Editing Ore to Kanojo no Moeyo Pen:Volume 1 Prologue
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A gorgeous girl who is about two years older than me (...... if I'm not wrong, her name is "Kisaragi Ririne) says in delight without covering up her large bust, on the bed in her underwear right before my very eyes. |
A gorgeous girl who is about two years older than me (...... if I'm not wrong, her name is "Kisaragi Ririne) says in delight without covering up her large bust, on the bed in her underwear right before my very eyes. |
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β | "Kyahhoohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Ririne-san's |
+ | "Kyahhoohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Ririne-san's breeeeeaaassts! Please let me bury my face into those large breeeaaassts!" |
A beautiful girl, whose visage of innocence has yet to leave her, turns and tosses about the floor while making those strange sounds towards that 2D big-breasted lovely girl --- Kirisagi Ririne --- inside the PC. |
A beautiful girl, whose visage of innocence has yet to leave her, turns and tosses about the floor while making those strange sounds towards that 2D big-breasted lovely girl --- Kirisagi Ririne --- inside the PC. |
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Sweat covered my forehead as I beheld her. |
Sweat covered my forehead as I beheld her. |
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β | "How's that, Kimijima-kun! Don't you find it awesome!? The adult charm of an older big sister! And the |
+ | "How's that, Kimijima-kun! Don't you find it awesome!? The adult charm of an older big sister! And the breasts! Those large breasts!! Don't you want to bury your face into those breasts!?" |
She says in heartfelt bliss with the broadest smile that I have ever seen from her. |
She says in heartfelt bliss with the broadest smile that I have ever seen from her. |
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β | "The big sister archetype Ririne-san who's always calmly leading the protagonist along, making such a cute voice in her disheveled ecchi state...... this contrast! Isn't this the most amazing thing! No matter how many times I look at this frame, it's still just as godly! Aah...... these fair, soft, squishy |
+ | "The big sister archetype Ririne-san who's always calmly leading the protagonist along, making such a cute voice in her disheveled ecchi state...... this contrast! Isn't this the most amazing thing! No matter how many times I look at this frame, it's still just as godly! Aah...... these fair, soft, squishy breasts......! That's the godly eroge artist Tatara-san for you, he did a really great job, didn't he ~!" |
The lines she spouted from sheer excitement, on top of being fast, were mixed in with words that I do not understand, and I can hardly comprehend what she was saying. |
The lines she spouted from sheer excitement, on top of being fast, were mixed in with words that I do not understand, and I can hardly comprehend what she was saying. |