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She answered back with her back still turned away from me. |
She answered back with her back still turned away from me. |
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− | "It's okay. My dad's gone with business engagement to |
+ | "It's okay. My dad's gone with business engagement to Santome Principle for a while" |
"I see....." |
"I see....." |
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........It was truly a girl's room. |
........It was truly a girl's room. |
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− | This was little different when I had gotten invited to Hime's room and |
+ | This was little different when I had gotten invited to Hime's room and I'm being nervous. Sweat was running down my back with weird tension. My virginity that was making me act like a complete moron with bad nerves. It was totally out of control. |
"Oh, where is Yuuki?" |
"Oh, where is Yuuki?" |
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"You had forgotten your bag from our study hall and I came to deliver it to you" |
"You had forgotten your bag from our study hall and I came to deliver it to you" |
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− | The bag I |
+ | The bag I had given to him was placed right by their sofa. |
"I guess you were really worried about me" |
"I guess you were really worried about me" |
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− | "Of course. Kaoru was looking for you too |
+ | "Of course. Kaoru was looking for you too so make sure you send him a message" |
The doorbell rang. |
The doorbell rang. |
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− | Some |
+ | Some men knocked on the door and demanded to open the door with scraggly voice. |
"Th, that's my dad" |
"Th, that's my dad" |
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"H, hello" |
"H, hello" |
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− | Yuuki was standing there with a towel wrapped around his waist in a changing room. That was why he wasn't in the living room |
+ | Yuuki was standing there with a towel wrapped around his waist in a changing room. That was why he wasn't in the living room cause he was taking the shower. |
− | "We |
+ | "We bump into each other a lot tonight, Ta-kkun san" |
"My name is Eita Kidou" |
"My name is Eita Kidou" |
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− | "Alright then, Eita-san. But what brought you here? You came to peep |
+ | "Alright then, Eita-san. But what brought you here? You came to peep in my shower?" |
− | He was getting smart. Was he really in 5th grade? When I was his age, I was busy |
+ | He was getting smart. Was he really in 5th grade? When I was his age, I was busy ramaging for smut magazines by the river and you know what I was doing with them. |
I heard her dad's voice behind the sliding door. |
I heard her dad's voice behind the sliding door. |
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− | "Wh |
+ | " Wh, what happened to you? I thought you told me you were away with business" |
"I forgot my important business documents. I had to miss one train because of it" |
"I forgot my important business documents. I had to miss one train because of it" |
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So it was located in Japan. Santome Principe, where in the world is this place? |
So it was located in Japan. Santome Principe, where in the world is this place? |
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− | "By the way Ai, |
+ | "By the way Ai, who's shoes are they by the door?" |
"I, I don't know. Probably Yuuki's" |
"I, I don't know. Probably Yuuki's" |
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"H, he is actually still growing every day, of course! That doesn't sound too far fetched" |
"H, he is actually still growing every day, of course! That doesn't sound too far fetched" |
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− | I heard |
+ | I heard he had gone along with her story. He sounded very serious and sincere, just like his daughter. Ai-chan's square and straight trait must've come from him. |
"I'm guessing my feet will grow bigger than yours in no time" |
"I'm guessing my feet will grow bigger than yours in no time" |
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"Yeah, thanks" |
"Yeah, thanks" |
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− | "My sister brought home a man on Christmas night and |
+ | "My sister brought home a man on Christmas night and That's pretty considerable. |
− | + | That is as if she skipped 2 steps forward to be a real woman?" |
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− | "No, we didn't skip anything |
+ | "No, we didn't skip anything" |
I shouted out at him. |
I shouted out at him. |
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Masuzu Natsukawa was trying to get in touch with me! |
Masuzu Natsukawa was trying to get in touch with me! |
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− | "Ai. I hear a creepy sound |
+ | "Ai. I hear a creepy sound and I want to know where that is coming from?" |
"Oh, I see. I hear it from the bathroom, maybe?" |
"Oh, I see. I hear it from the bathroom, maybe?" |
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− | " |
+ | "The phone must be left in the bathroom! bA lot of phones these days are waterproof!" |
− | I appreciated Ai-chan's attempt and I managed to put my phone in mute. |
+ | I appreciated Ai-chan's attempt and I had managed to put my phone in mute. |
That Masuzu. She always comes back around with perfect timing. |
That Masuzu. She always comes back around with perfect timing. |
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− | "I guess now my father |
+ | "I guess now my father had to think I have a very bad taste" |
"S, sorry" |
"S, sorry" |
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− | Do I |
+ | Do I sensed Masuzu's anger........? |
I just delivered my delicious Tonjiru soup earlier for her. |
I just delivered my delicious Tonjiru soup earlier for her. |
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By all means, I couldn't call Masuzu from Ai-chan's house. |
By all means, I couldn't call Masuzu from Ai-chan's house. |
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− | I |
+ | I had cut my phone off. |
"Was it from some other girl?" |
"Was it from some other girl?" |
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"You were sweating profusely. Anyone could tell" |
"You were sweating profusely. Anyone could tell" |
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− | I held my breath |
+ | I held my breath as I was thinking he needed to shut up already. |
"Well I'm leaving now. I'll be back on New Year's Eve" |
"Well I'm leaving now. I'll be back on New Year's Eve" |
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"Ta-kkun, you may come out now" |
"Ta-kkun, you may come out now" |
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− | I |
+ | I got out of stuffy bathroom to the hallway. |
"Your dad seemed really nice" |
"Your dad seemed really nice" |
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"Yes, I know....." |
"Yes, I know....." |
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− | She didn't look happy as she was standing there with the unwrapped packages. |
+ | She didn't look happy as she was standing there with the unwrapped packages . |
"I feel bad you had to lie for me" |
"I feel bad you had to lie for me" |
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I felt I was having a very adult conversation there. |
I felt I was having a very adult conversation there. |
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− | "It's starting to look like an episode |
+ | "It's starting to look like an episode from soap opera for you guys" |
− | Yuuki came out with his pajamas on. He |
+ | Yuuki came out with his pajamas on. He spoke casually to his own family only, I guess. |
− | "Quit teasing me and go to sleep already. Don't you have sports practice in the morning?" |
+ | "Quit teasing me and go to sleep already. Don't you have a sports practice in the morning?" |
"Yeah, but I wanted to stay up to see what might go down tonight" |
"Yeah, but I wanted to stay up to see what might go down tonight" |
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− | "No, don't be silly and just |
+ | "No, don't be silly and just get in the bed now" |
− | He laughed all the way to his room. |
+ | He laughed all the way to his room. Yes now I was able to see his different side of him being in |
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+ | 5th grade. |
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"Let me apologize for my brother's attitude" |
"Let me apologize for my brother's attitude" |
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− | "But he has very good |
+ | "But he has a very good manner" |
"My mother had made sure of it" |
"My mother had made sure of it" |
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− | Not only |
+ | Not only she was sweet but very well-mannered. |
It was unlike my rotten mother. |
It was unlike my rotten mother. |
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− | "Ta-kkun, you must've been sweating all day? Just go ahead |
+ | "Ta-kkun, you must've been sweating all day? Just go ahead and take a bath and wash all off" |
"You don't mind if I get in first?" |
"You don't mind if I get in first?" |
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I borrowed her father's pajamas. |
I borrowed her father's pajamas. |
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− | His |
+ | His paperwork were placed randomly in his bookcases and there was not even a strand of hair on the floor. I didn't even smell cigarette smoke in there. Clean sheets. I felt a lot of love from |
+ | |||
+ | Ai-chan who had kept up with this room. |
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I breathed out in the bed. |
I breathed out in the bed. |
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− | This must've been the most chaotic Christmas in |
+ | This must've been the most chaotic Christmas in 16 years of my life. |
− | I wonder if my mom was |
+ | I wonder if my mom was in my house. |
− | I could never agree with her idea |
+ | I could never agree with her idea and move back in with me after she had ditched her boyfriend. |
− | NO WAY. I |
+ | NO WAY. I despised romance all together just to avoid this kind of Romance-Brain induced behavior. |
− | But |
+ | But the exact thing made Ai-chan cry. |
There was a knock on the door. |
There was a knock on the door. |
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"You s, sleep in here!? I don't think it's a good idea!" |
"You s, sleep in here!? I don't think it's a good idea!" |
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− | I again panicked like a typical cherry boy. Calm yourself down a little bit, Eita Kidou. What happened to the smartest boy in his class? |
+ | I, again panicked like a typical cherry boy. Calm yourself down a little bit, Eita Kidou. What happened to the smartest boy in his class? |
But she ignored it and crawled into my bed anyway. |
But she ignored it and crawled into my bed anyway. |
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"Excuse me" |
"Excuse me" |
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− | "I said that |
+ | "I said that was not a good idea!" |
I turned my back away from her. |
I turned my back away from her. |
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It was so very warm. |
It was so very warm. |
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− | "I just can't celebrate you and Chiwa as a couple. I |
+ | "I just can't celebrate you and Chiwa as a couple. I must be honest even though that might make you hate mel But that's my true feeling" |
".........." |
".........." |
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Her words made me realize one thing. |
Her words made me realize one thing. |
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− | What if I kept my no-romance attitude all through my life |
+ | What if I kept my no-romance attitude all through my single life till I die. |
Then I wonder what Ai-chan would do? |
Then I wonder what Ai-chan would do? |
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Would she stay alone forever for me? |
Would she stay alone forever for me? |
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− | Or |
+ | Or she might give up on me and find somebody else instead? |
I vaguely imagined that she might pick the latter. |
I vaguely imagined that she might pick the latter. |
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− | Romance is nothing but a phase, like a fever. She should forget about me after graduation. |
+ | Romance is nothing but a phase, like a fever. She should forget about me after her graduation. |
But I was starting to think otherwise. |
But I was starting to think otherwise. |
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".....Yes" |
".....Yes" |
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− | "She was like that |
+ | "She was like that still but up until I was in grade school, my parents were so much in love, like an ideal couple. But after they fell out of love, all that mess had happened. |
− | "That made you not |
+ | "That made you not believing in love anymore is your excuse?" |
"Yup" |
"Yup" |
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I was so confused. |
I was so confused. |
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− | "Me, ending up with Chiwa? No way. I consider her as my little sister and do love her like |
+ | "Me, ending up with Chiwa? No way. I consider her as my little sister and do love her like my own, but I never had any romantic feeling." |
"What is the difference? Why do you try to separate them?" |
"What is the difference? Why do you try to separate them?" |
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− | "I don't like anybody. I |
+ | "I don't like anybody. I would never fall in love" |
Ai-chan had gotten out of the bed. |
Ai-chan had gotten out of the bed. |
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− | "If that's so then I don't know |
+ | "If that's so then I don't know if I should give up or not." |
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It looked rough but thick and warmly knitted. |
It looked rough but thick and warmly knitted. |
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− | "You |
+ | "You are to keep it for doing this to me. You don't have to wear it in front of Chiwa." |
"Thank you," |
"Thank you," |