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Present tense, since that's more dramatic. |
Present tense, since that's more dramatic. |
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| − | === Gender Pronouns === |
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| − | For the time being, at least, this translation will refer to all characters by the pronouns presented in the original Japanese, ignoring the rabbit-hole of how characters identify, etc. |
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===Other=== |
===Other=== |
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| + | Leave character thoughts out of italics. |
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| − | Where relevant, the Canadian English spelling is used. |
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Everything else should be according to the general guidelines. |
Everything else should be according to the general guidelines. |
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===Names, Titles, & Attributes=== |
===Names, Titles, & Attributes=== |
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| + | ''Flum and Friends'' |
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| − | フラム・アプリコット |
+ | フラム・アプリコット - Flum Apricot |
| − | *反転属性 |
+ | :*“反転”属性 - Reversal Attribute |
| + | ミルキット - Milkit |
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| + | :*闇属性 - Dark Attribute |
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| − | ミルキット = Milkit |
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| + | ''The Hero's Party'' |
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| + | キリル・スィーチカ - Cyrill Sweetchka |
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| − | ====The Hero's Party==== |
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| + | *“救世の勇者” - “The Hero of Salvation” |
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| − | キリル・スィーチカ = Cyrill Sweechka |
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+ | *勇者属性 - Hero Attribute |
| + | ジーン・インテージ - Jean Inteige |
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| − | *勇者属性 = Hero Attribute (Unique) |
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| + | *“孤高の賢者” - “The Lone Sage” |
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| − | ジーン・インテージ = Jean Inteige |
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| + | *自然属性 - Primal Attribute |
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| − | *“孤高の賢者” = “The Lone Sage” |
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| + | ライナス・レディアンツ - Linus Radiance |
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| − | *自然属性 = Primal Attribute (Earth, Fire, Water, Air) |
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| + | *“神殺しの射手” - “The Godslayer Archer” |
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| − | ライナス・レディアンツ = Linus Radiance |
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| + | *風属性 - Air Attribute |
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| − | *“神殺しの射手” = “The Godslayer Archer” |
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| + | マリア・アフェンジェンズ - Maria Affenjenz |
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| − | *風属性 = Air Attribute |
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| + | *“慈愛の聖女” - “The Saint of Love” |
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| − | マリア・アフェンジェンズ = Maria Affenjenz |
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| + | *光属性 - Light Attribute |
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| − | *“慈愛の聖女” = “The Saint of Love” |
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| + | ガディオ・ラスカット - Gadio Ruskett |
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| − | *光属性 = Light Attribute |
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| + | *“星砕の豪腕” - “The Starcrushing Strongarm” |
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| − | ガディオ・ラスカット = Gadio Ruskett |
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| + | *土属性 - Earth Attribute |
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| − | *“星砕の豪腕” = “The Starcrushing Strongarm” |
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| + | エターナ・リンバウ - Eterna Rinebow |
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| − | *土属性 = Earth Attribute |
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| + | *“永遠の魔女” - “The Eternal Witch” |
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| − | エターナ・リンバウ = Eterna Rinebow |
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| + | *水属性 - Water Attribute |
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| − | *“永遠の魔女” = “The Eternal Witch” |
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| − | *水属性 = Water Attribute |
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| − | + | ''The Three Demon Generals'' |
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ネイガス = Neigass |
ネイガス = Neigass |
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*”血風” = “The Bloody Gale” |
*”血風” = “The Bloody Gale” |
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| − | *血風属性 = Bloody Gale Attribute (Dark + Air) |
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ツァイオン = Tsaion |
ツァイオン = Tsaion |
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*”燐火” = “The Flickering Inferno” |
*”燐火” = “The Flickering Inferno” |
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| − | *燐火属性 = Flickering Inferno Attribute (Dark + Fire) |
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| − | ディーザ = Dieza |
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| − | *”泥濘” = “The Bottomless Quagmire” |
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| − | シートゥム = Shietume |
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| − | *”魔王” = Demon Lord |
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| − | リートゥス = Rietus |
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| + | *リターン - Return |
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| − | *パトリア = Patoria(town) |
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| + | :*帰還地点 - Return Point |
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| − | *パイル = Pyle(friend) |
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| + | :*記憶 - Continue Point |
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| − | *マリン = Marin(friend) |
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| + | :*転入石 - Teleportation Stone |
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| + | *魔法 - Magic. The correct verb for it is ‘cast’. |
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| − | ==== The Military ==== |
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| + | *魔族 - Demon |
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| − | アンリエット・バッセンハイム - Anriette Vassenheim |
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| + | *魔族領、魔族の領域 - Demon Realm |
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| − | *軍将 = Major General |
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| + | *創造神オリジン - God of Creation, Origin / Origin, God of Creation |
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| − | オティーリエ・フォーケルピー = Otilier Forcelpi |
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| + | :*神 - As the only god mentioned in the text is Origin this term will be assumed to refer to him. |
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| − | *副軍将 = Lieutenant General |
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| + | *英雄 - Hero’s companion |
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| − | ヘルマン・ザヴニュ = Herman Zavnyu |
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| + | *勇者 - Hero |
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| − | *副軍将 = Lieutenant General |
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| − | ヴェルナー = Werner |
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| − | *副軍将 = Lieutenant General |
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| − | ====<u>The Church</u>==== |
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| − | =====Clergy===== |
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| − | セーラ・アンビレン = Sara Anvilen |
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| − | *光属性 = Light Attribute |
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| − | =====Paladins===== |
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| − | エド = Ed |
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| − | ジョニー = Johnny |
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| − | =====Researchers===== |
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| − | エキドナ・イペイラ = Echidna Ipeira |
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| − | ダフィズ = Daffyd |
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| − | マザー = Mother |
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| − | =====Monstrosities===== |
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| − | 渦巻くオーガ = Spiral Ogre |
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| − | *オーガ = ‘ogre’ |
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| − | 報い = ‘punishment’ |
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| − | {{Furigana|螺旋の子供たち|スパイラル・チルドレン}} = Spiral Children |
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| − | *第一世代 = First Generation |
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| − | **インク・リースクラフト = Ink Rieskraft |
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| − | ***水属性 = Water Attribute |
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| − | *第二世代 = Second Generation |
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| − | **ネクト・リンケイジ = Nekt Linkedge |
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| − | ***{{Furigana|接続|コネクション}} = Connection |
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| − | **ミュート = Mute |
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| − | **ルーク・フーループ = Rook Fulloop |
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| − | ***土属性 = Earth Attribute |
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| − | ***{{Furigana|回転|ロタジオン}} = Rotation |
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| − | **フウィス・トゥール = Fwiss Toole |
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| − | ***風属性 = Air Attribute |
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| − | ***{{Furigana|捻る|ディストーション}} = Distortion |
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| − | ====The Guild==== |
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| − | イーㇻ = Ila |
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| − | スロウ・ウラッドネス = Slowe Uradness |
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| − | ====Other==== |
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| − | デイン・フィニアース = Dane Finneas |
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| − | *“勇猛なる卑怯者” = “The Daring Dastard” |
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| − | ステュード = Stude |
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| − | リーチ・マンキャシー = Reach Mankathy |
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| − | 国王ディアン・カロウル - King Dian Karoul |
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| − | ===Flum's Cursed Equipment=== |
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| − | *魂食いのツヴァイハンダ― = The Soul-Devouring Zweihander |
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| − | *血まみれのスチールガントレット = Bloodied Steel Gauntlets |
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| − | *神を憎悪するレザーブーツ = The Misotheist Leather Boots |
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| − | ===Sword Styles=== |
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| − | {{Furigana|騎士剣術|キャバリエアーツ}} = Cavalier Arts |
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| − | *プラーナ = Prana |
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| − | *{{Furigana|気剣斬|プラーナシェイカー}} = Prana Shaker |
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| − | **{{Furigana|未到・気剣斬|プラーナシェイカー・イミテイション}} = Prana Shaker Imitation |
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| − | *{{Furigana|気剣嵐|プラーナストーム}} = Prana Storm |
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| − | *{{Furigana|気穿槍|プラーナスチィング}} - Prana Sting |
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| − | {{Furigana|我意・騎士剣術|キャバリエアーツ・エクスパンション}} - Cavalier Arts Expansion |
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| − | *{{Furigana|岩刃縋崩斬|タイタンブレイド}} - Titan Blade (Gadio) |
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| − | *{{Furigana|反・気剣斬|プラーナシェイカー・リヴァーサル}} - Prana Shaker Reversal (Flum) |
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| − | {{Furigana|虐殺規則|ジェノサイドアーツ}} = Genocide Arts |
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| − | *{{Furigana|血液弾倉|ブラッドカートリッジ}} = Blood Cartridge |
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| − | *{{Furigana|血蛇咬|アングイス}} = Anguish |
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| − | ===The Capital=== |
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| − | 中央区 = the Central Quarter |
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| − | *奴隷商人の拠点 = the slave merchant’s ‘store’ |
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| − | *マンキャシー商店 = Mankathy Mart |
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| − | 北区 = the North Quarter |
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| − | *王城 = The (Royal) Palace |
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| − | *大聖堂 = Grand Cathedral (of the Church of Origin) |
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| − | 東区 = the East Quarter |
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| − | 西区 = the West Quarter |
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| − | ===Specific Terminology=== |
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| − | *属性 = Attribute |
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| − | *希少属性 = Rare Attribute |
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| − | *リターン = Return |
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| − | :*帰還地点 = Return Point |
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| − | :*記憶 = Continue Point |
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| − | :*転入石 = Teleportation Stone |
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| − | *魔法 = Magic. The correct verb for it is ‘cast’. |
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| − | *魔族 = Demon |
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| − | *魔族領、魔族の領域 = Demon Realm |
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| − | *創造神オリジン = God of Creation, Origin / Origin, God of Creation |
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| − | :*神 = The world is polytheistic but this word refers to Origin most commonly. Therefore, it will be parsed as either ‘the gods’ or ‘Origin,’ the latter by default. |
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| − | *英雄 = Hero’s companion or chosen one |
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| − | *勇者 = Hero |
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*筋力 = Strength |
*筋力 = Strength |
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*魔力 = Magic |
*魔力 = Magic |
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*敏捷 = Agility |
*敏捷 = Agility |
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*感覚 = Intuition |
*感覚 = Intuition |
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