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===Part 1===
 
===Part 1===
   
“Absolute Blade Arts Final Form, Last Strike・Dual!”
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“Absolute Blade Arts - «Final Form, Last Strike・Dual»!”
   
There were the Demon Slayer in his right hand and the Vorpal Sword held in his left hand.
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There were the «Demon Slayer» in his right hand and the «Vorpal Sword» held in his left hand.
   
 
Crossing each other, the light and dark swords smashed Rubia Elstein’s sword.
 
Crossing each other, the light and dark swords smashed Rubia Elstein’s sword.
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It was a slash of great speed released at super point-blank range.
 
It was a slash of great speed released at super point-blank range.
   
The sword tip of Vorpal Sword, glowing in the color of darkness, disappeared into her chest like it was being sucked in.
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The sword tip of «Vorpal Sword», glowing in the color of darkness, disappeared into her chest like it was being sucked in.
   
 
“…Ka…Ha—!”
 
“…Ka…Ha—!”
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—However, that strong feeling was also something of a moment.
 
—However, that strong feeling was also something of a moment.
   
“Sorry. I’ll be taking back the title of the Strongest Blade Dancer.”
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“Sorry. I’ll be taking back the title of the «Strongest Blade Dancer».”
   
 
While the demon sword in his left hand was stabbed in her chest—
 
While the demon sword in his left hand was stabbed in her chest—
   
Kamito brandished the Demon Slayer held in a reverse grip.
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Kamito brandished the «Demon Slayer» held in a reverse grip.
   
 
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===Part 2===
   
Within the whirling flames and winds, fragments of Laevateinn fluttered down like sparks.
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Within the whirling flames and winds, fragments of «Laevateinn» fluttered down like sparks.
   
 
Having received that close blow, Rubia’s body danced in midair and violently hit the ground.
 
Having received that close blow, Rubia’s body danced in midair and violently hit the ground.
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“…Kk….Ah…!”
 
“…Kk….Ah…!”
   
What Kamito let loose was a blow that was not materialized and delivered only mental damage to the opponent. There was no damage to her physical body.
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What Kamito let loose was a blow that did not materialize and delivered only mental damage to the opponent. There was no damage to her physical body.
   
 
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While stabilizing his wild breathing, Kamito muttered within his heart.
 
While stabilizing his wild breathing, Kamito muttered within his heart.
   
She probably had most of her power drained out by Laevateinn.
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She probably had most of her power drained out by « Laevateinn».
   
 
Even so, having received that on one’s body and staying conscious wasn’t something ordinary.
 
Even so, having received that on one’s body and staying conscious wasn’t something ordinary.
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When Kamito was entrusted the secret skill by Greyworth, he had completely fainted.
 
When Kamito was entrusted the secret skill by Greyworth, he had completely fainted.
   
(So, this is the power of the Sacred Maiden…)
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(So, this is the power of the «Sacred Maiden»…)
   
Areishia Idriss—The Sacred Queen that destroyed the Demon King thousands of years ago.
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Areishia Idriss—«The Sacred Queen» that destroyed the «Demon King» thousands of years ago.
   
 
Rubia Elstein was the reincarnation that succeeded that power.
 
Rubia Elstein was the reincarnation that succeeded that power.
   
In other words, she was an existence that would have opposed Kamito, who succeeded the power of the Demon King. That power transformed a sickly girl, who had never properly wielded a sword, into the strongest elementalist.
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In other words, she was an existence that would have opposed Kamito, who succeeded the power of the «Demon King». That power transformed a sickly girl, who had never properly wielded a sword, into the strongest elementalist.
   
 
In any case—
 
In any case—
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Kamito was looking down at Rubia gasping in agony while he calmly put down his left and right swords.
 
Kamito was looking down at Rubia gasping in agony while he calmly put down his left and right swords.
   
The blade dance had completely concluded. Although she had the power of the Sacred Maiden, having lost her elemental waffe meant that she no longer had the power to fight.
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The blade dance had completely concluded. Although she had the power of the «Sacred Maiden», having lost her elemental waffe meant that she no longer had the power to fight.
   
 
(…Well, it’s the same for me too though—)
 
(…Well, it’s the same for me too though—)
   
 
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The moment that air of tension was gone, his vision grew hazy and intense sleepiness assailed him.
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The moment that air of tension was gone, his vision grew hazy and intense sleepiness came assailing.
   
 
(…Like I thought, releasing two elemental waffe at the same time was a little too much…)
 
(…Like I thought, releasing two elemental waffe at the same time was a little too much…)
   
Demon Slayer and Vorpal Sword. Both were extraordinary elemental waffe. Even if it was Kamito, wielding them both at the same time would certainly rob him off all his divine power.
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«Demon Slayer» & «Vorpal Sword». Both were extraordinary elemental waffe. Even if it was Kamito, wielding them both at the same time would certainly rob him of all his divine power.
   
The spirit seals on both his hands lost their glow, and at that moment.
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The «Spirit Seal» on both his hands lost their glow, and at that moment.
   
Strength suddenly left from his knees and he tumbled over his steps.
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Strength suddenly escaped from his knees and he tumbled over his steps.
   
 
“…Kamito!”
 
“…Kamito!”
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His consciousness grew hazy. However, only his hands that held both his left and right swords wouldn’t let go no matter what.
 
His consciousness grew hazy. However, only his hands that held both his left and right swords wouldn’t let go no matter what.
   
Even when Kamito fell as the Demon King, Est had sworn to be together with him as the "Demon's Sword". Then—
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Even when Kamito fell as the «Demon King», Est had sworn to be together with him as the «Demon's Sword». Then—
   
 
(Restia…)
 
(Restia…)
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“…Eh? W-Why?”
 
“…Eh? W-Why?”
   
“I had once awakened as the Demon King. The Demon King’s power is the power of the reincarnated Ren Ashdoll—”
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“I had once awakened as the «Demon King». What the Demon King’s power is is the power of the reincarnated Ren Ashdoll—”
   
 
“In other words, it’ll cause a backlash with my divine power that’s cloaked in the holy attribute?”
 
“In other words, it’ll cause a backlash with my divine power that’s cloaked in the holy attribute?”
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Kamito made a light nod.
 
Kamito made a light nod.
   
To begin with, Kamito’s body had a constitution that repelled healing magic.
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To begin with, Kamito’s body had a constitution that repelled against healing magic.
   
Because of that, Fianna had to take a roundabout method of making direct contact with her skin to send her divine power in to boost Kamito’s own healing ability, however—
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Because of that, Fianna had to take a roundabout method of making direct contact with her skin to send her divine power in and boosting Kamito’s own healing ability, however—
   
If she did that in Kamito’s current state of just having awakened as the Demon King, there was no telling what kind of effect it would have.
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If she did that in Kamito’s current state of just awakening as the Demon King, there was no telling what kind of effect it would have.
   
 
Even if it was an unlikely thing, he couldn’t let her face such dangers.
 
Even if it was an unlikely thing, he couldn’t let her face such dangers.
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Kamito coldly denied.
 
Kamito coldly denied.
   
“As I recall, you did say that the Sacred Maiden is the opposing existence to the Demon King. In other words, that means if my Demon King powers grow, your powers too would increase by my growth. Am I wrong?”
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“As I recall, you did say that the «Sacred Maiden» is the Anti-Unit of the «Demon King». That, in other words, means if my «Demon King» powers in me grow, your powers too would increase by my growth. Am I wrong?”
   
 
…She did not reply. The same ruby pupils as Claire’s just glared at Kamito loathsomely.
 
…She did not reply. The same ruby pupils as Claire’s just glared at Kamito loathsomely.
   
“But your plans failed. I had shut out the power of the Demon King that was beginning to awaken. Which means—”
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“But your plans failed. I had shut out the power of the «Demon King» that was beginning to awaken. Which means—“
   
 
Taking a light breath, Kamito concluded.
 
Taking a light breath, Kamito concluded.
   
 
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“Your Sacred Maiden powers that made you the Strongest Blade Dancer also got shut out at the same time, right?”
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“Your «Sacred Maiden» powers that made you the «Strongest Blade Dancer» also got shut out at the same time, right?”
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
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“…What?”
 
“…What?”
   
“It doesn’t…mean that the powers of the Demon King have completely vanished yet!—”
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“It doesn’t…mean that the powers of the «Demon King» have completely vanished yet!—“
   
 
A blue flame was created in Rubia’s right hand.
 
A blue flame was created in Rubia’s right hand.
   
Frost Blaze—A heretic flame that was disconnected with the logic and laws of this world.
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«Frost Blaze»—A heretic flame that was disconnected with the logic and laws of this world.
   
 
“…The two of you, get away from me!”
 
“…The two of you, get away from me!”
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“Claire!?”
 
“Claire!?”
   
“O’ true flames, carved in blood of ancient times, dwell in my hand and devour flames—”
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“O’ true flames, carved in blood of ancient times, dwell in my hand and devour flames—“
   
 
As she quickly spun the words of an aria in the spirit language, crimson flames were clad over her hand.
 
As she quickly spun the words of an aria in the spirit language, crimson flames were clad over her hand.
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Those were heretic flames that would oppose Rubia’s flames.
 
Those were heretic flames that would oppose Rubia’s flames.
   
“Those are the flames that return all to nothing—End of Vermillion!”
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“That’s the flames that returns all to nothing—«End of Vermillion»!”
   
 
Those dignified words trembled the atmosphere, and the crimson flames were released.
 
Those dignified words trembled the atmosphere, and the crimson flames were released.
   
The raging flames of demise collided into the Frost Blaze Rubia released in midway—
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The raging flames of demise collided into the «Frost Blaze» Rubia released in midway—
   
 
“…!?”
 
“…!?”
   
The explosion that would normally happen from a collision between two spirit magics didn’t occur.
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An explosion that would normally happen from a collision between two spirit magic didn’t happen.
   
 
The crimson flames Claire let loose ''burned out'' Rubia’s flames in an instant.
 
The crimson flames Claire let loose ''burned out'' Rubia’s flames in an instant.
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And, eventually disappeared into nothing, without leaving any traces behind.
 
And, eventually disappeared into nothing, without leaving any traces behind.
   
(This is Claire’s Flame-Burning Flames…)
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(This is Claire’s «Flame-Burning Flames»…)
   
 
Kamito gulped. He had heard about it but this was the first time he saw it himself.
 
Kamito gulped. He had heard about it but this was the first time he saw it himself.
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Claire promptly put her hand down and stepped forward.
 
Claire promptly put her hand down and stepped forward.
   
“I will definitely not let Kamito be the Demon King.”
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“I will definitely not let Kamito be the «Demon King».”
   
 
The Elstein sisters confronted each other.
 
The Elstein sisters confronted each other.
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“—''The truth four years ago''”
 
“—''The truth four years ago''”
   
“Claire, it’s dangerous—”
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“Claire, it’s dangerous—“
   
 
At the same time, Kamito gave a warning.
 
At the same time, Kamito gave a warning.
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“…Tell me, Nee-sama. Why did you rebel against the Elemental Lord that day?”
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“…Tell me, Nee-sama. Why did you rebel against the «Elemental Lord» that day?”
   
 
“It has nothing to with you.”
 
“It has nothing to with you.”
   
“There’s no way it has nothing to with me. After all—”
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“There’s no way it has nothing to with me. After all—“
   
 
“Shut it!”
 
“Shut it!”
   
“After all, Nee-sama—”
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“After all, Nee-sama—“
   
 
“… I said shut it!”
 
“… I said shut it!”
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Looking up at the empty skies, she muttered with a sigh.
 
Looking up at the empty skies, she muttered with a sigh.
   
“I don’t have much time remaining. Now that I’ve failed to awaken the Demon King here, the means to kill the Elemental Lords no longer exist—”
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“I don’t have much time remaining. Now that I’ve failed to awaken the «Demon King» here, the means to kill the «Elemental Lords» no longer exist—“
   
 
(…Time remaining?)
 
(…Time remaining?)
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“…”
 
“…”
   
“You were once a Queen but why would you try to kill the Elemental Lords?”
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“You were once a «Queen» but why would you try to kill the «Elemental Lords»?”
   
 
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Claire gently raised her crying face.
 
Claire gently raised her crying face.
   
“Please, tell me the truth. The reason why you had to betray the Elemental Lord.”
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“Please, tell me the truth. The reason why you had to betray the «Elemental Lord».”
   
 
Rubia—
 
Rubia—
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Her lips slightly trembled and she forced out a small sigh.
 
Her lips slightly trembled and she forced out a small sigh.
   
“You guys will never believe it. Even I couldn’t believe it until I saw it with my own eyes. That such a thing exists in this world—”
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“You guys will never believe it. Even I couldn’t believe it until I saw it with my own eyes. That such a thing exists in this world—“
   
 
“I believe you, Nee-sama. Regardless of what others say.”
 
“I believe you, Nee-sama. Regardless of what others say.”
   
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“Claire—“
“Claire—”
 
   
 
Rubia’s pupils wavered.
 
Rubia’s pupils wavered.
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And—
 
And—
   
“Four years ago, the reason I rebelled against the Elemental Lord was—”
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“Four years ago, the reason I rebelled against the «Elemental Lord» was—“
   
 
She calmly opened her mouth.
 
She calmly opened her mouth.

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