Editing Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume2 Chapter6

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"To get the boy I li-like to rub my b-breasts!"
 
"To get the boy I li-like to rub my b-breasts!"
   
She shouted with her face flushed red and struck the pillow. *Posun*. *Posun*.
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She shouted with her face flushed red, and struck the pillow. *Posun*. *Posun*.
   
 
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("Fua, hn, wh-what is this, how amazing...!?")
 
("Fua, hn, wh-what is this, how amazing...!?")
   
Her uniform button popped out with a snap and her underwear ripped, and then—
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Her uniform button popped out with a snap, and her underwear ripped, and then—
   
 
"...There's no way that would happen!"
 
"...There's no way that would happen!"
   
 
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Claire hit her pillow and writhed.
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Claire hit her pillow, and writhed.
   
 
"Wh-What's with the magnificent technique... Am I an id-idiot or what?!"
 
"Wh-What's with the magnificent technique... Am I an id-idiot or what?!"
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(...What do I do, I've somehow begun feeling hot. I wonder if I have a fever.)
 
(...What do I do, I've somehow begun feeling hot. I wonder if I have a fever.)
   
Her body was hot for some reason. Claire placed both hands on her cheeks and was struck with an idea.
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Her body was hot for some reason. Claire placed both hands on her cheeks, and was struck with an idea.
   
 
(...I-I wonder if they'll become big, if I rub them myself.)
 
(...I-I wonder if they'll become big, if I rub them myself.)

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