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“Ah, bodoh!”
 
“Ah, bodoh!”
   
Kamito tanpa sadar berteriak.
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Kamito merasa menang besar.
   
 
Claire melepaskan dan kehilangan kendali dari cambuk apinya, dan menebas pepohonan di belakangnya. Pelan-pelan, pohon-pohon besar itu bergerak jatuh tepat diposisinya.
 
Claire melepaskan dan kehilangan kendali dari cambuk apinya, dan menebas pepohonan di belakangnya. Pelan-pelan, pohon-pohon besar itu bergerak jatuh tepat diposisinya.
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Bersamaan dengan suara keras yang memekakkan telinga, tubuh Kamito terlempar tinggi ke udara.
 
Bersamaan dengan suara keras yang memekakkan telinga, tubuh Kamito terlempar tinggi ke udara.
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=== Bagian 2 ===
 
=== Bagian 2 ===

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