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===Part 2===
 
===Part 2===
   
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The border region between the Alphas Theocracy and the Quina Empire was a vast desert. This wide expanse of land, with its broken leylines, forsaken by the power of spirits, was known in spirit language as "Ghul-a-val," meaning the Desert of Red Death.
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The border region between the Alphas Theocracy and the Quina Empire was a vast desert. This wide expanse of land, with its broken leylines, forsaken by the power of spirits, was known in spirit language as "Gul a Val," meaning the Desert of Red Death.
   
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Due to the violent demon beasts living in the desert and the red sandstorms howling and raging throughout the daytime, even the greedy Theocracy merchants had no choice but to take a detour along the coast when traveling to the Quina Empire. From the Quina Empire's standpoint, Ghul-a-val was the giant obstacle and only reason why they had not annexed the vast lands of the continent's center.
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Due to the violent demon beasts living in the desert and the red sandstorms howling and raging throughout the daytime, even the greedy Theocracy merchants had no choice but to take a detour along the coast when traveling to the Quina Empire. From the Quina Empire's standpoint, Gul a Val was the giant obstacle and only reason why they had not annexed the vast lands of the continent's center.
   
 
This was the most desolate land on the continent, inhospitable to spirits, much less humans.
 
This was the most desolate land on the continent, inhospitable to spirits, much less humans.
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"Hey princess, is that thing really in this shithole? We've walked around for how many days now and it'd be shit outta luck to die here out in the open."
 
"Hey princess, is that thing really in this shithole? We've walked around for how many days now and it'd be shit outta luck to die here out in the open."
   
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"According to Theocracy lore, the Demon King's Tomb is believed to lie in Ghul-a-val. When one who is truly worthy makes a visit, the Tomb will reveal itself—"
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"According to Theocracy lore, the Demon King's Tomb is believed to lie in Gul a Val. When one who is truly worthy makes a visit, the Tomb will reveal itself—"
   
 
Walking behind the young man, the girl replied to his profanity-laced query.
 
Walking behind the young man, the girl replied to his profanity-laced query.

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