Editing Seiken Tsukai No World Break:Volume 1 Prologue

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Her eyes are closed, but what’s alarming is that there's totally no breathing motion on her packed chest. It looked like…Moroha forced down his rising panic, and rushed forward to check on her condition. Supporting himself on her chair, he lean down and put his face in front of hers.
 
Her eyes are closed, but what’s alarming is that there's totally no breathing motion on her packed chest. It looked like…Moroha forced down his rising panic, and rushed forward to check on her condition. Supporting himself on her chair, he lean down and put his face in front of hers.
   
Her neck is so white that one could not imagine that there’s blood flowing under the skin.
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Her neck is so white that one could not imaging that there’s blood flowing under the skin.
   
 
(You are joking. Tell me this isn’t happening…)
 
(You are joking. Tell me this isn’t happening…)
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Gently but firmly his face is pulled right to the front of Shizuno’s face.
 
Gently but firmly his face is pulled right to the front of Shizuno’s face.
   
Having woken up silently and stealthily, her eyes are already opened.
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Having Waken up silently and stealthily, her eyes are already opened.
   
 
Those deep dark orbs are concentrated on Moroha’s features.
 
Those deep dark orbs are concentrated on Moroha’s features.
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While harmlessly joking around, this is proving to be quite fun. Moroha really thought that.
 
While harmlessly joking around, this is proving to be quite fun. Moroha really thought that.
   
“Why are the two of you looking like you are enjoying yourselves? Even though it’s your first meeting?”
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“Why are the two of you looks like you are enjoying yourselves? Even though it’s your first meeting?”
   
 
Moroha heard this very displeased voice. For Satsuki who was temporarily pushed out of the scene, she started expelling her angst as only a young girl could, with tears in her eyes.
 
Moroha heard this very displeased voice. For Satsuki who was temporarily pushed out of the scene, she started expelling her angst as only a young girl could, with tears in her eyes.

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