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Gen looked at Satsuki with death in his eyes, while Satsuki fearlessly stared back with scorn.
 
Gen looked at Satsuki with death in his eyes, while Satsuki fearlessly stared back with scorn.
   
A death-match …… did not happen.
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A deathmatch …… did not happen.
   
 
“Huh. There’s no point in messing around with a weakling.”
 
“Huh. There’s no point in messing around with a weakling.”
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“I was so angered by you that I couldn’t concentrate on the lessons the entire morning.”
 
“I was so angered by you that I couldn’t concentrate on the lessons the entire morning.”
   
“No, you had better concentrate on the lessons,” countered Moroha. “I’m not asking you to study till you spit blood out, but since the fees are free, please don’t waste the chance to get a good education.”
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“No, you had better concentrate on the lessons,” contered Moroha. “I’m not asking you to study till you spit blood out, but since the fees are free, please don’t waste the chance to get a good education.”
   
 
“This….I will admit that I am at fault on this matter,” said the embarrassed Satsuki as she played with her ponytail after being scolded by Moroha.
 
“This….I will admit that I am at fault on this matter,” said the embarrassed Satsuki as she played with her ponytail after being scolded by Moroha.
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“The me just now, who thought you were a model student, was an idiot,” Satsuki sighed exaggeratedly.
 
“The me just now, who thought you were a model student, was an idiot,” Satsuki sighed exaggeratedly.
   
“Forget it, there will be no next time. I don’t want to be disciplined for breaking the school rules.”
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“Forget it, that’ll be no next time. I don’t want to be disciplined for breaking the school rules.”
   
 
Looking off to the side, she sucked greedily at the orange juice.
 
Looking off to the side, she sucked greedily at the orange juice.
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His statement did make some sense.
 
His statement did make some sense.
   
But only in a twisted manner, similar to the logic of a thief.
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But only in a twisted manner, similar to the logics of a thief.
   
 
“Ah, so that’s it. Isurugi-kun is so clever. That’s great.”
 
“Ah, so that’s it. Isurugi-kun is so clever. That’s great.”
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Moroha felt Satsuki nodding her head.
 
Moroha felt Satsuki nodding her head.
   
“Still, I wasn’t lonely at all. I had Salacia’s memories and dreamed of Fraga every night when I sleep. To Salacia, Fraga was her world and everything. To me, it was the same.”
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“Still, I wasn’t lonely at all. I had Salacia’s memories and dreamt of Fraga every night when I sleep. To Salacia, Fraga was her world and everything. To me, it was the same.”
   
 
She confessed all that in a mournful voice and a soft tone. To Satsuki, her beloved Onii-sama is a supremely important existence.
 
She confessed all that in a mournful voice and a soft tone. To Satsuki, her beloved Onii-sama is a supremely important existence.
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“Eh…..what?” Satsuki asked with a doubtful expression.
 
“Eh…..what?” Satsuki asked with a doubtful expression.
   
Then, her face spoiled by crying was blushed a faint gentle red.
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Then, her face spoilt by crying was blushed a faint gentle red.
   
 
Moroha continue purposefully:
 
Moroha continue purposefully:
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Even when Gen started shouting, Moroha remained silent. He only looked back at them with his ever increasingly deepening and darkening fearsome eyes.
 
Even when Gen started shouting, Moroha remained silent. He only looked back at them with his ever increasingly deepening and darkening fearsome eyes.
   
(This guy… can actually give this kind of look…)
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(This guy….can actually give this kind of look…)
   
 
Gen could feel sweat beneath his clothes.
 
Gen could feel sweat beneath his clothes.
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“Still, it’s not like I don’t understand your feelings. So let’s change locations. So why don’t you let me handle this matter? If you listen to me, I guarantee the two of you will get to fight as much as you want.” Tanaka-sensei said as he wiped his black-rimmed glasses with his handkerchief.
 
“Still, it’s not like I don’t understand your feelings. So let’s change locations. So why don’t you let me handle this matter? If you listen to me, I guarantee the two of you will get to fight as much as you want.” Tanaka-sensei said as he wiped his black-rimmed glasses with his handkerchief.
   
Gen, intrigued, nodded his head. Moroha appeared without dissension ——
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Gen, intrigued, nodded his head. Moroha appeared without dissention ——
   
 
In this way, the curtains raised for the battle stage between Moroha and Gen.
 
In this way, the curtains raised for the battle stage between Moroha and Gen.

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