisted only of women, who were born as witches with special abilities. Witches wouldn’t add anyone besides those they considered as witches. Therefore, it was also known as the country of women.
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Her household built a residence deep inside the black forest.
 
Her household built a residence deep inside the black forest.
   
Apart from Harrigan, there were several other clans of witches who settled inside the black forest, nevertheless, hers used to be an influential one.
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Apart from Harrigan, there were several other clans of witches ,who settled inside the black forest, nevertheless, hers used to be an influential one.
   
 
That’s right, it ‘used to be’ influential.
 
That’s right, it ‘used to be’ influential.
   
Due to their topographical location, they would be the first to be on the frontline, resulting in the decline of her clan. And once it declined, it was inevitable for them to lose their authority as a result. Because of that, Harrigan deeply suffered that loss as the leader.
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Due to their topographical location, they would be the first to be on the frontline, resulting in the decline of her clan. And once it declined, it was inevitable for them to lose their authority as a result. Because of that, Harrigan deeply suffered that lost as the leader.
   
 
While worrying about the future of her family, she immersed herself inside the open air bath made from the welling hot spring, which was located in the hilly area, inside the forest.
 
While worrying about the future of her family, she immersed herself inside the open air bath made from the welling hot spring, which was located in the hilly area, inside the forest.
   
The bath house was a simple wooden arbor-styled one built in the free area, which was cutting through the loosely sloping land made from the small hills.
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The bath house was a simplistic wooden-made arbor-styled one built in the free area, which was cutting through the loosely sloping land made from the small hills.
   
 
In the center of the bath house, which was transparent from 3 sides, a long and narrow wooden-made bathtub was placed on the wooden floor. The hot water, which pumped from the gushing source nearby, filled the bathtub as usual.
 
In the center of the bath house, which was transparent from 3 sides, a long and narrow wooden-made bathtub was placed on the wooden floor. The hot water, which pumped from the gushing source nearby, filled the bathtub as usual.
   
Inside the bathtub filled with hot water, which gave out a little bit of a sulphurous odour, laid Harrigan with her graceful limbs.
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Inside the bathtub filled with hot water, which gave out a little bit of sulphurous odour, laid Harrigan with her graceful limbs.
   
What attracted one’s attention from Harrigan’s body, which was nakedly submerged inside the tub, was her blueish-black long hair, her bulging chest, the tight waist and her big buttocks. Indeed, one could say it was the figure of a full-fledged woman. The sign of her femininity was also seen between her groin, which was thickly covered with black bush.
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What attracted one’s attention from Harrigan’s body, which was nakedly submerged inside the tub, was her blueish-black long hair, her bulging chest, the tight waist and her big buttocks. Indeed, one could say it was the figure of a full-fledged woman. The sign of her femininity was also seen between her groins, which was thickly covered with black bush.
   
 
Harrigan, who remained submerged inside the bathtub, stretched her limbs, and let out a small sigh, which she could care less whether it was heard or not.
 
Harrigan, who remained submerged inside the bathtub, stretched her limbs, and let out a small sigh, which she could care less whether it was heard or not.
   
How should we reach an agreement with the humans? Or should we completely abandon that idea? Harrigan thought about it. Nevertheless, however much she would ponder about it, there was no sign for the future prospects, nor any hope for a better future…
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How should we reach an agreement with humans? Or should we completely abandon that idea? Harrigan thought about it. Nevertheless, however much she would ponder about that, there was no sign for the future prospects, nor any hope for a better future…
   
 
Should she just wait calmly for their slow annihilation?
 
Should she just wait calmly for their slow annihilation?
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On the one side of the bath house, there was a small undressing room, nevertheless, the three remaining were transparent with no walls, despite there being beams. Because of that, Harrigan was able to look out over the surrounding.
 
On the one side of the bath house, there was a small undressing room, nevertheless, the three remaining were transparent with no walls, despite there being beams. Because of that, Harrigan was able to look out over the surrounding.
   
Looking down from the hill, there was a thickly green virgin forest, which was receiving the dazzling sunrays of the early summer, extending beneath one’s eyes. On the other side, where the virgin forest, also called by people 'the black forest', ended, was a stretched land inhabited by humans. The land ruled by humans was wide and in comparison with the territory of the witches had a larger population. In addition to that, the land governed by witches was gradually reducing together with their population.
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Looking down from the hill, there was a thickly green virgin forest, which was receiving the dazzling sunray of the early summer, extending beneath one’s eyes. On the other side, where the virgin forest, also called by people 'the black forest', ended, there was a stretched land inhabited by humans. The land ruled by humans was wide and in comparison with the one of witches, it had a larger population. In addition to that, the land governed by witches was gradually reducing together with their population.
   
(Whether we fight or not, is it extinction that awaits us? Or is this perhaps fate? If so, then fighting magnificently and vanishing in the same way should be a brief entertainment…no.)
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(Whether we fight or not, is it extinction that await us? Or perhaps fate? If so, then fighting magnificently and vanishing in the same way should be a brief entertainment…no.)
   
 
Harrigan looked at the young witch next to her.
 
Harrigan looked at the young witch next to her.
   
(Fighting recklessly will only result in the deaths of my daughters. It would still be better for me alone, but taking along these daughters, there’s no way for that.)
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(Fighting recklessly will only result in the death of my daughters. It would still be better for me alone, but taking along these daughters, there’s no way for that.)
   
 
"Yuuki."
 
"Yuuki."
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"What’s the matter, Harrigan-nee?"
 
"What’s the matter, Harrigan-nee?"
   
Despite the girl calling her ‘Sis’, they were not actual sisters. Following their customs, the young witches would address Harrigan, who was their leader, such as Ane-sama, Aneue, Nee. On the other hand, Harrigan would call the young witches, and at the same time the members of her household, as her daughters very often.
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Despit the girl calling her by ‘Sis’, they were not actual sisters. Following their customs, the young witches would call Harrigan, who was their leader, such as Ane-sama, Aneue, Nee. On the other hand, Harrigan would call the young witches, and at the same time the members of this household, as her daughters’ very often.
   
 
Harrigan beckoned the witch.
 
Harrigan beckoned the witch.
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The wooden-made bathtub was big, so even if both of them entered, it wouldn’t be that tight.
 
The wooden-made bathtub was big, so even if both of them entered, it wouldn’t be that tight.
   
"Is it alright? It seemed like you were immersed in your thoughts, so won’t I become a bother?"
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"Is it fine? It seemed like you were immersed in your thoughts, so won’t I become a bother?"
   
"It’s fine, it’s fine. Come"
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"That’s fine, that’s fine. Come"
   
"Well then, pardon me."
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"Well then, sorry for my rudeness."
   
 
The girl stood up, taking off her clothes and becoming nude.
 
The girl stood up, taking off her clothes and becoming nude.
   
Her pair of chest hills were neither small nor big, they were of a beautiful size and shape, suitable for her age. The tips of her breasts were a cute pink color, her shoulders width was narrow, her bottom’s overhang was a bit moderate and her groin area’s shade was dim. In contrast to Harrigan, she had a more girlish figure.
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Her pair of chest hills were neither small nor big, they were of the beautiful size and shape, suitable at her age. The tips of her breasts were of cute pink color, her shoulders width was narrow, her bottom’s overhang was a bit moderate, her groins area’s shade was dim. In contrast to Harrigan, she had more girlish figure.
   
What caught one's attention was her long shining hair tied up into two ponytails. This too, contrasted with Harrigan’s bluish black hair.
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What caught the attention was her long shining hair tied up into two ponytails. This too, was contrasting to Harrigan’s bluish black hair.
   
 
The girl named Yuuki stepped in with her leg without any restraint and sat in the corner.
 
The girl named Yuuki stepped in with her leg without any restraint and sat in the corner.
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"Don’t just sit there in the corner. Hey, come here."
 
"Don’t just sit there in the corner. Hey, come here."
   
Raising her upper body, Harrigan stretched out her right arm and reached over to Yuuki, pulling her closer. She followed straight away without showing any resistance
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Raising her upper body, Harrigan stretched out her right arm and reached Yuuki’s only to pull her toward herself. She followed straight away without showing any resistance
   
 
Making her sit inside the area of Harrigan’s stretched legs, Harrigan wrapped Yuuki’s two chest hills with both of her palms.
 
Making her sit inside the area of Harrigan’s stretched legs, Harrigan wrapped Yuuki’s two chest hills with both of her palms.
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"No…sto…. ahn."
 
"No…sto…. ahn."
   
(I want to give these daughters a future. I want them to have hope. This is as well, a part of my duty as the head of this family. But, just what can I do…?)
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(I want to give these daughters a future. I want them to have hope. This is as well the part of my duty, me who is the head of this family. But, just what can I do…?)
   
 
While contemplating about that, she gently moved both of her palms.
 
While contemplating about that, she gently moved both of her palms.
   
Nevertheless, however hard she pondered, there were no ideas which would break this deadlock crossing her mind.
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Nevertheless, however hard she pondered, there was no idea, which would break in the deadlock, crossing her mind.
   
 
"Ha…Harri-nee…I can’t take it anymore… aah.."
 
"Ha…Harri-nee…I can’t take it anymore… aah.."
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Having a red face, Yuuki, who felt her body had lost its strength, entrusted her back on Harrigan’s chest.
 
Having a red face, Yuuki, who felt her body had lost its strength, entrusted her back on Harrigan’s chest.
   
(Fumu. But, what should I do? I don’t want to sacrifice these cute daughters of mine, but…despite saying so, without fighting we will be eventually driven away from this place. Once that happens, we will go further into the depths of the forest, ending in the world of only humans. Wouldn’t that be the same as our extinction?)
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(Fumu. But, what should I do? I don’t want to sacrifice this cute daughters of mine, but…despite saying so, without fighting we will be eventually driven away from this place. Once this happens, we will go further into the depth of the forest, ending in the world of only humans. Wouldn’t that be the same as falling into ruin?)
   
 
Feeling Yuuki’s body on her chest, she looked up into the space with her thoughtful face.
 
Feeling Yuuki’s body on her chest, she looked up into the space with her thoughtful face.
   
Suddenly, the bath-house shook.
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Suddenly, the bath house shook.
   
 
The space distorted in a swaying manner.
 
The space distorted in a swaying manner.
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Before one could notice, the sky was covered with dark clouds.
 
Before one could notice, the sky was covered with dark clouds.
   
(What’s going on!? Just a while ago, it was a clear blue sky!)
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(What’s going on!? Just a while ago, it was a clear blue sky expanding!)
   
Harrigan could sense that something unusual was happening. Regardless, she couldn’t tell what it was.
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Harrigan could sense that something unusual was happening. Nevertheless, she couldn’t tell what it was.
   
Suddenly raindrops began to hit the roof of the bath house.
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Suddenly the raindrops began to hit the roof of the bath house.
   
The falling rain, changed at once into a heavy downpour, Thunder and lightning were running through the sky, which was now as dim as if it were dusk.
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The falling rain, changed at once into a heavy rainfall, Thunders together with lightings were running through the sky, which was dim, like at the time of dusk.
   
"What’s with this heavy downpour!? Doesn’t it feel as though the bottom of the heavens fell out? Just what on earth… don’t tell me that this could be the sign of the water dragon manifesting?"
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"What’s this heavy downpour!? Doesn’t it feel as though the bottom of the heaven fell out? Just what an earth… don’t tell me that this could be the sign of the water dragon manifesting?"
   
Seeing the eerie sight, Harrigan’s body also began to tremble. She could understand that Yuuki was shaking as well from her back.
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Seeing the eerie sight, Harrigan’s body began to shake tremble as well. She could understand that Yuuki was shaking as well from her back.
   
 
Immediately after that, a voice was heard from somewhere.
 
Immediately after that, a voice was heard from somewhere.
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"≠◇▼£=★!?"
 
"≠◇▼£=★!?"
   
Even though there were only Yuuki and Harrigan, someone else’s voice was heard. Rather than hearing the voice, Harrigan wondered whether it was something echoing inside her mind. And then, it was the voice of a man. Hearing it, it was none other than a human man in the vicinity.
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Even though there were only Yuuki and Harrigan, someone else’s voice was heard. Rather than hearing the voice, Harrigan wondered whether it was something echoing inside her mind. And then, it was the voice of a man. Saying that, it was none other that a human man in the vicinity.
   
(Impossible, this shouldn’t even be possible.)
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(Impossible, this shouldn’t be even possible.)
   
Searching for the source of the voice, Harrigan looked with her eyes in all directions, however, she couldn’t find the figure nor feel its presence.
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Searching for the source of the voice, Harrigan run with her eyes in all the directions, however, she couldn’t find the figure nor feel its presence.
   
 
I was probably just seeing things – Harrigan nodded as if convincing herself.
 
I was probably just seeing things – Harrigan nodded as if convincing herself.
   
So as not to let any stray people or spies enter the village and the fortification, or rather, the residing territory of the witches, a barrier was put around the village. Here as well, it should not be possible for any common person to break through the barrier and pass into their territory. In addition to that, by covering their presence it shouldn’t let anyone approach this close, not even in a one in ten thousand, nevermind one in a million.
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So as not to let any stray people nor the spies enter the village and the fortification, or rather, the residing territory of the witches, a barrier was put around the village. Here as well, it should be not possible for any common person to break through the barrier and pass into their territory. In addition to that, by covering their presence it shouldn’t let anyone approach this close, not even one chance on ten thousand, but on a million chances.
   
However, there was a voice, certainly it was heard. It was neither a mistake nor one’s imagination.
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However, there was a voice. certainly it was heard. It was neither mishearing nor one’s imagination.
   
They couldn’t understand the meaning of the words, still, it was a powerful and high voice which reached their ears.
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They couldn’t understand the meaning of the words, nevertheless, it was a powerful and high voice,which reached their ears.
   
"There’s a m-man, a man. (trembling voice)"
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"There’s a m-man, a man. (trembled voice.)"
   
 
As the proof, Yuuki, the man-hater, lost her composure. Her sensitivity toward men is greater than anyone’s.
 
As the proof, Yuuki, the man-hater, lost her composure. Her sensitivity toward men is greater than anyone’s.
   
"Where, where is the man? (trembling)"
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"Where, where is the man? (trembled)"
   
Standing up while being completely naked, she looked to her left and right, and again at her right, moving her body and neck hurriedly.
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Standing up while being completely naked, she looked on her left and right, and again at her right, moving her body and neck hurriedly.
   
 
"Calm down Yuuki."
 
"Calm down Yuuki."
   
Despite Harrigan calling out to her, Yuuki turned her eyes and revolved with her body.
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Despite Harrigan calling out to her, Yuuki turned around her eyes and revolved with her body.
   
 
(Good grief, as expected, Yuuki’s hate for men is endless.)
 
(Good grief, as expected, Yuuki’s hate for men is endless.)
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Suddenly a man descended from the sky.
 
Suddenly a man descended from the sky.
   
Rather than descending the sky...more accurately, the man fell from the ceiling of the bath-house.
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Such way of saying wasn’t exact. More accurately, the man fell from the from the ceiling of the bath house.
   
The man dropped into the bathtub making the water splash.
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The descended man dropped into the bathtub making the water splashed.
   
 
"What!?"
 
"What!?"
   
Harrigan stared wide eyed.
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Harrigan opened widely her eyes.
   
 
The fallen man did the same.
 
The fallen man did the same.
   
"A man, a man, a man, a man."
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"A man a man man a man."
   
Yuuki too, was staring wide eyed and frozen.
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Yuuki too, opened widely her eyes and froze.
   
 
Harrigan had her attention caught by the man.
 
Harrigan had her attention caught by the man.
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[[Image:Naga01 002-003.jpg|175px|thumb]]
 
[[Image:Naga01 002-003.jpg|175px|thumb]]
   
It was a young man, wearing strange attire that she had never seen or heard of before.
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It was a young man, with an strange attire that she had never seen or heard of before.
   
The man looked up dumbfoundedly before soon coming back to himself. He moved his body timidly using his head.
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The man looked up dumbfoundedly in the midair, soon coming back to himself. He moved his body timidly using his head.
   
 
Harrigan’s sight and the man’s met each other.
 
Harrigan’s sight and the man’s met each other.
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"★◇?"
 
"★◇?"
   
The man responded to Harrigan using some sort of unknown language, as expected, she couldn’t understand anything.
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The man responded to Harrigan using some sort of language, nevertheless, she couldn’t understand anything.
   
(Hm? Could it be that my words don’t go through to him? These strange clothes, could he be a foreigner? If so, it doesn’t seem unreasonable, but…)
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(Hm? Could it be that my words doesn’t go through to him? These strange clothes, could he be a foreigner? If so, it doesn’t seem unreasonable, but…)
Regarding the unfamiliar clothes and language, if one were to think he’s a foreigner, one could only agree on that. Nevertheless, you couldn’t agree with the fact that someone appeared all of a sudden in a bath. There's no explanation for that.
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Regarding the unfamiliar clothes and language, if one were to think he’s a foreigner, one could only agree on that. Nevertheless, you couldn’t agree with the fact that someone appeared all of a sudden in a bath. There was no explanation for that.
   
 
As Harrigan observed him, the man raised his right hand and pointed at her.
 
As Harrigan observed him, the man raised his right hand and pointed at her.
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Harrigan frowned her eyebrows.
 
Harrigan frowned her eyebrows.
   
(I don’t understand at all what he’s saying. At least, it doesn’t seem like he’s an assassin sent to kill me by the Church.)
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(I don’t understand at all what he’s saying. At least, it doesn’t seem like he’s an assassin send to kill me by the church.)
   
 
Interpreting his words, the man said this
 
Interpreting his words, the man said this
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'''"Breasts! And they’re huge!"'''
 
'''"Breasts! And they’re huge!"'''
   
Being completely soaked, the man moved up to Harrigan.
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Being completely soaked, the man sidled up to Harrigan.
   
 
"W, w, w, what are you doing!?"
 
"W, w, w, what are you doing!?"
   
Being overwhelmed by the man’s vigorous attitude and look, Harrigan tried to step back, unfortunately, the edge of the bathtub was in her way.
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Being overwhelmed by the man’s vigorous attitude and look, Harrigan tried to step back, nevertheless, the edge of the bathtub was in her way.
   
 
[[Image:Naga01 041.jpg|175px|thumb]]
 
[[Image:Naga01 041.jpg|175px|thumb]]
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"Aah?"
 
"Aah?"
   
'''"I’ve never seen such a splendid pair of breasts!"'''
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'''"I’ve never seen such splendid pair of breasts!"'''
   
"Don’t grab them so forcefully!"
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"Don’t grab them that forcefully!"
   
'''"What size, what smoothness, what elasticity."'''
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'''"What a size, what a smoothness, what an elasticity."'''
   
 
"H.. hey, don’t just aah… grab a person’s aah… breasts at your own convenience aah!"
 
"H.. hey, don’t just aah… grab a person’s aah… breasts at your own convenience aah!"
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What entered her eyes, which looked down at her own feet, was a man with a mysterious hairstyle and wrapped in clothes that she had never seen before, using both of his hands to grab Harrigan’s voluptuous breasts. It was a dreadful scene.
 
What entered her eyes, which looked down at her own feet, was a man with a mysterious hairstyle and wrapped in clothes that she had never seen before, using both of his hands to grab Harrigan’s voluptuous breasts. It was a dreadful scene.
   
"A man, a man, a man is groping H-Ha-Harri-nee’s br…!?"
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"A man a man a man is groping H-Ha-Harri-nee’s br…!?"
   
 
Yuuki’s hair was squirming as its color became darker
 
Yuuki’s hair was squirming as its color became darker
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Whack.
 
Whack.
   
Harrigan’s hair gave out a dull sound as it knocked the back of Yuuki's head. Her neck folded diagonally.
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Harrigan’s hair gave out a dull sound as it knocked Yuuki’s back of head. Her neck folded diagonally.
   
With her eyes turning white, the girl lost consciousness and fell in a position, which resembled her upper body hooked on the edge of the bathtub.
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With her eyes turning white, the girl lost her consciousness and fell in a position, which resembled her upper body hooked on the edge of the bathtub.
   
'''"I’ll touch them, rub them, lick them, bury myself in them!"'''
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'''"I’ll touch them, rub them, lick them, bury in them!"'''
   
"I don’t know what you’re saying, but you calm down too!"
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"I don’t know what you’re saying, but you too calm down!"
   
 
Whaack!
 
Whaack!
   
Once again her bundled hair swung, hitting the man in the back of his head, from which the man’s eyes turned white. Its hardness was unbelievable for hair..
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Once again her bundled hair swung, hitting the man in the back of his head, from which the man’s eyes turned white. Its hardness was unbelievable for a hair..
   
Losing the power from his own body, the man released his hands from Harrigan’s chest and lost consciousness while falling on top of her body.
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Losing the power from his own body, the man released his hands from Harrigan’s chest and lost his consciousness while falling on the top of her body.
   
 
"Just what’s with this man?"
 
"Just what’s with this man?"
   
Harrigan muttered while gazing sternly at the exhausted young man with unusual looks and clothing, hanging on her body.
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Harrigan muttered while gazing sternly at the exhausted young man with an unusual clothing and look, hanging on her body.
   
"I’ve never heard the language that he spoke before, I wonder if he’s a foreigner… whether that’s the case or not, nobody should be able to break through my barrier without me noticing it. There shouldn't be anyone able to get this close without me noticing it. It would be a different case for a witch like me, but at least, not for any human living in this world. If so, does this mean that this guy came from another world? So he’s not a foreigner, but rather someone from a different world?"
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"I’ve never heard before the language that he speaks, I wonder if he’s a foreigner… whether that’s the case or not, nobody should be able of breaking through my barrier without me noticing it. There should be no one able to get this close without me noticing it. It would be a different case for a witch like me, but at least, not for any human living in this world. If so, does it means that this guy came form another world? So he’s not a foreigner, but rather someone from a different world?"
   
Harrigan slightly shifted her sight.
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Harrigan shifted slightly her sight.
   
Next to the man, the eyes of the naked Yuuki turned white as she lost consciousness.
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Next to the man, the eyes of the naked Yuuki turned white as she lost her consciousness.
   
(Good grief, I’ll leave the inquiry of this guy’s true identity for later. First, I’ll have to take care of Yuuki so that she doesn’t go berserk, as once she wakes up, she will try to kill this man. I don’t know who this guy is, so it’s more reason to not let Yuuki murder him. Assuming he’s really from another world….)
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(Good grief, I’ll leave the inquiry of this guy’s true identity for later. First, I’ll have to take care of Yuuki so that she doesn’t go berserk, as once she wakes up, she will try to kill this man. I don’t know who this guy is, so it’s more reason to not let Yuuki murder him. Assuming he’s really fell from another world….)
   
 
Once again Harrigan caught the man in her sight.
 
Once again Harrigan caught the man in her sight.
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A man wearing queer clothing.
 
A man wearing queer clothing.
   
A man whose words are unfamiliar.
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A man, whose words are unfamiliar.
   
 
A man that suddenly fell from the sky.
 
A man that suddenly fell from the sky.
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As Harrigan raised, she stared at the specialized weapon, which she took from the man’s waist.
 
As Harrigan raised, she stared at the specialized weapon, which she took from the man’s waist.
   
"It’s slightly curved. Indeed, this isn’t a shape one would see around here. It’s even different from the scimitar used in the eastern parts of this world. Interesting. Still, how do you pull this out? Could it be, like this?"
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"It’s slightly curved. Indeed, this isn’t a shape one would see in this vicinity. It’s even different from the scimitar used in the eastern part of this world. Interesting. Still, how do you pull this out? Could it be, like this?"
   
 
While Pulling out the man’s sword, Harrigan encountered some trouble.
 
While Pulling out the man’s sword, Harrigan encountered some trouble.
   
"It's out."
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"Its out."
   
 
She raised the blade, which was radiating in silver color, in front of her eyes.
 
She raised the blade, which was radiating in silver color, in front of her eyes.
   
"It’s quite heavy. The blade is too, thick. And it looks beautiful more than anything. It feels as though my sight is attracted by it…but, this isn’t the right moment to admire it. I’ve got to quickly deal with this guy and Yuuki."
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"It’s quite heavy. The blade is too, thick. And it looks beautiful more than anything. It feels as though my sight is attracted by it…but, it isn’t the right moment to admire. I’ve to deal quickly with this guy and Yuuki."
   
Once Harrigan put the sword back into its scabbard, she placed it casually on the wooden floor. After that, she turned around and walked toward the exit to open the door.
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Once Harrigan put back the sword into its scabbard, she placed it casually on the wooden floor. After that, she turned around and walked toward the exit to open the door.
   
Carrying a clothing basket, which was inside the small room, Harrigan returned to the bath-house. Once she kneeled down and put the basket on the floor, she curled up the clothes inside the basket, so as to grab them.
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Carrying a clothing basket, which was inside the small room, Harrigan returned to the bath house. Once she kneeled down and put the basket on the floor, she curled up the clothes inside the basket, so as to grab them.
   
 
Remaining in that posture, she used her index finger nail to cut a single string of her long hair.
 
Remaining in that posture, she used her index finger nail to cut a single string of her long hair.
   
As soon as she transferred her magic power into that string, it immediately became stiff and stretched out.
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As soon as she transferred her magic power into that string, it immediately became stiff and stretched straightforwardly.
   
 
Harrigan thrusted the clothes, which she held in her left hand, with the hair string that turned into a long needle. Once it pierced through, her clothes began to squirm like a living object.
 
Harrigan thrusted the clothes, which she held in her left hand, with the hair string that turned into a long needle. Once it pierced through, her clothes began to squirm like a living object.
   
Her wriggling clothes jumped off her hand and descended onto the bath floor, squirming while gradually changing its shape. Finally, it took the form of a human.
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Her wriggling clothes jumped off her hand and descended onto the bath floor, squirming while gradually changing its shape. Finally, it took the form of human.
   
 
"Your master Harrigan Halliway Haindora orders you. Go and call my daughters – Ais and Lela."
 
"Your master Harrigan Halliway Haindora orders you. Go and call my daughters – Ais and Lela."
   
Her clothes, which took the shape of a human, bowed down toward her, just like a human being. Then, it jumped out from the bath house.
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Her clothes, which took the shape of human, bowed down toward her, just like a human being. Then, it jumped out from the bath house.
   
 
=== Part 3 ===
 
=== Part 3 ===

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