Talk:Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Chapter4

"– I have searched for you for a long time, Ren Ashbell." Out of the blue came the childish voice of a young maiden. A gray-haired girl slowly walked out of the darkness. She was Muir Alenstarl. <---- I don't it is a appropriate to use 'searched for you for a long time' seeing that Muir and the fake Ren Ashbell are acquaintances. I think it should be something like --> "I have search for you for quite awhile, Ren Ashbell" --Blood (talk) 01:34, 20 February 2013 (CST)

• (v5c4) "Ah... I see Kamito now is not just a devil at night, but a devil in the daytime as well."

-I thought perhaps "devil at night" should be "Demon King of the Night" (and the second appropriately changed) to be consistent with Kamito's nickname in other chapters/volumes? Though I wouldn't know if the original is actually different here. --Cthaeh (talk) 23:11, 28 November 2014 (CST)

-decided it was a good enough guess, to be changed --Cthaeh (talk) 09:18, 17 January 2015 (CST)

• (v5c4) She, who had been missing since the battle last night, was the second-ranked «beast» of the Instructional School.

-Should «beast» be changed to "Monster"? --Cthaeh (talk) 23:11, 28 November 2014 (CST)

-decided it was a good enough guess, to be changed --Cthaeh (talk) 09:18, 17 January 2015 (CST)

• (v5c4) "Bringing spirits of the dead back to the living world – the Institutional School regards this as the most forbidden act of all."

-From context, "Institutional School" seemed like it should be referring to the Divine Ritual Institute. However, there are other instances in this translator's text where "Institutional School" is clearly used to refer to the Instructional School (which I have already changed), so I wasn't sure here. --Cthaeh (talk) 23:11, 28 November 2014 (CST)