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She had a petite build and slender proportions.
 
She had a petite build and slender proportions.
   
That lovely fairy-like body of hers was more than charming enough, even if she was lacking breasts.
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That lovely-fairy-like body of hers was more than charming enough, even if she was lacking breasts.
   
 
There were red belt marks on her thigh seen through the slit of her towel. Claire had her animal-training leather whip wreathed around her thigh. Those marks were strangely captivating.
 
There were red belt marks on her thigh seen through the slit of her towel. Claire had her animal-training leather whip wreathed around her thigh. Those marks were strangely captivating.
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...Why was this happening, he did not understand the point.
 
...Why was this happening, he did not understand the point.
   
It was probably because Claire had an opposing heart towards Fianna that she ended up blurting out such a thing, and it became that she couldn't back out, but— as for Kamito, who was dragged into this, this was intolerable.
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It was probably because Claire had an opposing heart towards Fianna that she ended up blurting out such a thing, and it became that she couldn't back out but— as for Kamito, who was dragged into this, this was intolerable.
   
 
He should be getting out from here as quickly as possible, but if he moved even a little, he would end up directly coming in contact with their skin, so even if he planned to get out, he couldn't get out.
 
He should be getting out from here as quickly as possible, but if he moved even a little, he would end up directly coming in contact with their skin, so even if he planned to get out, he couldn't get out.
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However, Fianna turned away with a seemingly displeased look for some reason.
 
However, Fianna turned away with a seemingly displeased look for some reason.
   
"I'll show it to you when necessary. An elementalist doesn't thoughtlessly summon her contracted spirit."
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"I'll show it to you when necessary. A elementalist doesn't thoughtlessly summon her contracted spirit."
   
 
Certainly, there were also elementalists with that kind of thinking among the academy students.
 
Certainly, there were also elementalists with that kind of thinking among the academy students.
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"If you don't make communications with your contracted spirit daily, mutual trust can't be created."
 
"If you don't make communications with your contracted spirit daily, mutual trust can't be created."
   
There were also people who thought like Claire and they were the majority in the academy.
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There were also people who thought like Claire, and they were the majority in the academy.
   
 
As either opinions also have a reason, either side couldn't be unconditionally said to be correct, but—
 
As either opinions also have a reason, either side couldn't be unconditionally said to be correct, but—
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"There's a battle occurring within the academy—"
 
"There's a battle occurring within the academy—"
   
It might be a fellow academy student's duel. No, if that was the case, the Sylphid Knights should have immediately stopped it.
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It might be a fellow academy students' duel. No, if that was the case, the Sylphid Knights should have immediately stopped it.
   
 
"I have a bad premonition."
 
"I have a bad premonition."
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"No, Kamito. I'm your sword."
 
"No, Kamito. I'm your sword."
   
Kamito grasped Est's small hand and the girl's body turned into particles of light in a moment.
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Kamito grasped Est's small hand, and the girl's body turned into particles of light in a moment.
   
 
At the next moment, Kamito's hand was gripping the elemental waffe— Terminus Est.
 
At the next moment, Kamito's hand was gripping the elemental waffe— Terminus Est.
   
He felt that her sword body was smaller and her radiance was also duller compared to usual, but because she had just woken up, it couldn't be helped.
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He felt that her sword body was smaller and her radiance was also duller compared to usual but because she had just woken up, it couldn't be helped.
   
 
Kamito jumped out from the room's window.
 
Kamito jumped out from the room's window.

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