Editing Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter6

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She was unsightly defeated.
 
She was unsightly defeated.
   
Her contracted spirit, which was precious to her like family, was also lost.
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Her contracted spirit, which was as precious as family, was also lost.
   
 
While the demon spirit was making the chattering sound, it slowly descended.
 
While the demon spirit was making the chattering sound, it slowly descended.
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At his palm, particles of light were born and transformed into the form of a sword—
 
At his palm, particles of light were born and transformed into the form of a sword—
   
However, it was not good like this. Against the demon spirit that brought down Scarlet's level of spirit in one blow, that short sword cannot be effective.
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However, it was not good like this. Against the demon spirit that brought down a spirit of Scarlet's level in one blow, that short sword would not be effective.
   
 
(—I beg you, lend me your power, you stubborn spirit!)
 
(—I beg you, lend me your power, you stubborn spirit!)
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However, without minding it, Kamito continued to pour divine power into the spirit seal on his right hand.
 
However, without minding it, Kamito continued to pour divine power into the spirit seal on his right hand.
   
It was an intense overload. Pain like burning was running throughout his arm's nerves.
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It was an intense overload. A burning pain was running throughout his arm's nerves.
   
 
(—Sorry, Restia. What I need now isn't you.)
 
(—Sorry, Restia. What I need now isn't you.)
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That sensation from three years ago was resurrected.
 
That sensation from three years ago was resurrected.
   
Everytime he kicked the ground to speed up, his whole body's sensation sharpened.
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Everytime he kicked the ground to speed up, his whole body's senses sharpened.
   
Just that demon spirit's movement was seen as slow motion.
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Just that demon spirit's movement was seen in slow motion.
   
 
(Recall it, that feeling—)
 
(Recall it, that feeling—)

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