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In this virgin forest, all the trees were high with numerous branches that were thickly overgrown with leaves.
 
In this virgin forest, all the trees were high with numerous branches that were thickly overgrown with leaves.
   
Despite now being noon, the forest was thickly dim. Nevertheless, the grass below one’s feet wasn’t that high so it didn’t cause problems while moving.
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Despite now being the noon, the forest was thickly dim. Nevertheless, the grass below one’s feet wasn’t that high, therefore, it didn’t cause problem when moving.
   
 
Because Naga walked with a fast and big pace, it was natural for him to be in front of Lela.
 
Because Naga walked with a fast and big pace, it was natural for him to be in front of Lela.
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Lela was caught off guard.
 
Lela was caught off guard.
   
"I think I saw how things are going in this fort yesterday and today, but somehow the atmosphere felt silent. You could say there was no mood nor ambition? and also you looked resigned?"
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"I think I saw how the things are going in this fort yesterday and today, but somehow the atmosphere felt silent. You could say there was no mood nor ambition? and also you looked resigned?"
   
 
Naga took a glance at Lela’s face.
 
Naga took a glance at Lela’s face.
   
"Running inside the forest as if driven away by humans, and hiding your presence motionlessly here in order to avoid conflicts with them. Are you satisfied with that?"
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"Running inside the forest as if driven away by humans, and hiding you presence motionlessly here in order to avoid conflicts with them. Are you satisfied with that?"
   
 
"There’s no, way, for us to be satisfie-d."
 
"There’s no, way, for us to be satisfie-d."
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(Cra-p. For me of all the people to slack o-ff.)
 
(Cra-p. For me of all the people to slack o-ff.)
   
While panicking, Lela tried to chase after Naga.
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While panicking, Lela tried to catch after Naga.
   
No matter how fast he is, he shouldn’t be able to walk far away while being a first timer in this forest. What’s more, as long there’s not much distance between them, Lela can follow him thanks to her own magic leaking from the amulet, so, she didn’t worry much.
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No matter how fast he is, he shouldn’t be able to walk far away while being the first timer in this forest. What’s more, as long there’s not much of distance between them, Lela can follow him up thanks to her own magic leaking from the amulet, so, she didn’t worry much.
   
 
Just as she anticipated, she spotted Naga’s back after walking a while.
 
Just as she anticipated, she spotted Naga’s back after walking a while.
   
It seemed as though he was hiding in the shadow, kneeling and holding his breath while peeking at something in front of him.
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It seemed as though he was hiding in the shadow, kneeling and holding his breath while peeking at something in front of im.
   
 
Because his tension passed along to Lela, she approached unintentionally with her stealthy steps.
 
Because his tension passed along to Lela, she approached unintentionally with her stealthy steps.
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As she gently approached, Naga turned behind as he noticed her and gave her sign to stoop using his hand.
 
As she gently approached, Naga turned behind as he noticed her and gave her sign to stoop using his hand.
   
Once she lined next to him while keeping her head low, she asked as if whispering.
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Once she lined next to him while keeping low her head, she asked as if whispering.
   
 
"Is there a beast or some-thing?"
 
"Is there a beast or some-thing?"
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Because Naga whispered back, Lela became tense.
 
Because Naga whispered back, Lela became tense.
   
Once she peeked out with her face from the shadow of a thick tree trunk.
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Once she peek out with her face from the shadow of a thick tree trunk.
   
 
In front, there was a small valley-shaped river flowing, inside of which Yuuki was taking a bath. She was naked, which was natural one way or another.
 
In front, there was a small valley-shaped river flowing, inside of which Yuuki was taking a bath. She was naked, which was natural one way or another.
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"A…ah..indeed it’s a ferocious bea-st. A specific one among peo-ple, but.."
 
"A…ah..indeed it’s a ferocious bea-st. A specific one among peo-ple, but.."
   
There was no doubt that she ditched the designated job and went to bathe due to her previously facing off with Naga at the fort.
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There was no doubt that she ditched the designated job and went to bath due to her facing previously with Naga at the fort.
   
 
(In that case, it’s you reap what you sow, but..)
 
(In that case, it’s you reap what you sow, but..)
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Lela thought about what they should do.
 
Lela thought about what they should do.
   
Yuuki, who didn’t suspect anyone to peek on her, climbed up the rocky area as she performed bold calisthenics, and jumped into the deep water from the rock while having fun.
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Yuuki, who didn’t suspect anyone to peek her, climbed up the rocky area as she performed bold calisthenics, and jumped into the deep water from the rock while having fun.
   
Yuuki’s wet and naked body was radiating with the sunlight. Naturally, because she didn’t suspect anyone to peek, she wouldn’t think about hiding her body.
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Yuuki’s wet and naked body was radiating with the sunlight. Naturally, because she didn’t suspect anyone to peak, she wouldn’t think about hiding her body.
   
 
Her body had white skin, which was almost transparent.
 
Her body had white skin, which was almost transparent.
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On top of them, cute and pink nipples protruded.
 
On top of them, cute and pink nipples protruded.
   
The lightly golden bush between her groin was damp with water and stickily clinging to her abdomen.
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The lightly golden bush between her groins was damp with water and stickily clinging to her abdomen.
   
 
And then, a smiling face, which Naga hadn’t seen until now, popped on her face.
 
And then, a smiling face, which Naga hadn’t seen until now, popped on her face.
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Naga’s sight was completely glued to Yuuki’s face and naked body.
 
Naga’s sight was completely glued to Yuuki’s face and naked body.
   
Lela peeked with her sidelong glance at Naga’s appearance.
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Leyla peeked with her sidelong glance at Naga’s appearance.
   
 
(He’s zealously looking, isn’t h-e? Well, I can unders-tand that, but… her body isn’t the same as Ais’ still, Yuuki has quite an attractive bo-dy.)
 
(He’s zealously looking, isn’t h-e? Well, I can unders-tand that, but… her body isn’t the same as Ais’ still, Yuuki has quite an attractive bo-dy.)
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"If you’re spotted on peeking, you will di-e. Saying that, you will be killed by Yuu-ki. That’s is 9/10, 9 out 10, and 99 percent certain."
 
"If you’re spotted on peeking, you will di-e. Saying that, you will be killed by Yuu-ki. That’s is 9/10, 9 out 10, and 99 percent certain."
   
"Doesn’t the last one give me less than 10% of chance to avoid it?"
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"Doesn’t the last one give me less than 10% of chance to avoid?"
   
"Yes, that’s why it’s certa-in. Even if ane-sama tries to stop her, Yuuki l probably won't listen to he-r."
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"Yes, that’s why it’s certa-in. Even if ane-sama tries to stop her, Yuuki won’t probably listen to he-r."
   
 
Naga’s body shivered.
 
Naga’s body shivered.
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"You… could it be, you plan to report me to Yuuki?"
 
"You… could it be, you plan to report me to Yuuki?"
   
Without answering Naga’s question, once Lela took out an amulet from her waist, she began to write down using her small brush.
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Without answering to Naga’s question, once Lela took out an amulet from her waist, she began to write down using her small brush.
   
 
"Yes, please attach th-is."
 
"Yes, please attach th-is."
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"W-what? What do you intend to do?"
 
"W-what? What do you intend to do?"
   
At that time, Yuuki, who was about to jump off the rock area, stopped. Frowning her eyes suspiciously, she looks to the sides attentively.
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At that time, Yuuki, who was about to jump off the rock area, stopped. Frowning her eyes suspiciously, she look on the sides attentively.
   
"We will be noticed, quick attach it… rather than that I’ll attach i-t!"
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"We will be noticed, fast attach… rather than that I’ll attach i-t!"
   
 
Lela banged the new charm with a slap on Naga’s forehead.
 
Lela banged the new charm with a slap on Naga’s forehead.
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Just as Lela told, Naga ceased his movements and hid his breath while continuing to peek at Yuuki.
 
Just as Lela told, Naga ceased his movements and hid his breath while continuing to peek at Yuuki.
   
Yuuki, who was searching around for a moment with deep suspicion, suddenly yelled – Ah! Naga’s body froze thinking that he was spotted, however, that wasn’t the case.
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Yuuki, who was searching around for a moment with deep suspicion, suddenly yelled – Ah! Naga’s body froze thinking that he was spotted, however, it wasn’t that case.
   
 
"A smoke signal from the fort!"
 
"A smoke signal from the fort!"
   
Yuuki jumped toward her thrown clothes and wore them before one could even notice. Once she did that, she ran up the slope in an instant and vanished into the forest.
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Yuuki jumped toward her thrown clothings and wore before one could even notice. Once she did that, she run up the slope and disappeared in a blink of time inside the forest.
   
 
Waiting until she disappeared, Lela stood up.
 
Waiting until she disappeared, Lela stood up.
   
"You narrowly escaped death, Na-ga-san."
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"You narrowly escaped from death, Na-ga-san."
   
"A… ah, it seems so."
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"A… ah, it seems to be so."
   
 
Once Naga breathed out a sigh of relief and loosened his body, Lela bent her waist while reaching out her right hand to scrape off the amulet on his forehead.
 
Once Naga breathed out a sigh of relief and loosened his body, Lela bent her waist while reaching out her right hand to scrape off the amulet on his forehead.
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Naga slowly stood up.
 
Naga slowly stood up.
   
"Despite that, why didn’t you report me to her?
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"Despite that, why didn’t you report me to that guy?
   
"If I reported you, you'd di-e? Even if I report you to Yuuki at the fort, instead of this place, you will be kill-ed."
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"If I report, you will di-e? Even if I report you to Yuuki at the fort, instead of this place, you will be kill-ed."
   
 
"Are you actually considering me carefully?"
 
"Are you actually considering me carefully?"
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Naga and Lela looked at each other. Their sights intertwined with each other in the air.
 
Naga and Lela looked at each other. Their sights intertwined with each other in the air.
   
Naga couldn’t guess what kind of request she had, nevertheless, he nodded as he said – "Yeah, fine".
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Naga couldn’t guess what kind of request she had, nevertheless, he nodded as he said – Yeah, fine.
   
 
"If it’s enough for you not to leak it, then it’s a cheap price. I’ll talk however much you want."
 
"If it’s enough for you not to leak it, then it’s a cheap price. I’ll talk however much you want."
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"Why does Yuuki disdain men so much?"
 
"Why does Yuuki disdain men so much?"
   
"Shouldn’t ane-sama have already told you about not inqui-ring?"
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"Shouldn’t ane-sama already told you about not inqui-ring?"
   
 
"No, I was just bothered by it. She hasn’t shown that violent reaction until now?"
 
"No, I was just bothered by it. She hasn’t shown that violent reaction until now?"
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"It’s not something I should answe-r. If ane-sama deems it as fine, she will probably talk to you about i-t."
 
"It’s not something I should answe-r. If ane-sama deems it as fine, she will probably talk to you about i-t."
   
"Such a way of talking while putting on airs."
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"Such way of talk putting on airs."
   
"It seems that she made some unpleasant memories when she was small. Probably, she can’t forget about the painful experien-ces."
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"It seems that she made some unpleasant memories when she was small. Probably she can’t forget about the painful experien-ces."
   
 
Naga felt a throb in his chest.
 
Naga felt a throb in his chest.
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He couldn’t explain the reason behind that, nevertheless, there’s no doubt, some fragments of his memories reacted at Lela’s words.
 
He couldn’t explain the reason behind that, nevertheless, there’s no doubt, some fragments of his memories reacted at Lela’s words.
   
(I see. so she had some painful experiences in her childhood? It seems that I had gone through the same. When it comes to this, losing one’s memories doesn’t seem to be half bad, does it?)
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(I see. so she had some painful experiences at her childhood? It seems that I had gone through the same. When it comes to this, losing one’s memories doesn’t seem to be half bad, doesn’t it?)
   
 
A masochistic smile floated on Naga’s face.
 
A masochistic smile floated on Naga’s face.
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Seeing that painful smile on his face, Lela pulled back her head, nevertheless, Naga’s smile immediately vanished and his face turned back to a daring one.
 
Seeing that painful smile on his face, Lela pulled back her head, nevertheless, Naga’s smile immediately vanished and his face turned back to a daring one.
   
"Ah, sorry for stopping you. We should hurry."
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"Ah, sorry for stopping you. We should hasten."
   
"Then… let’s ru-n. Please follow along without falling behin-d."
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"Then… let’s ru-n. Please tag along without falling behin-d."
   
Because Lela breaks into a run inside the forest, Naga ran after her.
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Because Lela break into a run inside the forest, Naga run after her.
   
(A smoke signal? Did something happen? Could it be that the fort was attacked?)
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(A smoke signal? Did something happened? Could it it that the fort was attacked?)
   
Naga’s suspicions were half right and half wrong.
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Naga’s anticipation were half right and half wrong.
   
 
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==Translator's Notes and References==
 
==Translator's Notes and References==
 
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