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"O-Of course not! H-H-How can he be... b-boyfriend..."
 
"O-Of course not! H-H-How can he be... b-boyfriend..."
   
The elder of the two sisters clapped her hands to her cheeks, her face so red that she looked about to go up in smoke.
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The elder of the two sisters clapped her hands to her cheeks, her face so red she looked about to go up in smoke.
   
 
"Oooh... elder sister is embarrassed now, how cute!"
 
"Oooh... elder sister is embarrassed now, how cute!"
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Mireille squealed as if she was being tickled.
 
Mireille squealed as if she was being tickled.
   
"I am neither Rinslet's pet dog, nor her boyfriend. You shouldn't vex your sister like that."
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"I am not Rinslet's pet dog, or her boyfriend. You shouldn't vex your sister like that."
   
 
"... Oh... uh-huh. Kamito-kun, I'm sorry."
 
"... Oh... uh-huh. Kamito-kun, I'm sorry."
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Kamito suddenly grew curious about the name Mireille had mentioned in passing.
 
Kamito suddenly grew curious about the name Mireille had mentioned in passing.
   
"Oh yes, who was that Judia person you two were talking about just now?"
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"Oh yes, who was that Judia person you two talked about just now?"
   
 
"..."
 
"..."
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Kamito instinctively looked around.
 
Kamito instinctively looked around.
   
Although they were indoors, there was no guarantee; the walls had ears.
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Although they were indoors, it was no guarantee; walls had ears.
   
 
Upon seeing Kamito's embarrassed countenance, Fianna smiled sweetly and said:
 
Upon seeing Kamito's embarrassed countenance, Fianna smiled sweetly and said:
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Suddenly, just at that moment –
 
Suddenly, just at that moment –
   
From the other side of the door came the sound of something dropping on the floor.
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From the other side of the door came the sound of something dropping to the floor.
   
 
"...!?"
 
"...!?"
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It was Claire, an expression of shock and horror on her face. Scattered on the floor were things that had fallen from her hands.
 
It was Claire, an expression of shock and horror on her face. Scattered on the floor were things that had fallen from her hands.
   
"C-Claire!? Y-You're mistaken, it's not what you think – ah!"
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"C-Claire!? Y-You're mistaken it's not what you think – ah!"
   
 
Kamito rushed forward, wanting to explain himself.
 
Kamito rushed forward, wanting to explain himself.
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===Part 3===
 
===Part 3===
   
In this part of the floating island, Ragna Ys, was a chain of vast underground caves.
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In this part of the floating island Ragna Ys were a chain of vast underground caves.
   
 
No one alive today knew when it had been constructed, or even for what purpose.
 
No one alive today knew when it had been constructed, or even for what purpose.

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