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"I-I just want to steal Claire Rouge's slave!"
 
"I-I just want to steal Claire Rouge's slave!"
   
Rinslet's face turned red and she turned away.
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Rinslet's face turned red, and she turned away.
   
 
—And then, over there, she spotted the appearance of another acquaintance and frowned.
 
—And then, over there, she spotted the appearance of another acquaintance and frowned.
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"W-What was that?!"
 
"W-What was that?!"
   
"They went towards the forest direction. If you run after them, you can still make it."
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"They went entering towards the forest direction. If you run after them, you can still make it."
   
 
Claire... groaned.
 
Claire... groaned.
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Claire bluntly shook her head. It was natural. If the number of people participating in the quest increased, then the ranking points given per person would also end up decreasing after all.
 
Claire bluntly shook her head. It was natural. If the number of people participating in the quest increased, then the ranking points given per person would also end up decreasing after all.
   
"I see, in that case, it's regretful, but I am unable to tell you the method to enlarge your breasts."
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"I see, in that case, it's regretful but, I am unable to tell you the method to enlarge your breasts."
   
 
"Guu..."
 
"Guu..."

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