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A sleeved uniform had been provided directly to Kamito, who was following the swaying ponytail.
 
A sleeved uniform had been provided directly to Kamito, who was following the swaying ponytail.
   
The uniform Greyworth prepared was custom-designed for his personal use. The fundamental color was the same as that of the other students, pure white, but the dress below it was certainly not a skirt. The cloth of his pants, which was incorporated with holiness, was worn nicely like a gentleman.
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The uniform Greyworth prepared was custom-designed for his personal use. The fundamental colour was the same as that of the other students, pure white, but the dress below it was certainly not a skirt. The cloth of his pants, which was incorporated with holiness, was worn nicely like a gentleman.
   
 
(Damn, the size is perfect...she knew it from the very beginning.)
 
(Damn, the size is perfect...she knew it from the very beginning.)
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Naturally, the overly boxed princesses would be wary of a man of the same age.
 
Naturally, the overly boxed princesses would be wary of a man of the same age.
   
The Blade Dance will be held two months later.
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The «Blade Dance» will be held two months later.
   
 
He had to obtain their trust gradually in this school life.
 
He had to obtain their trust gradually in this school life.
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"What a strangely thorny way of speaking."
 
"What a strangely thorny way of speaking."
   
...Well whatever. It's certainly better than being homeless or living outside in the Spirit Forest.
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...Well whatever. It's certainly better than being homeless or living outside in the «Spirit Forest».
   
 
"It can be seen from this window—there it is."
 
"It can be seen from this window—there it is."
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"Yes, It's a hobby. Someday an ideal gentleman will take my hands for marriage, and to please him with my cooking, I'm usually training for it."
 
"Yes, It's a hobby. Someday an ideal gentleman will take my hands for marriage, and to please him with my cooking, I'm usually training for it."
   
"Really, um, if there is a chance, please let me try it too. At least, I have a fine palate."
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"Really, um, if there is a chance, please let me try it too. At least, I have a fine pallete."
   
 
"Yes. If there's a chance, I would like to demonstrate my proud cooking... What? Who are you to think that I would do something like that for you!?"
 
"Yes. If there's a chance, I would like to demonstrate my proud cooking... What? Who are you to think that I would do something like that for you!?"
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"A new species of spirit was born. How about announcing it to the Spirit Research Agency?"
 
"A new species of spirit was born. How about announcing it to the Spirit Research Agency?"
   
By the way, in whichever Spirit Forest of the continent, these species of spirit were yet to be discovered.
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By the way, in whichever «Spirit Forest» of the continent, these species of spirit were yet to be discovered.
   
 
"Ch-Cheeky slave—No, a slave spirit isn't it!"
 
"Ch-Cheeky slave—No, a slave spirit isn't it!"
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Looking around the classroom built like an old theater, Kamito let out a sigh.
 
Looking around the classroom built like an old theater, Kamito let out a sigh.
   
The number of students was fourteen or fifteen. Everyone had been brought up as a princess. Almost all of them were looking towards Kamito with interest, but some of the girls seemed really scared.
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The number of students are fourteen or fifteen. Everyone has been brought up as a princess. Almost all of them are looking towards Kamito with interest, but some of the girls seemed really scared.
   
 
(Well, It was an expected reaction from them.)
 
(Well, It was an expected reaction from them.)
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The professor in charge, Freya Grandol, hit the desk with the class list and the classroom became silent.
 
The professor in charge, Freya Grandol, hit the desk with the class list and the classroom became silent.
   
She was not a teacher of practical skills but a special lecturer and also a member of the spirit research agency who is traveling in every region of the Spirit Forest of the continent performing field work.
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She was not a teacher of practical skills but a special lecturer and also a member of the spirit research agency who is traveling in every region of the «Spirit Forest» of the continent performing field work.
   
 
"Here, you, hurry up and introduce yourself."
 
"Here, you, hurry up and introduce yourself."
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However, the reactions that he felt earlier from all of the girls were very light.
 
However, the reactions that he felt earlier from all of the girls were very light.
   
Guessing Kamito's doubt, Ms. Freya whispered into his ear.
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Guessing Kamito's doubt, Madam Freya whispered into his ear.
   
 
"Ah, the princesses here have different senses to the commoners. After all, they are constantly handling the most puzzling neighbor to humans: 'the spirits'. Well, rather than criticizing you as a male elementalist, they are just curious in many ways about a young boy of the same age."
 
"Ah, the princesses here have different senses to the commoners. After all, they are constantly handling the most puzzling neighbor to humans: 'the spirits'. Well, rather than criticizing you as a male elementalist, they are just curious in many ways about a young boy of the same age."
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"Team?"
 
"Team?"
   
"Of course the team for this coming Blade Dance"
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"Of course the team for this coming «Blade Dance»"
   
 
"Aa—"
 
"Aa—"
   
The Blade Dance that would be held two months later was going to be in the format of a five person team group battle. Kamito, as one person, couldn't enter by himself, he needed to find other elementalists and form a team.
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The «Blade Dance» that would be held two months later was going to be in the format of a five person team group battle. Kamito, as one person, couldn't enter by himself, he needed to find other elementalists and form a team.
   
 
"As of now, I don't have a team yet. I'm going to start looking for my other fellow teammates now."
 
"As of now, I don't have a team yet. I'm going to start looking for my other fellow teammates now."
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In two months, whether he would find such people, he didn't know.
 
In two months, whether he would find such people, he didn't know.
   
"Is it true, that you have tamed the sword sealed spirit that no one else has been able to contract?"
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"Is it true, that you have tamed the sword «Sealed Spirit» that no one else has been able to contract?"
   
 
"Wh?"
 
"Wh?"
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The situation was about to be out of control—
 
The situation was about to be out of control—
   
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Bam*. Ms. Freya struck her desk. The classroom settled down.
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<nowiki>*</nowiki>Bam*. Madam Freya strikes her desk. The classroom settled down.
   
 
"Arg. Girls, cut it out! You, hurry up and choose your favorite seat."
 
"Arg. Girls, cut it out! You, hurry up and choose your favorite seat."
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"Ye-Yes.....!"
 
"Ye-Yes.....!"
   
Freya sent a lifeboat, Kamito gladly rode on it.
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Madam Freya sent a lifeboat, Kamito gladly rode on it.
   
 
Of course, he preferred to sit as far from the red haired princess as possible. He started walking towards one of the seats in the back.
 
Of course, he preferred to sit as far from the red haired princess as possible. He started walking towards one of the seats in the back.
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And, at that time.
 
And, at that time.
   
"Owawawah, m-milady, don't give more hardship to Mr. transfer student!"
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"Owawawah, my-my lady, don't give more hardship to Mr. transfer student!"
   
 
From above the classroom, A young girl in maid clothes came running down.
 
From above the classroom, A young girl in maid clothes came running down.
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(........Why is there a maid here in this academy!?)
 
(........Why is there a maid here in this academy!?)
   
Since she called her "milady", it seems she is this blonde princess' maid.
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Since she called her "my lady", it seems she is this blonde princess' maid.
   
 
But in any case, she seemed to have a more normal personality. Without a doubt, at least she would intervene against this sour dispute. Kamito embraced a dim hope, but at that time...
 
But in any case, she seemed to have a more normal personality. Without a doubt, at least she would intervene against this sour dispute. Kamito embraced a dim hope, but at that time...
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There, the shape of Claire holding a blazing flame whip.
 
There, the shape of Claire holding a blazing flame whip.
   
"Thi-Thi-This perverted spirit~!"
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"Thi-Thi-This ero spirit~!"
   
 
"Wait, It can't be helped no matter how you look at it...."
 
"Wait, It can't be helped no matter how you look at it...."

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