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"You see, that Gate connects to a safe area where there are only low-level spirits. If not, the academy wouldn't leave it alone, right?"
 
"You see, that Gate connects to a safe area where there are only low-level spirits. If not, the academy wouldn't leave it alone, right?"
   
Claire murmured "stupid," and stepped into the middle of the stone circle.
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Claire murmured '''stupid''', and stepped into the middle of the stone circle.
   
 
She recited the words of opening the gate in the spirit language and the blue light on the ground further increased its brightness.
 
She recited the words of opening the gate in the spirit language and the blue light on the ground further increased its brightness.
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Kamito closed his eyes and concentrated his consciousness to the spirit seal engraved on his right hand.
 
Kamito closed his eyes and concentrated his consciousness to the spirit seal engraved on his right hand.
   
""Dispassionate Queen of Steel, the sacred sword that destroys evil—""
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'''"Dispassionate Queen of Steel, the sacred sword that destroys evil—"'''
   
 
He recited the summoning in the spirit language and the crest of two swords crossing faintly shined.
 
He recited the summoning in the spirit language and the crest of two swords crossing faintly shined.
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No—he could pick up its presence, but it was as if something wasn't right, like gears not fitting together.
 
No—he could pick up its presence, but it was as if something wasn't right, like gears not fitting together.
   
""—Now form a sword of steel and be the power in my hand!""
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'''"—Now form a sword of steel and be the power in my hand!"'''
   
 
At that moment, small particles of light gathered at Kamito's palm.
 
At that moment, small particles of light gathered at Kamito's palm.
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At the same time as her voice, a blazing flame illuminated the night sky red.
 
At the same time as her voice, a blazing flame illuminated the night sky red.
   
Claire wielded Scarlet's elemental waffe—Flametounge.
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Claire wielded Scarlet's elemental waffe—Flame Tongue.
   
 
The flame slash mowed down all the attacking blades of the wind in an arc—
 
The flame slash mowed down all the attacking blades of the wind in an arc—
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As expected of someone who served as the Knights leader in this academy that gathered elementalists.
 
As expected of someone who served as the Knights leader in this academy that gathered elementalists.
   
It was a beautiful blade dance like modeling after kagura, which spirits enjoyed themselves in.
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It was a beautiful blade dance like modeling after Kagura, which spirits enjoyed themselves in.
   
 
The wound in his left hand ached.
 
The wound in his left hand ached.
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The demon spirit's rising ear-splitting roar caused the girls to cower.
 
The demon spirit's rising ear-splitting roar caused the girls to cower.
   
There was a tremendous sense of intimidation. That divine power felt on his skin was comparable to a {{Furigana|archdemon-class|rank A|margin=13}} spirit.
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There was a tremendous sense of intimidation. That divine power felt on his skin was comparable to a {{Furigana|devil-class|rank A|margin=13}} spirit.
   
 
Moreover—
 
Moreover—
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Therefore, she still reached out to the dangerous sealed spirit.
 
Therefore, she still reached out to the dangerous sealed spirit.
   
"You, don't tell me—You plan to make ''that'' your contracted spirit!?"
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"You, don't tell me—You plan to make '''that''' your contracted spirit!?"
   
 
"..."
 
"..."
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She got on the winds like sparks dancing in the air.
 
She got on the winds like sparks dancing in the air.
   
In her hand was her flame spirit released into its elemental waffe—Flametounge, which she was grasping.
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In her hand was her flame spirit released into its elemental waffe—Flame Tongue, which she was grasping.
   
 
The blazing crimson killing flash cut off the evening darkness.
 
The blazing crimson killing flash cut off the evening darkness.
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Claire's body trembled and spontaneously, she closed her eyes. The roots of the teeth did not bite at the same time. Towards an unfamiliar thing, instinctive fear bound her body.
 
Claire's body trembled and spontaneously, she closed her eyes. The roots of the teeth did not bite at the same time. Towards an unfamiliar thing, instinctive fear bound her body.
   
—At that moment. The Flametounge in Claire's hand suddenly vanished.
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—At that moment. The Flame Tongue in Claire's hand suddenly vanished.
   
 
It was not that she canceled the release of her elemental waffe. Scarlet opposed Claire's will and voluntary returned to the form of a hell cat.
 
It was not that she canceled the release of her elemental waffe. Scarlet opposed Claire's will and voluntary returned to the form of a hell cat.
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The spirit seal, engraved on his right hand, emitted a bluish-white glow.
 
The spirit seal, engraved on his right hand, emitted a bluish-white glow.
   
"''—Dispassionate Queen of Steel, the sacred sword that destroys evil!''"
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'''—Dispassionate Queen of Steel, the sacred sword that destroys evil!'''
   
"''—Now form a sword of steel and be the power in my hand!''"
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'''—Now form a sword of steel and be the power in my hand!'''
   
 
While running with mud splashing, he recited the summoning.
 
While running with mud splashing, he recited the summoning.
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(Recall it, that feeling—)
 
(Recall it, that feeling—)
   
The sensation of the blade dance—where he danced together with his partner, the darkness spirit.
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The sensation of the blade dance—where he danced together with his partner, the dark spirit.
   
 
(I am—)
 
(I am—)
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<noinclude>
 
<noinclude>
   
===Translator's notes and references===
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==Translator's notes and references==
 
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