Editing Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume2 Chapter4

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"Well, because you're the only person in the dormitory who occupies the room just by herself."
 
"Well, because you're the only person in the dormitory who occupies the room just by herself."
   
"It's not only me, even not just two of us. Including Est, it's three people."
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"It's not only me, not even just two of us. Including Est, it's three people."
   
 
"Aren't you treating me as your slave spirit? By the dormitory rules, spirits are not counted as roommates."
 
"Aren't you treating me as your slave spirit? By the dormitory rules, spirits are not counted as roommates."
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"After all?"
 
"After all?"
   
As Fianna asked back, Claire's cheeks slight blushed,
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As Fianna asked back, Claire's cheeks slightly blushed,
   
 
"After all, err... I even...did the spirit contract ritual with Kamito."
 
"After all, err... I even...did the spirit contract ritual with Kamito."
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"...!"
 
"...!"
   
"Well, while wearing a dress, your breasts volume is overwhelmingly lacking though. Using paddings there to make do with it is the only—"
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"Well, while wearing a dress, your breasts volume is overwhelming lacking though. Using paddings there to make do with it is the only—"
   
 
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...That somehow invited anxiety, but he gave up on investigating it.
 
...That somehow invited anxiety, but he gave up on investigating it.
   
Fianna nodded, seemingly satisfied, and cast her sights onto the chopping board again.
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Fianna nodded, seemingly satisfied, and casted her sights onto the chopping board again.
   
 
While listening to the rhythmic tapping sound, Kamito gazed at Fianna's face profile.
 
While listening to the rhythmic tapping sound, Kamito gazed at Fianna's face profile.
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"Th..That's..!"
 
"Th..That's..!"
   
Kamito was at a loss for words. Est widened her eyes unusually, Scarlet purred.
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Kamito was at a lost for words. Est widened her eyes unusually, Scarlet purred.
   
 
It seemed to be a boiling...stew.
 
It seemed to be a boiling...stew.

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