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=== Part 10 ===
 
=== Part 10 ===
   
With that, Naga, who had been decided to be supported by Harrigan and the others, for now decided not to take any action. Rather than that, because he didn’t understand much about Harrigan’s clan, or about this world, even if he wanted to do anything, he wouldn’t be able to.
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With that, Naga, who had been decided to be supported by Harrigan and the others, for now decided not to take any action. Rather than that, because he didn’t understand most about Harrigan’s clan, as well about this world, even if he wanted to do anything, he wouldn’t be able.
   
 
Should I first allow myself to observe and study? – Naga started talking.
 
Should I first allow myself to observe and study? – Naga started talking.
   
"That’s fine. Then, shall we walk around this fort once we finish lunch?"
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"That’s fine. Then, shall we walk around this fort once we finish the lunch?"
   
 
After that they took their lunch and went to take a walk around the inside of the fort. At that time Naga asked…
 
After that they took their lunch and went to take a walk around the inside of the fort. At that time Naga asked…
   
"Hey Harrigan. When I fell into the bath-house, wasn’t there something I was holding onto?"
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"Hey Harrigan. When I fell into the bath house, wasn’t there something I was holding to?"
   
 
"You mean that weird-shaped sword in your waist?"
 
"You mean that weird-shaped sword in your waist?"
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"We are keeping it."
 
"We are keeping it."
   
"Can’t I have you return it to me? Somehow, my left side feels lonely, I feel anxious and insecure."
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"Can’t I’ve you return it back to me? Somehow, my left waist feels lonely, I feel anxiety and insecure."
   
 
"We will keep it for a little while."
 
"We will keep it for a little while."
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"Naga’s face turned miserable."
 
"Naga’s face turned miserable."
   
"Do you think that my keeping it is dangerous?"
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"Do you think that I keeping it is dangerous?"
   
"Isn't that natural?"
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"That would be natural?"
   
 
"Uh… is that so? well, it probably would be."
 
"Uh… is that so? well, it probably would be."
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Being led by Ais and Harrigan, they walked around the inside of the fortification.
 
Being led by Ais and Harrigan, they walked around the inside of the fortification.
   
The fort mentioned is fort three, which could be said to be their main base, wasn’t as big in comparison with the others. It was surrounded by a wooden fence and it had no ditches. Inside the grounds, there were complex constructions, such as a residential building, storage house, weaponry, and a high watch tower. All of them were simple constructions made using wood.
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The fort mentioned as fort three, which could be said to be their main base, wasn’t as big in comparison with the others. It was surrounded by wooden fence, nevertheless, it had no ditches. Inside the ground, there were complex constructions, such as a residential building, storage house, weaponry, and a high watch tower. All of them were simple constructions made using woods.
   
It was probably a rare sight and unheard of for him. Naga would frequently stop and look inside the buildings and ask about their name and functions. After having spent the afternoon like that and taking dinner, Naga retired to a room offered by Harrigan.
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It was probably a rare sight and unheard for him. Naga would frequently stop and look inside the buildings and ask about their name and functions. After having spent the afternoon like that and taking the dinner, Naga retired to a room offered by Harrigan.
   
 
"Oh my, as expected, today was a tiring one. I’ll allow myself to go sleep earlier. Is it fine for me to take this off?"
 
"Oh my, as expected, today was a tiring one. I’ll allow myself to go sleep earlier. Is it fine for me to take this off?"
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Naga pointed the amulet behind his neck.
 
Naga pointed the amulet behind his neck.
   
"Lela will prepare a new one for you tomorrow, so don’t worry about it."
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"Lela will prepare for you a new one tomorrow, so don’t mind."
   
"In case I won’t be able to wake up tomorrow, please do it for me. I’m thankful for your meals and bedding. Well then, if you'll excuse me."
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"In case I won’t be able to wake up tomorrow, please do it for me. I’m thankful for your meals and bedding. Well then, if you allow."
   
Raising his hand he gave a sign to Harigan, who escorted him to his room. As he suddenly began to take off his clothes, Harrigan became puzzled.
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Raising his hand he gave a sign to Harigan, who escorted him until the room. As he suddenly began to take off his clothes, Harrigan became puzzled.
   
"Hey, what are you doing all of a sudden?!"
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"Hey, what are you doing out of sudden?!"
   
 
"My clothes are still drying, so I was thinking about leaving them out to dry completely while sleeping."
 
"My clothes are still drying, so I was thinking about leaving them out to dry completely while sleeping."
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"Ah? I don’t particularly mind. Do you Harrigan?"
 
"Ah? I don’t particularly mind. Do you Harrigan?"
   
Despite being a little bit red faced, Harrigan answered without averting her eyes.
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Despite Being a little bit red faced, Harrigan answered without averting her eyes.
   
 
"N, no, I wonder whether I too, don’t mind at all."
 
"N, no, I wonder whether I too, don’t mind at all."
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With just his loincloth, Naga composedly began to stretch his half-dried clothings.
 
With just his loincloth, Naga composedly began to stretch his half-dried clothings.
   
(His body is quite trained… Wh, no, no. It isn’t the time to be watching muscles.)
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(His body is quite trained… Wh, no no, it isn’t the time to be watching muscles.)
   
 
Once she left the room and closed the door, Naga’s snoring was heard from the inside.
 
Once she left the room and closed the door, Naga’s snoring was heard from the inside.
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(He surely falls asleep fast. Does he have much of courage, or does he have no wariness? He’s a man hard to measure.)
 
(He surely falls asleep fast. Does he have that much courage or does he have no wariness? He’s a hard man to measure.)
 
   
 
Shaking her head, Harrigan returned to her room.
 
Shaking her head, Harrigan returned to her room.

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