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Claire sullenly responded.
 
Claire sullenly responded.
   
"It's just that there isn't a person who matches up to our desired skill level. What about you? Have you decided on your members?"
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"It's just that there isn't a person who matches up to our desired level. What about you? Have you decided on your members?"
   
"Tha...that's ... I just have not found a person who matches with my skill level!"
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"Tha...that's ... I just have not found a person who could keep up with me!"
   
 
"Eh? Rinslet, you couldn't gather anyone either?"
 
"Eh? Rinslet, you couldn't gather anyone either?"
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Kamito tilted his head to the side.
 
Kamito tilted his head to the side.
   
As one who used the demon ice spirit «Fenrir», Rinslet was about on par with Claire, ability-wise.
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Rinslet's ability to use the demon ice spirit «Fenrir», was about on par with Claire's.
   
 
He thought that if it was her, she would be highly sought after but...
 
He thought that if it was her, she would be highly sought after but...
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According to Carol's words—
 
According to Carol's words—
   
It seemed that although she had tried gathering a team several times, so far, the ideals she demanded from her members were too high and her excessively big pride didn't help things go smoothly either. The teams she gathered repeatedly broke up and so, there were no students left to invite.
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It seemed that although she had tried gathering a team several times, so far, the conditions the members were expected to meet were too high and her excessively big pride didn't help things go smoothly either. The teams she gathered repeatedly broke up and so, there were no students left to invite.
   
 
...How should he say it, it was indeed a Rinslet-like reason.
 
...How should he say it, it was indeed a Rinslet-like reason.
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Glancing at the playful ojou-sama and her maid, Claire sighed deeply.
 
Glancing at the playful ojou-sama and her maid, Claire sighed deeply.
   
"Haa... I wonder if there's really no one... An excellent elementalist who will enter our team."
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"Haa... I wonder if there's really no one... A strong elementalist who will enter our team."
   
 
"...We...well, you seem to be in a dire situation."
 
"...We...well, you seem to be in a dire situation."
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Rinslet coughed and looked at Claire with one eye.
 
Rinslet coughed and looked at Claire with one eye.
   
"That's right. I better try approaching the newly admitted student you just mentioned. Perhaps I’ll get lucky."
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"That's right. It looks like I should try approaching the newly admitted student you just mentioned. Perhaps I’ll get lucky."
   
 
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Kamito whispered into Claire's ear in a quiet voice.
 
Kamito whispered into Claire's ear in a quiet voice.
   
"For some reason, this ojou-sama obviously wants to join us as a comrade but are you against it?"
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"For some reason, this ojou-sama obviously wants to join us as a comrade, what do you say?"
   
"Absolutely against it."
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"Absolutely not."
   
 
Claire immediately replied.
 
Claire immediately replied.
   
"Why? Rinslet's is more than adequate with her battle strength."
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"Why? Rinslet's is a powerful fighter."
   
 
"That's... even I recognize her strength. However, no. We suffered in the duel with Ellis a while ago, didn't we? Because she didn’t even think the slightest about teamwork."
 
"That's... even I recognize her strength. However, no. We suffered in the duel with Ellis a while ago, didn't we? Because she didn’t even think the slightest about teamwork."
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"Hn? Did you say something?"
 
"Hn? Did you say something?"
   
"I..it's nothing, at any rate, it's a no! No Rinslet!"
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"I..it's nothing, at any rate, it's a no! Rinslet is not allowed!"
   
"Err, this goes without saying, but isn't she somewhat pitiful?"
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"Think about it a little bit more before deciding, isn't she somewhat pitiful?"
   
 
"Wh...what are you two sneakily talking about?!"
 
"Wh...what are you two sneakily talking about?!"
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Claire groaned seemingly unhappy.
 
Claire groaned seemingly unhappy.
   
"...I got it. I'll try asking for the time being."
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"...I got it. I'll try asking once."
   
She sighed deeply and nodded. There were two months remaining till the opening of the Blade Dance. She might have reconsidered and accepted that it wasn't the time to be making a fuss about her desires anymore.
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She sighed deeply and nodded. There were two months remaining till the opening of the Blade Dance. She might have accepted that it wasn't the time to be worrying only about her desires anymore.
   
 
"Hey, Rinslet."
 
"Hey, Rinslet."
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"You wouldn't, by any chance, want to enter my team?"
 
"You wouldn't, by any chance, want to enter my team?"
   
"Id...idiot, you're asking too bluntly!"
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"Id...idiot, don't ask like that!"
   
 
Kamito shouted in a soft voice.
 
Kamito shouted in a soft voice.
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The two ojou-sama started quarreling about something trivial.
 
The two ojou-sama started quarreling about something trivial.
   
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...Their desires, after all, matched.
...They completely wouldn't see eye to eye.
 
   
 
"Either way is the same, right..."
 
"Either way is the same, right..."
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Kamito retorted,
 
Kamito retorted,
   
"It's completely different!" "It is completely different!"
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'''"It's completely different!"'''
   
 
They shouted together. Only at a time like this were their breaths in sync.
 
They shouted together. Only at a time like this were their breaths in sync.
   
"...Uhm, these two are hopeless, it would be absolutely impossible for them to be a team."
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"...Uhm it's no good, something like a team is absolutely impossible with these guys."
   
 
"Really, can't you guys keep quiet? This is a public place!"
 
"Really, can't you guys keep quiet? This is a public place!"
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"Ellis!"
 
"Ellis!"
   
Claire sullenly groaned. ...Another hindrance came. She had an expression saying that.
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Claire sullenly groaned. ...Another hindrance came. And she had such a stern expression.
   
 
Ellis Fahrengart.
 
Ellis Fahrengart.
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The captain of the Sylphid Knights, who observed the academy's public morals.
 
The captain of the Sylphid Knights, who observed the academy's public morals.
   
She was charming in appearance which was completely opposite to her strict personality. Her relationship with Claire's group, which normally caused problems, seemed to be mutually bad.
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She was charming in appearance which was completely opposite to her strict personality. Her relationship with Claire's group, which normally caused problems, seemed to be bad.
   
 
Although, it did not mean that she was such a hard-to-deal-with person to Kamito.
 
Although, it did not mean that she was such a hard-to-deal-with person to Kamito.
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"If it's about the duel, I'll accept a rematch anytime."
 
"If it's about the duel, I'll accept a rematch anytime."
   
Rinslet and Claire, both gained a dangerous glint in their eyes.
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Rinslet and Claire, both gained a dangerous glint in their eyes after hearing those words.
   
 
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On that subject, the duel the other day remained unsettled because of the demon spirit's sudden intrusion.
 
On that subject, the duel the other day remained unsettled because of the demon spirit's sudden intrusion.
   
He wondered if they were going to try to conclude that match again.
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He wondered if another match will resolve their dispute.
   
 
(......Spare me. A duel again, no thanks.)
 
(......Spare me. A duel again, no thanks.)
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By the way, she didn’t move the sword from his neck, so he couldn’t help but feel his life in danger.
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By the way, she didn’t move the sword from his neck, and he couldn’t help but feel nervous.
   
 
"What I'm saying is... I...I want you!"
 
"What I'm saying is... I...I want you!"
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"...Wait! Wh-what do you mean?"
 
"...Wait! Wh-what do you mean?"
   
"I...I meant just that. Kazehaya Kamito, I welcome you to my team. Because you defeated that militarized spirit, there's nothing to object about with regards to your ability."
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"I...I meant just that. Kazehaya Kamito, I welcome you to my team. Because you defeated that militarized spirit, I have no doubt in your ability."
   
 
Ellis replied fast and quickly averted her eyes, trying not to look at him.
 
Ellis replied fast and quickly averted her eyes, trying not to look at him.
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With a wry smile, he gently placed his hand on top of Claire's head.
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With a bitter smile, he gently placed his hand on top of Claire's head.
 
 
 
His reply was obvious from the beginning. She did not have to be worried.
 
His reply was obvious from the beginning. She did not have to be worried.
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Kamito apologized and Ellis was a little bashful.
 
Kamito apologized and Ellis was a little bashful.
   
"I...it's alright. It's solely because you're that sort of person, I—"
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"I...it's alright. Y...you are such a kind guy, that’s why I—"
   
 
"Uh?"
 
"Uh?"
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"I'm here."
 
"I'm here."
   
Kamito raised his hand and the girl stroked her chest in relieve.
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Kamito raised his hand and the girl felt relieved as she panted heavily.
   
 
"The academy director is calling for you. So, go over there immediately."
 
"The academy director is calling for you. So, go over there immediately."

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