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==Chapter 2 - Areishia Spirit Academy==
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==Chapter 2: Areishia Spirit Academy==
   
 
===Part 1===
 
===Part 1===
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Areishia Spirit Academy.
 
Areishia Spirit Academy.
   
In this institution, all the princess maidens from across the empire are gathered and trained into full-fledged elementalists.
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In this institution, all the princess maidens from across the empire are gathered and trained into fully fledged elementalists.
   
With a beautiful garden behind its castle walls, the school building, lined with elegant spires seemed very much like the palace of a princess. —In fact, this was nearly entirely correct. Out of all the students attending this academy, almost all of them are genuine and proper noble ladies.
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Having a beautiful garden behind its castle walls, the school building lined with elegant spires seemed very much like a palace of a princess. —In fact, this was nearly entirely correct. Out of all the students attending this academy, almost all of them are genuine and proper noble ladies.
   
 
"However, to unexpectedly have such a terrible encounter..."
 
"However, to unexpectedly have such a terrible encounter..."
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Kamito muttered to himself as he walked along the red carpet covered hallway on the second floor of the school building.
 
Kamito muttered to himself as he walked along the red carpet covered hallway on the second floor of the school building.
   
"Lost inside the forest, I wound up contracted to a sealed spirit, and furthermore..."
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"Lost inside the forest, I winded up contracted to a sealed spirit, and furthermore..."
   
 
Since Kamito snatched the sealed spirit from her, that crimson haired young girl apparently had her eyes on him.
 
Since Kamito snatched the sealed spirit from her, that crimson haired young girl apparently had her eyes on him.
   
After that—Claire Rouge guided Kamito to the academy school building.
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After that— Claire Rouge guided Kamito to the academy school building.
   
 
That was good, but apparently her claim that Kamito was to become her personal contracted spirit was serious. Round and round, the whip was coiled around Kamito. Rather than being guided, it might be more appropriate to say that he was being dragged, and they walked through the forest in that fashion.
 
That was good, but apparently her claim that Kamito was to become her personal contracted spirit was serious. Round and round, the whip was coiled around Kamito. Rather than being guided, it might be more appropriate to say that he was being dragged, and they walked through the forest in that fashion.
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(What? What made you think I wouldn't run away...)
 
(What? What made you think I wouldn't run away...)
   
That young girl was an outstanding elementalist, but her common knowledge of society was that of a naive lady.
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That young girl was an outstanding elementalist but, her common knowledge of society was that of a naive lady.
   
 
"Anyways, before I am found by that girl again, I need to hurry up and meet Greyworth."
 
"Anyways, before I am found by that girl again, I need to hurry up and meet Greyworth."
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Kamito took out a sheet of paper from his breast pocket.
 
Kamito took out a sheet of paper from his breast pocket.
   
Forty days ago, he had received a letter from Headmistress Greyworth.
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Forty days ago, he had received a letter from Academy Director Greyworth.
   
 
If, what was written on it is true—
 
If, what was written on it is true—
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Nevertheless, Kamito could not deny the possibility that it was just some bait to lure him here.
 
Nevertheless, Kamito could not deny the possibility that it was just some bait to lure him here.
   
(... It is useless to ponder on it. After all, the other party is that Witch.)
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(... It is useless to ponder on it. After all the other party is that Witch.)
   
 
And, here Kamito stopped in his tracks.
 
And, here Kamito stopped in his tracks.
   
In front of him was the thick, wooden front door: the Headmistress' Office.
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In front of him was the thick wooden front door: the Academy Director's Office.
   
 
As Kamito was about to knock on the door—
 
As Kamito was about to knock on the door—
   
"Headmistress, I can't agree with this!"
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"Academy Director, I can't agree with this!"
   
 
Suddenly, a voice could be heard from inside the room.
 
Suddenly, a voice could be heard from inside the room.
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It seemed that they were occupied currently.
 
It seemed that they were occupied currently.
   
(... It can't be helped, I'll kill some time outside for a while.)
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(... It can't be helped, I'll kill some time for a while outside.)
   
 
While Kamito was moving away from the door—
 
While Kamito was moving away from the door—
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"Ar-Are you suggesting that we lack the strength?"
 
"Ar-Are you suggesting that we lack the strength?"
   
"Nonsense. I'm not belittling the power of your chivalric orders, but, ''He is special''"
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"Nonsense. I'm not belittling the power of your chivalric orders, but, '''He is special'''"
   
"... You mean the fact that he can communicate with a spirit despite being male?"
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"... You mean the fact that he can communicate with a spirit despite being a male?"
   
 
"Yes, but that is not all of it."
 
"Yes, but that is not all of it."
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<nowiki>*</nowiki>Bang* – suddenly, the office door was violently opened.
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Bang* – suddenly, the office door was violently opened.
   
From the door which was kicked open, there appeared—
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From the door which was kicked opened, there appeared—
   
With a beautiful slender leg which was swung up high, a pony tailed beautiful young girl.
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With beautiful slender leg which was highly swung upward, a pony tailed beautiful young girl.
   
 
A pair of sharp, long eyes. A dignified, handsome feature.
 
A pair of sharp, long eyes. A dignified, handsome feature.
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She wore a silver breastplate on top of her uniform, and it looked like the outfit of a valiant knight.
 
She wore a silver breastplate on top of her uniform, and it looked like the outfit of a valiant knight.
   
Inside the leaf pleated skirt, a pair of lace underwear flew into his sight.
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Inside the leaf pleated skirt, a lace underwear flew into his sight.
   
 
"Black!?"
 
"Black!?"
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"Wha... Y-You, Insolent Person!"
 
"Wha... Y-You, Insolent Person!"
   
The young girl kicked Kamito with her whole strength in his stomach which caused him to involuntarily blurt out.
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The young girl kicked Kamito with her whole strength on his stomach which caused him to involuntary blurt out.
   
 
"Guoh!"
 
"Guoh!"
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The sudden attack caught him off guard, blowing Kamito away.
 
The sudden attack caught him off guard, blowing Kamito away.
   
In an instant, the young girl shortened the distance between them and pressed Kamito down on the floor, unsheathing the blade at her hip.
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In an instant, the young girl shortened the distance between them and pressed Kamito down on the floor, unsheathing the blade at her hips.
   
 
Then she thrust it violently, pointing the edge of her blade onto his cheek.
 
Then she thrust it violently, pointing the edge of her blade onto his cheek.
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Shooting a cold piercing look.
 
Shooting a cold piercing look.
   
Then, those clear, reddish-brown colored eyes widened. <!--鳶色; とび色 【とびいろ】 (n) reddish brown -->
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Then, those clear reddish brown colored pair of eyes widened. <!--鳶色; とび色 【とびいろ】 (n) reddish brown -->
   
 
"You... are you... actually a man!?"
 
"You... are you... actually a man!?"
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A displeased voice came from the back of the office.
 
A displeased voice came from the back of the office.
   
Kamito, who was still being held down by the young girl, slowly raised his eyes.
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Kamito who was still being held down by the young girl, slowly raised his eyes.
   
Over there—there was the figure of a witch completely unchanged from three years ago.
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Over there— there was the figure of a witch completely unchanged from three years ago.
   
 
Her ash-blonde hair was gently waving.
 
Her ash-blonde hair was gently waving.
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Kamito spat out bitterly in his head.
 
Kamito spat out bitterly in his head.
   
Dusk Witch—Greyworth Ciel Mais.
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Dusk Witch — Greyworth Ciel Mais.
   
 
With the appearance of a bewitching, carnivorous, beautiful woman, she was an experienced Spirit Knight that boasted the title of being one of the twelve Knight Generals of the Empire.
 
With the appearance of a bewitching, carnivorous, beautiful woman, she was an experienced Spirit Knight that boasted the title of being one of the twelve Knight Generals of the Empire.
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"... You just don't change, Dusk Witch."
 
"... You just don't change, Dusk Witch."
   
To the sarcastic response while he was still pressed down on his back, the witch let out a smile.
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TO the sarcastic response while he was still pressed down on his back, the witch let out a smile.
   
 
"Kazehaya Kamito!? Then, this guy..."
 
"Kazehaya Kamito!? Then, this guy..."
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"Wha-What are you doing!?"
 
"Wha-What are you doing!?"
   
"You-You indecent... I will make you into a marinated salmon, in an instant!"
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"You-You indecent... I will make you into a marinated salmon, in an instance!"
   
"Wait, calm down! I'm not a salmon!"
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"Wait, Calm down! I'm not a salmon!"
   
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Zing*— a sharp slash, Kamito's forelock was cut.
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Zing*— a sharp slash, Kamito's forelock was cut.
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(Are all the girls of the academy like this?)
 
(Are all the girls of the academy like this?)
   
Being driven to the wall. Kamito felt the seriousness of the threat to his life—at that time.
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Being driven to the wall. Kamito felt the seriousness of the threat to his life— at that time.
   
 
"Sheath your blade, Ellis. Any personal struggle in this academy is prohibited."
 
"Sheath your blade, Ellis. Any personal struggle in this academy is prohibited."
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Greyworth's voice called out, the girl named Ellis stopped instantly.
 
Greyworth's voice called out, the girl named Ellis stopped instantly.
   
"H-Headmistress... I'm just—"
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"Ac-Academy Director... I'm just—"
   
 
"Do I need to say the same thing twice? Ellis Fahrengart."
 
"Do I need to say the same thing twice? Ellis Fahrengart."
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"So, you are already at that age. Well, to be pushed down by Ellis' delicate body hidden under the armor, most boys would not be able to control themselves."
 
"So, you are already at that age. Well, to be pushed down by Ellis' delicate body hidden under the armor, most boys would not be able to control themselves."
   
"H-Headmistress!?"
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"A-Academy Director!?"
   
 
"Wait, please don't say anything that will cause a misunderstanding! I'm—"
 
"Wait, please don't say anything that will cause a misunderstanding! I'm—"
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... Indeed. She was wearing her armor so it was hard to tell, but certainly, Claire Rouge's pitiful breasts were incomparable to hers.
 
... Indeed. She was wearing her armor so it was hard to tell, but certainly, Claire Rouge's pitiful breasts were incomparable to hers.
   
"Y-You, w-where are you looking to!"
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"Yo-You, whe-where are you looking to!"
   
 
"My bad..."
 
"My bad..."
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Kamito quickly averted his eyes.
 
Kamito quickly averted his eyes.
   
"Guh, if you weren't the headmistress' guest, I'd have made you into a Pot-au-feu already!"
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"Guh, if you weren't the guest of Academy Director, I'd have made you into a Pot-au-feu already!"
   
 
"... Why a Pot-au-feu!"
 
"... Why a Pot-au-feu!"
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Greyworth's cold voice informed her.
 
Greyworth's cold voice informed her.
   
"I-I can't leave you alone in the same room with... this man. If he impudently lusts towards the headmistress..."
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"I-I can't leave you alone in the same room with... this man. If he impudently lusts towards the Academy Director..."
   
 
"There is no such thing!"
 
"There is no such thing!"
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"What..."
 
"What..."
   
"Mm, Your face became red, lad, quite cute. By the way the color is—"
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"Mm, Your face became red, boy, quite cute. By the way the color is—"
   
 
"I don't want to hear it!"
 
"I don't want to hear it!"
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The Dusk Witch giggled with pleasure, Kamito directed looks filled with killing intent towards her.
 
The Dusk Witch giggled with pleasure, Kamito directed looks filled with killing intent towards her.
   
"B-But, the headmistress should not to be alone together with such a guy without guard—"
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"Bu-But, the Academy Director should not to be alone together with such a guy without guard—"
   
 
"Ellis Fahrengart."
 
"Ellis Fahrengart."
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"Is that girl a student here, too? She was wearing armor on top of her uniform."
 
"Is that girl a student here, too? She was wearing armor on top of her uniform."
   
"She is the leader of the Sylphid Knights, a party which manages any disturbances to the order of the academy."
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"She is the leader of the Sylphid Knights, a party which manages any disturbance to the order of the academy."
   
 
"Like a public morals committee. In that case, they should manage it more strictly."
 
"Like a public morals committee. In that case, they should manage it more strictly."
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Kamito answered impatiently with a bitter face, and Greyworth shrugged her shoulders again.
 
Kamito answered impatiently with a bitter face, and Greyworth shrugged her shoulders again.
   
"You'd better be careful, rumors say that within the inner depths of the Spirit Forest that even the Spirit Investigation Association would not enter, are S-rank spirits still slumbering. Once you encounter one, your life is forfeited—in your case, can you manage to tame it?"
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"You'd better be careful, rumors say that within the inner depths of the «Spirit Forest» that even the Spirit Investigation Committee would not enter, are S-rank spirits still slumbering. Once you encounter one, your life is forfeited— in your case, can you manage to tame it?"
   
 
"Please stop. I don't want to associate myself with an S-rank spirit again."
 
"Please stop. I don't want to associate myself with an S-rank spirit again."
   
"Yeah. ''As you are now'', you would probably be a mincemeat in five seconds."
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"Yeah. '''As You are now''', you would probably be a mincemeat in five seconds."
   
 
"Not even one second. Actually, with a contracted spirit I might last for seven seconds."
 
"Not even one second. Actually, with a contracted spirit I might last for seven seconds."
   
"Fu— ''with a contracted spirit''?" <!-- or should it be spirit contrace? --Chancs -->
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"Fu— '''with a contracted spirit'''?" <!-- or should it be spirit contrace? --Chancs -->
   
 
Greyworth directed her grayish eyes towards Kamito's right hand.
 
Greyworth directed her grayish eyes towards Kamito's right hand.
   
"That wound? Is ''that'' also a scratch by the cat?"
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"That wound? Is '''that''' also a scratch by the cat?"
   
 
"This is—"
 
"This is—"
   
The wound—on the right hand, that was where the spirit seal was engraved a while ago.
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The wound— on the right hand, that was where the spirit seal was engraved a while ago.
   
Kamito clicked his tongue inwardly—No, after all he couldn't possibly hide it from the Dusk Witch.
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Kamito clicked his tongue inwardly— No, after all he couldn't possibly hide it from the Dusk Witch.
   
 
"Well, how to say it. It is just happenstance. I made a contract with a particular sealed spirit. It was ultra-violent, had I failed the contract, I would not be standing here right now."
 
"Well, how to say it. It is just happenstance. I made a contract with a particular sealed spirit. It was ultra-violent, had I failed the contract, I would not be standing here right now."
   
"Ha, what a change of heart, that you have contracted with a spirit other than ''her''."
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"Ha, what a change of heart, that you have contracted with a spirit other than '''her'''."
   
 
The grayish eyes, inside the glasses, glistened sharply.
 
The grayish eyes, inside the glasses, glistened sharply.
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"... Well whatever. Tell me what you know."
 
"... Well whatever. Tell me what you know."
   
"Oh boy, is that the attitude of someone asking a witch? You were cuter three years ago."
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"Oh boy, Is that the attitude of someone asking a witch? You were cuter three years ago."
   
 
"The cat changed into a tiger in three years. Do not think it will stay as your pet forever."
 
"The cat changed into a tiger in three years. Do not think it will stay as your pet forever."
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Kamito was involuntarily overcome by the pressure of that overbearing stare.
 
Kamito was involuntarily overcome by the pressure of that overbearing stare.
   
"The thing written there is true. ''Your contracted spirit is alive''."
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"The thing written there is true. '''Your contracted spirit is alive'''."
   
 
"... Guh!"
 
"... Guh!"
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Bundled with a clip, Areishia Spirit Academy's Admission Notification.
 
Bundled with a clip, Areishia Spirit Academy's Admission Notification.
   
It was written there. No doubt—Kamito's ''public'' Background Profile.
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It was written there. No doubt— Kamito's '''public''' Background Profile.
   
 
"What kind of a joke is this?"
 
"What kind of a joke is this?"
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"No problem. Such a thing is no big deal with my authority."
 
"No problem. Such a thing is no big deal with my authority."
   
"That would be a problem in itself! ''Now is different from three years ago.''"
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"That would be a problem in itself! '''Now is Different from Three Years Ago.'''"
   
 
Provoked by Kamito—
 
Provoked by Kamito—
   
"Don't get the wrong idea, lad. You don't have any right to choose."
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"Don't get the wrong idea, Boy. You don't have any right to choose."
   
 
Greyworth told him in a shockingly cold voice.
 
Greyworth told him in a shockingly cold voice.
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"Till now I have allowed you to roam freely. Originally, the elementalist must be managed by the organization. You know that, right?"
 
"Till now I have allowed you to roam freely. Originally, the elementalist must be managed by the organization. You know that, right?"
   
"That is—"
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"That is——"
   
 
In the Ordesia Empire, elementalists are given various privileges, but in exchange they must be registered with the organization. If there exist stray elementalists that harbor ideologies that are against the empire, it will be extremely dangerous to the nation.
 
In the Ordesia Empire, elementalists are given various privileges, but in exchange they must be registered with the organization. If there exist stray elementalists that harbor ideologies that are against the empire, it will be extremely dangerous to the nation.
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"Oh, please, I'm—"
 
"Oh, please, I'm—"
   
"If you like, you may take one student from the academy and do whatever you like to her. For example, Ellis Fahrengart from earlier—who is seriously stubborn, but she is of the type to become ultra obedient once well trained. I am sure she will respond to whatever perverted radical play you have in mind."
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"If you like, you may take one student from the academy and do whatever you like to her. For example, Ellis Fahrengart from earlier— who is seriously stubborn, but she is of the type to become ultra obedient once well trained. I am sure she will respond to whatever perverted radical play you have in mind."
   
 
"Am I a sex deviant?!"
 
"Am I a sex deviant?!"
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—Blade Dance.
 
—Blade Dance.
   
<!-- Held once evry...? --Chancs -->Once every few years, it is the largest kagura<ref>Kagura 神楽[かぐら], "god-entertainment" refers to a specific type of Shinto theatrical dance.</ref> ritual carried out in Astral Zero.
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<!-- Held once evry...? --Chancs -->Once every few years, it is the largest Kagura<ref>Kagura 神楽[かぐら], "god-entertainment" refers to a specific type of Shinto theatrical dance.</ref> ritual carried out in Astral Zero.
   
Elementalists gather from the continent, and perform Blade Dance as an offering for the Five Great Elemental Lords.
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Elementalists gather from the continent, and perform blade dance as an offering for the Five Great Elemental Lords.
   
 
So to speak, it's a grand martial battle festival of fellow elementalists.
 
So to speak, it's a grand martial battle festival of fellow elementalists.
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The country of the victorious team will be given a few years of divine protection by the Elemental Lords, a guaranteed prosperity for the country. Together with a general assembly for the champion—
 
The country of the victorious team will be given a few years of divine protection by the Elemental Lords, a guaranteed prosperity for the country. Together with a general assembly for the champion—
   
A single Wish will be granted.
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A single «wish» will be granted.
   
"Win the cup, Kamito. Nevertheless, ''as of now'' it might be impossible for you."
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"Win the cup, Kamito. Nevertheless, '''as of now''' it might be impossible for you."
   
 
"I—"
 
"I—"
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Kamito bit his lips, strongly clenching his fist.
 
Kamito bit his lips, strongly clenching his fist.
   
Not his right hand where the spirit seal was engraved—It was his left hand covered by the black leather glove.
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Not his right hand where the spirit seal was engraved— It was his left hand covered by the black leather glove.
   
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Zukiri*, A sharp pain ran through his chest.
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<nowiki>*</nowiki>Zukiri*, A sharp pain runs in his chest.
   
 
"I-I have decided that I will never participate in the Blade Dance again." <!-- as mentioned in guidelines --Chancs -->
 
"I-I have decided that I will never participate in the Blade Dance again." <!-- as mentioned in guidelines --Chancs -->
   
"No, you will compete. Otherwise, there will be trouble."
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"No, You will compete. Otherwise there will be trouble."
   
 
Greyworth placed both of her hands onto the office desk, calmly shaking her head.
 
Greyworth placed both of her hands onto the office desk, calmly shaking her head.
   
"Because, nobody but you can win against the Strongest Blade Dancer."
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"Because, nobody but you, can win against that Strongest Blade Dancer."
   
 
"Wh... at...!?"
 
"Wh... at...!?"
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The moment that he heard that name, Kamito's face froze.
 
The moment that he heard that name, Kamito's face froze.
   
The Strongest—the elementalists that are given this title, currently, there was only one in the whole continent.
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The Strongest— the elementalists that are given this title, currently, there was only one in the whole continent.
   
 
Three years ago, a mere fourteen year old young girl dominated the Blade Dance's individual matches.
 
Three years ago, a mere fourteen year old young girl dominated the Blade Dance's individual matches.
   
"—That is right. ''She'' has returned."
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"—That is right. '''She''' has returned."
   
 
Greyworth's grayish pair of eyes, peered into those of Kamito's.
 
Greyworth's grayish pair of eyes, peered into those of Kamito's.
   
"The Strongest Blade Dancer—Ren Ashbell."
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"The Strongest Blade Dancer— Ren Ashbell."
   
 
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===Translator's notes and references===
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==Translator's notes and references==
 
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