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There was the chirping of singing birds. The fresh sunshine was shining in diagonally from the window.
 
There was the chirping of singing birds. The fresh sunshine was shining in diagonally from the window.
   
"...U...n"
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"...U... n"
   
 
It was 6 o'clock, early in the morning. Kamito rubbed his sleepy eyes even though he had woken up.
 
It was 6 o'clock, early in the morning. Kamito rubbed his sleepy eyes even though he had woken up.
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The breakfast of Claire and the others, who were roommates, was expected to be made by Kamito every morning.
 
The breakfast of Claire and the others, who were roommates, was expected to be made by Kamito every morning.
   
Well to begin with, he didn't hate cooking, and he was a freeloader, so he had no complaints.
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Well to begin with, he didn't hate cooking and he was a freeloader, so he had no complaints.
   
 
"Toast with salad with bacon and eggs... Shall I specially throw in some boiled eggs today?"
 
"Toast with salad with bacon and eggs... Shall I specially throw in some boiled eggs today?"
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It was different from the individual matches three years ago, this time's Blade Dance was a team battle. Unless they gathered five teammates, they could not even get the qualifications to participate. Besides, the true strength of Fianna, who regained the power of her spirit contract, was something that even Claire could not help but recognize.
 
It was different from the individual matches three years ago, this time's Blade Dance was a team battle. Unless they gathered five teammates, they could not even get the qualifications to participate. Besides, the true strength of Fianna, who regained the power of her spirit contract, was something that even Claire could not help but recognize.
   
She, who was from the Queen training organization—Divine Ritual Institute, had definitely not received any battle training, but she could provide various combat support by dancing ritual kagura.
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She, who was from the Queen training organization, Divine Ritual Institute, had definitely not received any battle training, but she could provide various combat support by dancing ritual kagura.
   
 
Also, her contracted spirit Georgios was a knight spirit of defense specialty, something Kamito and the others were weak at. Because she joined, the resulting balance in the team greatly increased in its sense of stability.
 
Also, her contracted spirit Georgios was a knight spirit of defense specialty, something Kamito and the others were weak at. Because she joined, the resulting balance in the team greatly increased in its sense of stability.
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"All that's left is for those two to be on a little better terms with each other."
 
"All that's left is for those two to be on a little better terms with each other."
   
He shrugged his shoulders in disappointment as he faced the kitchen—
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He shrugged his shoulders in disappointment as he faced the kitchen...
   
 
"Hn?"
 
"Hn?"
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Kamito frowned, and softly approached with stealthy steps.
 
Kamito frowned, and softly approached with stealthy steps.
   
Through the gap of the door, he carefully peered into the kitchen—
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Through the gap of the door, he carefully peered into the kitchen...
   
 
"Hey, what are you putting in!?"
 
"Hey, what are you putting in!?"
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He heard Claire and Fianna's voices.
 
He heard Claire and Fianna's voices.
   
"Wh-What are you thinking?! Don't put in such a disgusting thing!"
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"Wh... What are you thinking?! Don't put in such a disgusting thing!"
   
 
"Ahh, I was usually using it at the Divine Ritual Institute. It seemed to have the same effect as an aphrodisiac."
 
"Ahh, I was usually using it at the Divine Ritual Institute. It seemed to have the same effect as an aphrodisiac."
   
"Ap-Aphrodisiac!?"
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"Ap... Aphrodisiac!?"
   
 
"Yes, if Kamito-kun ate this, even his true nature as the Demon King of the Night would appear, and he may come attacking in the middle of the night."
 
"Yes, if Kamito-kun ate this, even his true nature as the Demon King of the Night would appear, and he may come attacking in the middle of the night."
   
 
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"At-Attack... wh-what on earth would he do?"
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"At... Attack... wh... what on earth would he do?"
   
 
"Well... that is already something indecent to the extent that he could be said to have been bewitched."
 
"Well... that is already something indecent to the extent that he could be said to have been bewitched."
   
"Be-Bewitched... y-you're lying, even for him, such a thing—"
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"Be... Bewitched... y... you're lying, even for him, such a thing..."
   
 
"Furthermore, the two of us together."
 
"Furthermore, the two of us together."
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"It isn't surprising for Kamito-kun to do at least that."
 
"It isn't surprising for Kamito-kun to do at least that."
   
"Wh-Wh-What a guy... Un-Unforgivable, that pervert, cinders, cinders!"
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"Wh... Wh... What a guy... Un... Unforgivable, that pervert, cinders, cinders!"
   
As her voice trembled, there was the *pashin* *pashin* sound of something being hit by a whip.
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As her voice trembled, there was the *pashin*, *pashin* sound of something being hit by a whip.
   
 
(Those two...)
 
(Those two...)
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"Fufuu, however, isn't it nice to also have Kamito-kun in an overbearing demon king mode once in a while?"
 
"Fufuu, however, isn't it nice to also have Kamito-kun in an overbearing demon king mode once in a while?"
   
"Th-That's... Err, a-at any rate, that's a no. Putting in such a dubious thing. What are you going to do if his stomach is destroyed before the battle?"
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"Th... That's... Err, a... at any rate, that's a no. Putting in such a dubious thing. What are you going to do if his stomach is destroyed before the battle?"
   
 
"Oh, Claire you're no different. Do you plan on making him eat those burnt, black cinders?"
 
"Oh, Claire you're no different. Do you plan on making him eat those burnt, black cinders?"
   
"Sh-Shut up..."
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"Sh... Shut up..."
   
 
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Kamito peered into the kitchen, and a lump of something black had turned into a pile on top of the plate.
 
Kamito peered into the kitchen, and a lump of something black had turned into a pile on top of the plate.
   
Coals for stove-use...they didn't seem like them.
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Coals for stove-use... they didn't seem like them.
   
 
"Really, the nickname of hell cat girl is not for show. After all, you turned everything into cinders."
 
"Really, the nickname of hell cat girl is not for show. After all, you turned everything into cinders."
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"Oh, even without my pads mine are much bigger than yours, Claire, you know?"
 
"Oh, even without my pads mine are much bigger than yours, Claire, you know?"
   
"I-I want to try burning every surplus fat of those, princess."
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"I... I want to try burning every surplus fat of those, princess."
   
Sparks scattered between the two of them. ...How energetic early in the morning.
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Sparks scattered between the two of them. How energetic early in the morning.
   
It somehow had become a critical situation, so—
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It somehow had become a critical situation, so...
   
 
"Hey, what are the two of you doing?"
 
"Hey, what are the two of you doing?"
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The two of them turned around in a shocked manner, and hid something behind them in a fluster.
 
The two of them turned around in a shocked manner, and hid something behind them in a fluster.
   
"Y-You've already awoken!?"
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"Y... You've already awoken!?"
   
"Yeah, because we've a battle today. I planned on making breakfast earlier than usual—"
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"Yeah, because we've a battle today. I planned on making breakfast earlier than usual..."
   
 
Then, Kamito unintentionally stopped his words.
 
Then, Kamito unintentionally stopped his words.
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His eyes were being rooted at Claire's appearance, whom he was facing.
 
His eyes were being rooted at Claire's appearance, whom he was facing.
   
"Y-You, that appearance..."
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"Y... You, that appearance..."
   
 
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"Wh-What...? If it doesn't match me, then, how about saying that honestly?"
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"Wh... What...? If it doesn't match me, then, how about saying that honestly?"
   
 
Claire's cheeks reddened, as she quickly turned away.
 
Claire's cheeks reddened, as she quickly turned away.
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Kamito raised up both his hands like he gave up.
 
Kamito raised up both his hands like he gave up.
   
"No, It suits you very well. ...You're cute."
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"No, It suits you very well... you're cute."
   
"...Wh-Wha-What are you saying, idiot, idiot, idiot, idiot!"
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"...Wh... Wha-What are you saying, idiot, idiot, idiot, idiot!"
   
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Gaaa...!*
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Gaaa...!*
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"Fufu, Kamito-kun, you're surprisingly ''that'', aren't you?"<!--tl_en: Zero2001_2-->
 
"Fufu, Kamito-kun, you're surprisingly ''that'', aren't you?"<!--tl_en: Zero2001_2-->
   
"Aren't you the one who made me say it..."
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"Aren't you the one who made me say it...?"
   
 
With a deadpan look, Kamito glared at Fianna, who was giggling mischievously—
 
With a deadpan look, Kamito glared at Fianna, who was giggling mischievously—
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"By the way, what are you two doing? What are you hiding behind you?"
 
"By the way, what are you two doing? What are you hiding behind you?"
   
"Th-That's..."
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"Th... That's..."
   
 
Claire's and Fianna's faces swiftly turned red, and they bashfully entwined their fingers.
 
Claire's and Fianna's faces swiftly turned red, and they bashfully entwined their fingers.
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"Uh?"
 
"Uh?"
   
Kamito frowned and pressed on—
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Kamito frowned and pressed on...
   
"...Cho-Chocolate!"
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"...Cho... Chocolate!"
   
 
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"Chocolate? Did you wake up to make candy or something?"
 
"Chocolate? Did you wake up to make candy or something?"
   
"W-Well, something like that. You know, isn't it Valentia Holy Festival very soon. Therefore, err, we're practicing... D-Don't misunderstand, I'll let you at least sample it, but that's all!"
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"W... Well, something like that. You know, isn't it Valentia Holy Festival very soon. Therefore, err, we're practicing... D... Don't misunderstand, I'll let you at least sample it, but that's all!"
   
—Valentia Holy Festival.
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Valentia Holy Festival.
   
 
It was a popular ritual to commemorate the Queen Valentia Sadelca, who served the fire Elemental Lord several hundred years ago.
 
It was a popular ritual to commemorate the Queen Valentia Sadelca, who served the fire Elemental Lord several hundred years ago.
   
It was originally a ritual to dedicate baked sweets, which were baked by flames of purification, to spirits but— it had become "the day to give chocolate to the opposite sex, who one had a liking for" among the common masses.
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It was originally a ritual to dedicate baked sweets, which were baked by flames of purification, to spirits but it had become "the day to give chocolate to the opposite sex, who one had a liking for" among the common masses.
   
"Hn? The opposite sex... But, there should only be girls in this academy—"
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"Hn? The opposite sex... But, there should only be girls in this academy..."
   
Kamito pointed out—
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Kamito pointed out...
   
"Th-That's obvious, this is a friendship chocolate to be given to friends! Your role is just to sample it. Geez, what are you expecting? It's like you're a gluttonous pig!"
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"Th... That's obvious, this is a friendship chocolate to be given to friends! Your role is just to sample it. Geez, what are you expecting? It's like you're a gluttonous pig!"
   
 
Claire talked on and on with her face bright red.
 
Claire talked on and on with her face bright red.
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"...How mean. Wait a minute, don't you have no friends at all?"
 
"...How mean. Wait a minute, don't you have no friends at all?"
   
"I-I do, things like friends! For example, Scarlet, and ...errr, the stray cat staying in the academy's garden, Kitty."
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"I... I do, things like friends! For example, Scarlet, and ...errr, the stray cat staying in the academy's garden, Kitty."
   
 
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...It seemed like he ended up stepping on a land mine.
 
...It seemed like he ended up stepping on a land mine.
   
"A-Anyway, hey, since I made them with great trouble, be grateful and eat them!"
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"A... Anyway, hey, since I made them with great trouble, be grateful and eat them!"
   
 
Claire said in anger, and thrust that cinder lump before Kamito.
 
Claire said in anger, and thrust that cinder lump before Kamito.
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"Uh... Do I have to eat... this?"
 
"Uh... Do I have to eat... this?"
   
"Wh-What... I woke up early to make it, you know!"
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"Wh... What... I woke up early to make it, you know!"
   
"No, I'm certainly thankful for that, but ..."
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"No, I'm certainly thankful for that, but..."
   
 
"Kamito-kun, forget those cinders, you can eat my chocolate."
 
"Kamito-kun, forget those cinders, you can eat my chocolate."
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At that moment.
 
At that moment.
   
Suddenly, the living room's door opened—
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Suddenly, the living room's door opened...
   
 
"Kamito, I also tried making chocolate."
 
"Kamito, I also tried making chocolate."
   
"E-Est!?"
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"E... Est!?"
   
 
The one who appeared was a lovely beautiful girl like a snow fairy.
 
The one who appeared was a lovely beautiful girl like a snow fairy.
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Est, who was in an appearance almost akin to that of a new-born, was simply standing there.
 
Est, who was in an appearance almost akin to that of a new-born, was simply standing there.
   
(Almost) referred to the fact that she was wearing black knee socks on her legs, but—
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(Almost) referred to the fact that she was wearing black knee socks on her legs, but...
   
 
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"That's disappointing. I thought that Kamito would be delighted with this sort of appearance."
 
"That's disappointing. I thought that Kamito would be delighted with this sort of appearance."
   
"What kind of eyes are you looking at your contractor with..."
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"What kind of eyes are you looking at your contractor with...?"
   
 
Kamito deeply sighed with a deadpan look.
 
Kamito deeply sighed with a deadpan look.
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<nowiki>*</nowiki>Nyururun*<!--sfx for the cream being pressed out, if there's an sfx for English, please replace it with that. Zero2001:No need. Simply encapsulating with asterisks will do the job.-->
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Nyururun*<!--sfx for the cream being pressed out, if there's an sfx for English, please replace it with that. Zero2001:No need. Simply encapsulating with asterisks will do the job.-->
   
"Wh—"
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"Wh..."
   
 
What, she began drawing words with chocolate on her smooth white skin!
 
What, she began drawing words with chocolate on her smooth white skin!
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Drawn on her pure white virgin-snow-like soft skin were words written in the sacred language of the spirits.
 
Drawn on her pure white virgin-snow-like soft skin were words written in the sacred language of the spirits.
   
When deciphered— they read "''Eat me''".
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When deciphered they read "''Eat me''".
   
"E-Est!?"
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"E... Est!?"
   
 
The moment Kamito understood the meaning of the spirit language, his face turned bright red.
 
The moment Kamito understood the meaning of the spirit language, his face turned bright red.
   
"Fuaa, y-you, what are you teaching your contracted spirit, pe-pervert !"
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"Fuaa, y... you, what are you teaching your contracted spirit, pe... pervert !"
   
"Err... Kamito-kun, y-you like this sort of thing?"
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"Err... Kamito-kun, y... you like this sort of thing?"
   
 
Claire's face turned bright red, and she flew into a rage, and Fianna had a-little-drawn-back look on her face.
 
Claire's face turned bright red, and she flew into a rage, and Fianna had a-little-drawn-back look on her face.
   
"Wait, you're misunderstanding! Hey, Est—"
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"Wait, you're misunderstanding! Hey, Est..."
   
 
"Kamito, please lick my chocolate."
 
"Kamito, please lick my chocolate."
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"...If you don't hurry, it'll melt."
 
"...If you don't hurry, it'll melt."
   
"No, hey, wait—"
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"No, hey, wait..."
   
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Dotadotadotadotaa!*
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Dotadotadotadotaa!*
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<nowiki>*</nowiki>Bam.* The room's door was cleanly opened with force—
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<nowiki>*</nowiki>Bam.* The room's door was cleanly opened with force...
   
 
"Kazehaya Kamito, what on earth are you doing... Wh!?"
 
"Kazehaya Kamito, what on earth are you doing... Wh!?"
   
The one, who showed up, was—
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The one, who showed up, was...
   
 
A female knight, wearing azure light armor over her body.
 
A female knight, wearing azure light armor over her body.
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The moment she came bursting into the room, she opened her reddish brown eyes widely.
 
The moment she came bursting into the room, she opened her reddish brown eyes widely.
   
"Y-You... H-H-How shameless..."
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"Y... You... H... H... How shameless..."
   
"Wa-Wait, Ellis, you're mistaken, there's no way this is my hobby—"
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"Wa... Wait, Ellis, you're mistaken, there's no way this is my hobby..."
   
 
"How unsightly, are you thinking that such an excuse would work?!"
 
"How unsightly, are you thinking that such an excuse would work?!"
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It was the high ranking demon wind spirit— Simorgh that served the Fahrengart family.
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It was the high ranking demon wind spirit, Simorgh that served the Fahrengart family.
   
"Des-Despite that I had gotten a better opinion of you!"
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"Des... Despite that I had gotten a better opinion of you!"
   
 
It was certain that tears were slightly oozing around Kamito's eyes.
 
It was certain that tears were slightly oozing around Kamito's eyes.
   
"E-Ellis, you're mis—"
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"E-Ellis, you're mis..."
   
 
"It's no use, be turned into paella<ref>Paella is a Valencia dish consisting of rice with the addition of meat, vegetables or seafood.</ref> right here and now!"
 
"It's no use, be turned into paella<ref>Paella is a Valencia dish consisting of rice with the addition of meat, vegetables or seafood.</ref> right here and now!"
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"...Sigh, he doesn't change, that lad."
 
"...Sigh, he doesn't change, that lad."
   
As she looked down at the boy's appearance of fluttering in midair from the second floor of the dormitory—
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As she looked down at the boy's appearance of fluttering in midair from the second floor of the dormitory...
   
 
The Academy's headmistress, Greyworth Ciel Mais, made a small sigh.
 
The Academy's headmistress, Greyworth Ciel Mais, made a small sigh.
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"Even though there's only a few weeks till the opening of the Blade Dance, how carefree."
 
"Even though there's only a few weeks till the opening of the Blade Dance, how carefree."
   
They seemed to have added the former second princess, Fianna, into their team and were gradually raising their ranking, but— they still had not gathered five teammates.
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They seemed to have added the former second princess, Fianna, into their team and were gradually raising their ranking, but, they still had not gathered five teammates.
   
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"Nevertheless..."
"Nevertheless—"
 
   
 
The figure of a person appeared from Greyworth's shadow.
 
The figure of a person appeared from Greyworth's shadow.
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It was a woman with black hair and a white robe put over her suit.
 
It was a woman with black hair and a white robe put over her suit.
   
Elementalist—Freya Grandol. Raven Class' teacher-in-charge.
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Elementalist, Freya Grandol, Raven Class' teacher-in-charge.
   
 
"Headmistress, you seem to be pretty attached to him."
 
"Headmistress, you seem to be pretty attached to him."
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"What an annoying bunch. Order Ellis' Sylphid Knights to reinforce the security."
 
"What an annoying bunch. Order Ellis' Sylphid Knights to reinforce the security."
   
"Yes, there's another thing—"
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"Yes, there's another thing..."
   
 
"Uh?"
 
"Uh?"
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"Haa, she completed the subjugation quest of a archdemon-class spirit in just a few weeks. As expected."
 
"Haa, she completed the subjugation quest of a archdemon-class spirit in just a few weeks. As expected."
   
"Yea, she is without a doubt the ''academy's strongest elementalist'' at this point in time— So far, she had been doing the quests completely without assembling a team, but she would also have to recruit members to participate in the Blade Dance. She seems to be someone who would be at the top amongst the three participating."
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"Yeah, she is without a doubt the ''academy's strongest elementalist'' at this point in time. So far, she had been doing the quests completely without assembling a team, but she would also have to recruit members to participate in the Blade Dance. She seems to be someone who would be at the top amongst the three participating."
   
 
"Well, I wonder about that?"
 
"Well, I wonder about that?"
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===References and Translation Notes===
 
===References and Translation Notes===
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