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Precisely because they were important companions, he had not wanted them to know of his past.
 
Precisely because they were important companions, he had not wanted them to know of his past.
   
Once they learnt of that, he thought that they would not want anything to do with him anymore.
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Once they learnt of that he thought, they would not want anything to do with him.
   
 
It was only natural that one would think so.
 
It was only natural that one would think so.
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"Tempest, huh..."
 
"Tempest, huh..."
   
That had been the competition format used for the Blade Dance not only in recent years, but also tens, and even hundreds of years ago.
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That had been the a competition format used for the Blade Dance not only in recent years, but also tens, and even hundreds of years ago.
   
 
The elementalists presenting the blade dance performance would come together at the gathering place in the vast sacred lands, and the teams would do battle with each other over a number of days. Each individual's combat skills would be put to the test, but beyond that, of even greater significance were their tactical and strategic ability, as well as teamwork and cooperation.
 
The elementalists presenting the blade dance performance would come together at the gathering place in the vast sacred lands, and the teams would do battle with each other over a number of days. Each individual's combat skills would be put to the test, but beyond that, of even greater significance were their tactical and strategic ability, as well as teamwork and cooperation.
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"... Ah, damn it..."
 
"... Ah, damn it..."
   
"You'd better not act rashly. What you can do now is to get a good rest in order to regain your strength and divine power."
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"You'd better not act rashly. What you can do now is get a good rest in order to regain your strength and divine power."
   
 
"... Ah, ah, I know."
 
"... Ah, ah, I know."
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"W-Well, whatever, that rascal can get all kissy-kissy with whoever he wants to! It's got nothing to with me, right?"
 
"W-Well, whatever, that rascal can get all kissy-kissy with whoever he wants to! It's got nothing to with me, right?"
   
Claire reasoned this out with herself and then stopped outside the room.
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Claire reasoned this out herself and then stopped outside the room.
   
 
She opened the door —
 
She opened the door —

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