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Before the arena built at the center of the town, there was a crowd of spectators gathered.
 
Before the arena built at the center of the town, there was a crowd of spectators gathered.
   
The blade dance was originally a holy ritual to let spirits enjoy themselves—a kind of kagura.
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The blade dance was originally a holy ritual to let spirits enjoy themselves—a kind of Kagura.
   
 
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Covered all over with wounds and crawling.
 
Covered all over with wounds and crawling.
   
Against the contracted spirits boasting tremendous power, Claire was fighting with just a whip and spirit magic.
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Against the contracted spirits boasting tremendous power, Claire was fighting with just a whip and Spirit Magic.
   
 
While her whole body was hit and slammed into a wall, she stood up and fought again and again.
 
While her whole body was hit and slammed into a wall, she stood up and fought again and again.
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Confused, she wiped it with her uniform sleeve.
 
Confused, she wiped it with her uniform sleeve.
   
"Wh...What are you saying? You are originally my slave spirit!"
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"Wh...What are you saying? You are originally my Slave Spirit!"
   
 
"Ah, that is right..."
 
"Ah, that is right..."
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"Ah, this sword—Est informed me."
 
"Ah, this sword—Est informed me."
   
"...That's, by no means, that sword spirit?"
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"...That's, by no means, that Sword Spirit?"
   
 
"That's right. But she probably can't even use a tenth of her original power."
 
"That's right. But she probably can't even use a tenth of her original power."
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At that moment, a small fireball was born at the palm of her hand.
 
At that moment, a small fireball was born at the palm of her hand.
   
"Spirit magic? What can such a small fireball—"
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"Spirit Magic? What can such a small fireball—"
   
 
"—Like this."
 
"—Like this."
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While her face was bright red, Claire spun the spirit language summoning.
 
While her face was bright red, Claire spun the spirit language summoning.
   
"''—Guardian of the crimson blaze, keeper of the undying hearth!''"
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'''—Protector of red flames, watchman of the unsleeping hearth!'''
   
"''—Now's the time to abide by the blood contract, come forth and do my bidding!''"
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'''—Now is the time, by the blood contract, hurry and come to my side!'''
   
 
Immediately, a blazing flame whip was born in Claire's hand.
 
Immediately, a blazing flame whip was born in Claire's hand.
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"Oooooooooooo!"
 
"Oooooooooooo!"
   
The shining flashing sword cut Glasya-Labolas' body right in half.
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The shining flashing sword cut Glasya-Labola's body right in half.
   
 
===Part 5===
 
===Part 5===

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