Editing Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter3

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Suddenly, Claire walked off like she was angry.
 
Suddenly, Claire walked off like she was angry.
   
"A man who toys with a girl's feelings deserves death."
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"A man, who toys with a girl's feelings, deserves death."
   
 
"Haa, Kamito-kun is really the Demon King of the Night..."
 
"Haa, Kamito-kun is really the Demon King of the Night..."
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===Part 4===
 
===Part 4===
   
If Areishia Spirit Academy was a castle, then Academy Town at the bottom would be its castle town.
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If Areishia Spirit Academy was a castle, then, Academy Town at the bottom would be its castle town.
   
 
Its outer edge was encircled by the spirit forest and ramparts, and the town was divided into five areas associated with the five grand spirits.
 
Its outer edge was encircled by the spirit forest and ramparts, and the town was divided into five areas associated with the five grand spirits.

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