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The Dusk Witch — Greyworth Ciel Mais.
 
The Dusk Witch — Greyworth Ciel Mais.
   
Her figure was certainly that of a bewitchingly beautiful woman, but she was originally a spirit knight with a long military service, who had her name entered first on the list of {{Furigana|the twelve knight commanders|Numbers}}.
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Her figure was certainly that of a bewitchingly beautiful woman but she was originally a spirit knight with a long military service, who had her name entered first on the list of {{Furigana|the twelve knight commanders|Numbers}}.
   
 
She had wavy ash-blonde hair. Her gray pupils were shining behind her small pair of glasses.
 
She had wavy ash-blonde hair. Her gray pupils were shining behind her small pair of glasses.
   
"Sorry, I heard that you have business with me and no matter what my walking became heavy."
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"Sorry, I heard that you have business with me, and no matter what my walking became heavy."
   
 
"Hmm, so now you're able to run your rather cheeky mouth, are you? Where did the obedient pure lad from those days go? Really, this thing called the flow of time is cruel."
 
"Hmm, so now you're able to run your rather cheeky mouth, are you? Where did the obedient pure lad from those days go? Really, this thing called the flow of time is cruel."
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(Wh...what's with this?)
 
(Wh...what's with this?)
   
"But, that's right... he's a boy after all and it's already been three years."
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"But, that's right... he's a boy after all, and it's already been three years."
   
 
The girl was muttering to herself in a voice that Kamito could not hear.
 
The girl was muttering to herself in a voice that Kamito could not hear.

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