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=== Part 9 ===
 
=== Part 9 ===
   
Once she revealed the man’s presence to the others and said that she intends to raise him, continuous objections and doubts were received from the witches. Without there being anyone, who would consent positively, if it was something decided by ane-sama, Lela and Ais would only show a passive approval without opposing. In the end, however, everyone came to acknowledge the man, on the condition of throwing him away, were he to cause any trouble.
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Once she revealed the man’s presence to the others and said that she intends to raise him, continuous objections and doubts were received from the witches. Without there being anyone, who would consent positively, if it was something decided by ane-sama, Lela and Ais would only show a passive approval without any opposing. Nevertheless, in the end, everyone came to acknowledge the man, on the condition of throwing him away, were he to cause any trouble.
   
Yuuki was the only one, who would continue to oppose till the end, everywhere, firmly, severely and stubbornly. In the end, despite many attempts of calming down and lecturing her, Harrigan managed to forcibly overcome Yuuki’s opposition.
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Yuuki was the only one, who would continue to oppose till the end, everywhere, firmly, severely and stubbornly. In the end, despite many attempts of calming down and lecturing, Harrigan managed to forcibly overcome Yuuki’s opposition.
   
 
"This is what I concluded and I don’t intend to change it."
 
"This is what I concluded and I don’t intend to change it."
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"If Harri-nee says so, that’s fine. Whatever happens, I don’t care."
 
"If Harri-nee says so, that’s fine. Whatever happens, I don’t care."
   
Saying so, Yuuki became completely angry, nevertheless she didn’t seem to resort to any forceful methods, such as killing the man or throwing him out of the village. Because of that, Harrigan judged it would be fine to leave it like that for the time being.
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Saying so, Yuuki became completely angry, nevertheless she didn’t seem to resort to any forceful methods, such as killing the man or throwing him out from the village. Because of that, Harrigan judged it would be fine to leave it like that for the time being.
   
It will be a problem to take care of a man, however, how should they refer to him? For the time being, it wasn’t a good idea just to omit that.
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It will be a problem to take care of a man, however, how should they refer to the man? For the time being, it wasn’t a good idea just to omit that.
   
(Because that guy said that he thinks his name is Naga something, there’s no way for us to ignore that. [{{furigana|Dragon King|Naga|}}]… should we go with that? I’ve the feeling like this name is too much for him. if he was the real dragon king, he would probably get angry, still, if we consider it as a nickname, he probably won’t.)
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(Because that guy said that he thinks his name is Naga something, there’s no way for us to ignore that. [{{furigana|Dragon King|Naga|}}]… should we go with that? I’ve the feeling like this name is too much for him. if it is was to be the real dragon king, it would probably get angry, still, if we consider it as a nickname, it probably won’t.)
   
Thinking so, Harrigan decided to refer to the young man as Naga.
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Thinking so, Harrigan decided to referred to the young man as Naga.
   
Heh? is that so – After announcing that, it would be natural for a person to be surprised. Regardless, the majority of witches laughed instead. Their laugh had an element of mocking to it.
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Heh? is that so – After announcing that, it would be natural for a person to be surprised. Nevertheless, the majority of witches laughed instead. Their laugh had an element of mocking.
   
 
"It doesn’t suit him."
 
"It doesn’t suit him."
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"Won't he get killed by the real dragon king?"
 
"Won't he get killed by the real dragon king?"
   
Such were the impressions the witches had.
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Such impressions the witches had.
   
 
"Were you girls told of such things?"
 
"Were you girls told of such things?"
   
Despite Harrigan spurring them on, the man remained calm.
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Despite Harrigan spurring on, the man remained calm.
   
 
"In the first place, I don’t know what the dragon king is."
 
"In the first place, I don’t know what the dragon king is."

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