Editing Ochitekita Ryuuou to Horobiyuku Majo no Kuni: Volume 1 Chapter 1

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=== Part 7 ===
 
=== Part 7 ===
   
The room to which Harrigan led was a study.
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The room to which Harrigan led was a study room.
   
There was a bookshelf together with lined up books inside the bedroom as well, but here, all four walls of the room were placed with high bookshelves packed with books. The room gave off the impression of being buried inside books.
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There was a bookshelf together with lined up books inside the bedroom as well, nevertheless, in this one, all the four walls were placed with high bookshelves, which were packed with books. The room gave out the impression of being buried inside books.
   
"You’re quite a reader, aren’t you? I Can’t even tell what kind of documents these are."
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"You’re quite a reader, aren’t you? I Can’t even tell what kind of documents this are."
   
 
"These are indispensable for magic research and development. Rather than that, sit."
 
"These are indispensable for magic research and development. Rather than that, sit."
   
The man, who stood next to a bookshelf while staring at the books, turned around.
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The man,who stood next to a bookshelf while staring at the document, turned around.
   
 
Sitting on the wooden stool, Harrigan waited for the man to sit.
 
Sitting on the wooden stool, Harrigan waited for the man to sit.
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"Because you’ve lost your memory, I’ll restrain from asking you personal questions. In exchange, I’m thinking of telling you more about us."
 
"Because you’ve lost your memory, I’ll restrain from asking you personal questions. In exchange, I’m thinking of telling you more about us."
   
"That would help a lot. I too, want to quickly learn about you and this world."
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"That would helps a lot. I too, want to learn fast about this world and you."
   
"I’ll explain that generally and briefly. There might be things, which you don’t understand, but leave the questions for later. Anyway for now just listen."
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"I’ll explain that generally and briefly. There might be things, which you don’t understand, but leave the questions for later. Anyway for not just listen."
   
"Yeah, got it. Well then I’ll entrust it to you."
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"Yeah, got that. Well then I’ll entrust you with that."
   
 
=== Part 8 ===
 
=== Part 8 ===

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