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=== Part 8 ===
 
=== Part 8 ===
   
"First, I’ll tell you more about the war between witches and humans. Just as I said, we are disdained and estranged by humans due to possessing unusual powers. While continuing to fight against the humans, we fell into decline, and it’s not just our household. Right now, the whole race of witches are on the decline. Witches are on the verge of dying out."
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"First, I’ll tell you more about the war between witches and humans. Just as I said, we are disdained and estranged by humans due to us possessing unusual powers. While continuing to fight against the humans, we fell into decline, and it’s not just our household. Right now, the whole race of witches are on decline. Our race is on the verge of dying."
   
"However, the biggest reason behind that is our numbers. If I were to say why, it’s because we lose our power once we give birth to children. It’s not like we will instantly lose our power, but certainly it’s a big issue due to that. That’s why, we can’t casually bear children. Once a witch diminishes in her magic power, the only job remaining for her is raising a child."
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"However, the biggest reason behind that is our number. If I were to say why, it’s because we lose our power once we give birth to children. It’s not like we will lose instantly our power, but certainly it’s a big damage to that. That’s why, we can’t casually bear children. Once a witch diminish in her magic power, the only job remaining for her is raising a child."
   
"The partner is a man, you see? they would be chosen at one’s own discretion. For us, the father doesn’t play a big role. Another problem is that the born child doesn’t necessarily possess the quality of a witch. That’s right, there’s no telling whether or not a child will house magic power. That’s why our numbers won’t increase."
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"The partner is a man, you see? they would be chosen at one’s own discretion. For us, the father doesn’t play a big role. Another problem is that the born child doesn’t necessarily possess the quality of a witch. That’s right, there’s no telling whether or not a child will house magic power. That’s why our number won’t increase."
   
"A long time ago, it was a bit better. A long time ago… that is when humans weren’t that many and the countries established by humans were not that strong. Back then, we were more powerful than now and there were people who would acknowledge us, nevertheless, the times have changed."
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"A long time ago, it was bit better. A long time ago… that is when humans weren’t that many and the countries established by humans were not that strong. Back then, we were more powerful than now and there were people who would acknowledge us, nevertheless, the time has changed."
   
"The people passed through the mountains, creating new and numerous cities. Even now they’re doing so. Agriculture developed and so did the number of harvests, which resulted in the natural growth of population. Then, the people expanded here and there, increasing the conflicts between both sides."
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"The people passed through the mountains, creating new and numerous cities. Even now they’re doing so. The agriculture developed and so the number of harvest, which resulted in natural growth of population. Then, the people expanded here and there, increasing the conflict between both sides."
   
"We also can’t forget about the Church’s expanding influence. In the first place, they’re our true enemy. The reason why there’s no compatibility between humans and witches is due to their influence. While considering us as heretics, they spread a doctrine about us being the ones that should be destroyed. The more they implemented their roots in this world, the more influence they had, making us the enemy of humans."
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"We too can’t forget about the church’s expanding influence. In the first place, they’re our true enemy. The reason why there’s no compatibility between humans and witches is due to their influence. While considering us as heretics, they spread about us being the ones that should be destroyed. The more they implemented their roots in this world, the more influence they had, making us becoming the enemy of humans."
   
"Like that, humans recognized us as their enemy and whenever there was a chance or a gap, they would seize our lands. Trying to exterminate us, they began to commence assaults. We are more superior in terms of individual combat skills, still, they have more war potential than us. Even if we can use magic, taking several hundreds of human soldiers… is a task next to impossible."
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"Like that humans recognized us as their enemy and whenever there had a chance or a gap, they would seize our lands. Trying to exterminate us, they began to commenced assaults. We are more superior in terms of individual combat skills, nevertheless, they have more war power than us. Even if we can use magic, taking several hundreds of human soldiers… is a task next to impossible."
   
"Because of that, our lands were gradually encroached. Even now, we have been pushed quite far, into the black forest."
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"Because of that, our lands were gradually encroached. Even now, we have been pushed quite an area, into the black forest."
   
"Ah, besides us, there are several other clans that live in this forest. However, we don’t associate much. It seems that the humans describe us all with the term ‘the Country of Witches’ but, our activity doesn’t include deep integration with other clans. It seems that a long time ago, when the great witch was alive, the clans had stronger connections with each other. Despite that, we are all treated the same by humans."
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"Ah, besides us, there are several other clans that lives in this forest. However, we don’t associate much. It seems that the humans describe us all with the term ‘the country of witches’ but, our activity doesn’t include deep integration with other clans. It seems that a long time ago, when the great witch was alive, the clans had stronger connections with each other. Despite that, we are all treated the same by humans."
   
"We would become the first to bear the brunt of the Cassandra kingdom’s forces, since they’re the nearest human country to us. We somehow repelled them for the time being, but we don’t know how long we can keep resisting. If we were to fall, the whole black forest would probably be in the humans’ hands. It would be a much different story if the other clans united, but…"
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"We would become the first to bear the brunt of Cassandra kingdom’s forces, since they’re the nearest human country to us. We somehow repelled it for the time being, but we don’t know how long we can keep resisting. If we were to fall out, the whole black forest would probably be in the humans’ hands. It would be much a different story if the other clans united, but…"
   
Harrigan talked dimly without anger, excitement or even any lament.
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Harrigan talked dimly without anger, excitement not any lament.
   
"Then here is our fort. Beginning with this one, the majority of those who fight are packed in several of these forts located in this forest, beginning with this one. Children and elderly live in a hidden village. I’ll say it now, but I can’t bring you there, and I don’t have that much trust in you yet."
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"Then here is our fort. Beginning with this one, the majority of those who fight are packed in several of these forts located in this forest, beginning with this one. Children and elderly live in a hidden village. I’ll say it, but I can’t bring you there, and I don’t have that much trust on you yet."
   
"I understand that much."
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"I understand this much."
   
The man raised his hand as to express his understanding.
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The man raised his hand as to express his understand.
   
After finishing explaining the general details, Harrigan breathed out a sigh and continued her story while saying – "well then".
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After finishing to explain in general, Harrigan breathed out a sigh and continued her while saying – well then.
   
 
"I explained broadly about us and our current situation, but did you understand?"
 
"I explained broadly about us and our current situation, but did you understand?"
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"That’s why! which one do you mean!?"
 
"That’s why! which one do you mean!?"
   
"Like I said. I could understand roughly the course of action, but, to know things in detail, the only thing I can do is to experience them after all… or something like that."
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"That one. I could understand roughly the course of action, but, after all, to know the things in detail, the only thing I can do is to experience them… or such."
   
 
Fufu – Harrigan smiled pleasantly.
 
Fufu – Harrigan smiled pleasantly.
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(What an interesting man. Well, leaving aside whether he’s a clever man or a fool, it’s fine for him not to be scared of us.)
 
(What an interesting man. Well, leaving aside whether he’s a clever man or a fool, it’s fine for him not to be scared of us.)
   
Harrigan had her interest caught by the man in front of her. No, perhaps she was attracted to the man itself.
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Harrigan had her interest caught by the man in front of her. No, perhaps she was attracted by the man itself.
   
The man that descended suddenly from the sky.
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The man that descended out of sudden from the air.
   
Even for a famous witch as Harrigan, a magic that could send people to distant places was not seen or mentioned. Not only that, rather than being sent from a distant place, it seemed more like he crossed spacetime from the other place.
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Even for a famous witch as Harrigan, a magic that could send people to the distant places was not seen or unheard of. Not to mention, rather than being fired from a distant place, it seemed more like he crossed the spacetime from the other place.
   
 
Harrigan thought about wanting to investigate that phenomenon.
 
Harrigan thought about wanting to investigate that phenomenon.
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She also wanted to learn more about the man himself.
 
She also wanted to learn more about the man himself.
   
A man, who could accept the situation with such composure, despite being thrown into a different world.
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A man, who could accept the situation with such a composure, despite being thrown into different world.
   
 
A man who asserts as someone unperturbed by emotions, of a deep faith that feels obligated to pay a meal and a night stay debt, and someone that doesn’t make differences between us witches and the humans.
 
A man who asserts as someone unperturbed by emotions, of a deep faith that feels obligated to pay a meal and a night stay debt, and someone that doesn’t make differences between us witches and the humans.
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The word, which Harrigan knew, held the implication of ‘dragon’ or ‘dragon king’.
 
The word, which Harrigan knew, held the implication of ‘dragon’ or ‘dragon king’.
   
She didn’t know whether the word indicated his name in that way. However, the man that fell from the sky, whose name held the meaning of ‘dragon’ could imply something. Because of that, Harrigan didn’t plan to release the man. Nevertheless, as the head of the clan, there’s no way for her to prioritize her personal interest. Speaking honestly about themselves, she sought the man’s response.
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She didn’t know whether the word indicated his name in that way. However, the man that fell from the sky, whose name held the meaning of ‘dragon’ could imply something. Because of that, Harrigan didn’t plan to release the man. Nevertheless, as the head of the clan, there’s no way for her to prioritize her personal interest. Speaking honestly about themselves, she seeked for the man’s response.
 
As expected, the man showed a response according to her thoughts. He wasn’t scared of them or denied them. On the other hand, he would normally make contact with them without any sympathising. It wasn’t an attitude that existed in this world. Assuming that the man indeed came from a different world, perhaps, talking to him could open the path for the future of her clan.
 
   
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As expected, the man showed a response according to her thoughts. He wasn’t scared of them nor denied them. On the other hand, he would normally make contact with them without any sympathising. It wasn’t an attitude that existed in this world. Assuming that the man indeed came from different world, perhaps, talking to him could open the path for the future of her clan.
 
There was no particular reason, nor established principles for that. Rather, it was her intuition as the witches’ chief.
 
There was no particular reason, nor established principles for that. Rather, it was her intuition as the witches’ chief.
   
Harrigan had decided.
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Harrigan have decided.
   
She decided to take care this man as part of her clan. If he becomes a burden, it should be fine to throw him away, and if he intends to do any harm, it should be no problem in killing him.
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She decided to take care this man as the part of her clan. If he becomes a burden, it should be fine to throw him away, and if he intends to do any harm, it should be no problem in killing him.
   
 
Such was Harrigan’s conclusion.
 
Such was Harrigan’s conclusion.

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