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=== Part 11 ===
 
=== Part 11 ===
   
The following day, after taking breakfast together with Ais and Harrigan, Naga expressed his wish to walk around the fort once more.
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The following day, after taking the breakfast together with Ais and Harrigan, Naga expressed his wish to walk around the fort once more.
   
Today as well, he was wearing his clothing, which Harrigan considered strange and had a special made amulet attached by Lela to the same place.
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Today as well, he was wearing his clothing, which Harrigan considered as queer, and had a special made amulet attached by Lela at the same place.
(Because there is no other clothing for him, it can’t be helped. I have to deal with that matter somehow. Well, should I leave it for later? However…)
 
   
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(Because there are no other clothings for him, it can’t be helped. I’ve to deal with that matter somehow. Well, should I leave that for later? However…)
There was no way to let Naga wander alone, so guiding him was of the utmost necessity. That part could be done only by someone like Harrigan, nevertheless, she also had lots of duties piled up as the head of the clan.
 
   
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There was no way to let Naga wander alone, so guiding was utmost necessary. That part could be done only by someone like Harrigan, nevertheless, she too had lots of duty piled up as the head of the clan.
"I too, can only help you in my free time, still… this isn’t what I mean."
 
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"I too, can only help you in my free time, nevertheless… this isn’t what I mean."
   
 
Once she said it in that way with disagreeableness.
 
Once she said it in that way with disagreeableness.
   
"That’s fine. In that case, you don’t have to guide. Because I’ll just hang around properly in the surroundings of the fort."
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"That’s fine. In that case, you don’t have to guide. Because I’ll just hang around properly in this surrounding of the fort."
   
"The surroundings of the fort? do you plan to walk around the forest?"
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"The surrounding of the fort? do you plan to walk around the forest?"
   
"Yeah, I want to learn, even if it’s just a bit, about how this world looks. But first, I want to see with my own eyes this region where you live."
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"Yeah, I want to learn, even if it’s just a bit, about how this world looks. But first, I want to see with my very eyes this region where you live."
   
 
"A forest is a forest. However much you look at it, there are just trees."
 
"A forest is a forest. However much you look at it, there are just trees."
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"What? Is there something I shouldn’t see in the forest?"
 
"What? Is there something I shouldn’t see in the forest?"
   
"No, that’s not it. But, people who walk in this forest without knowing about it will get lost. It’s because in addition to the forest being very dark, we put up a barrier. It would be different in case they were to focus much and set a benchmark, but…"
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"Not that’s not. But, people who walks this forest without knowing about it, will get lost. It’s because, in addition to the forest being deeply dark, we put a barrier. It would be different in case they were to focus much and set a benchmark, but…"
   
 
"A barrier…"
 
"A barrier…"
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Naga pondered.
 
Naga pondered.
   
"Yea, think of it as one type of magic. It’s a magic used to deceive people’s eyes, who don’t know about this place."
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"Yea, think of it as one type of magic. It’s a magic used to deceive people’s eyes, who doesn’t know about this place."
   
 
"Is that so? Then, I cannot wander alone?."
 
"Is that so? Then, I cannot wander alone?."
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"Ane-sama, Shall I do the gui-ding?"
 
"Ane-sama, Shall I do the gui-ding?"
   
"Is is alright? Will you be fine by yourself?"
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"Is is right? Will you fine by yourself?"
   
"Even if the effect of the amulet runs out, I’ll be there, so there shouldn’t be a pro-blem. Right now, there are things which you need to do, so."
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"Even if the effect of the amulet runs out, I’ll be there, so there shouldn’t be pro-blem. Right now, there are things, which you need to do, so."
   
"This isn’t what I mean. Will you be fine being alone with that perverted guy? – is what I wanted to ask. I’ll say it, but this guy's is a pervert!"
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"This isn’t what I mean. Will you be fine being alone with that perverted guy? – is what I wanted to ask. I’ll say it, but this guys is a pervert?"
   
 
"Don’t ask rude things! And don’t say it!"
 
"Don’t ask rude things! And don’t say it!"
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"Ah…."
 
"Ah…."
   
"And you, don’t just start thinking about that!"
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"And you, don’t just start pondering about that!"
   
Bending her neck while having a stern face, Lela raised her face up and looked at Naga with a glance from his top to bottom.
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Bending her neck while having a stern face, Lela raised up her face and looked at Naga with a glance from his tip to toes.
   
"Well, it will be fine , I thin-k. If necessary, I’ll burn him using the fla-me spell."
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"Well, it will be fine , I thin-k. When necessary, I’ll burn him using the fla-me spell."
   
"Is that so? Then I’ll leave it to you."
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"Is that so?Then I’ll leave it to you."
   
 
As soon as Harrigan said so, she whispered to Lela’s ear as if embracing her.
 
As soon as Harrigan said so, she whispered to Lela’s ear as if embracing her.
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Kukuku – Harrigan chuckled as she once again put the emphasis on what she said.
 
Kukuku – Harrigan chuckled as she once again put the emphasis on what she said.
   
"You better follow Lela guidance obediently?"
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"You better follow Lela guide obediently?"
   
"I know, good grief. If you worry too much it will be bad for your health."
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"I know, good grief. If you worry so much it would be bad for your health."
   
"Not being worried about a man that comes and gropes people’s chest out of nowhere, what else should I worry about?"
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"Not being worried about a man that comes and grope people’s chest out of sudden, what else should I worry about?"
   
"Ah… that’s right, I was confused that time at the sudden course of events. There’s no longer a need to worry."
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"Ah… that’s right, I was confused that time at the sudden course of events. There’s no longer need to worry."
   
 
"I’d like to hope so…"
 
"I’d like to hope so…"
   
Shifting her sight away from him, Harrigan took a glance at Lela’s appearance. Nevertheless, the girl remained emotionless and looked at Naga.
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Shifting her sight away from him, Harrigan took a glance at Lela’s appearance. Nevertheless, the girl remained emotionless she would and looked at Naga.
   
(Despite her having an indifferent attitude toward things, it’s rare for Lela to be this positive. Could it be that she’s taking an interest in that man….?)
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(Despite her having an indifferent attitude toward things, it’s rare for Lela to be this positive. Could it be that she’s taking an interest into that man….?
   
Is it good or bad? Up to this point, Harrigan couldn’t understand. Still, she felt it could be a sort of new fresh wind that began to blow through the monotonous witches in this mood stagnant village.
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Is it good or bad? Up to this point, Harrigan couldn’t understand. Still, she felt it could be a sort of a new fresh wind that began to blow through the monotonous witches in this mood stagnant village.
   
"Well then, I will entrust him with you Lela."
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"Well then, I will entrust you with that Lela."
   
 
"Leave it to m-e."
 
"Leave it to m-e."

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