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Upon hearing the girl's words, Kamito could not help but frown in puzzlement.
 
Upon hearing the girl's words, Kamito could not help but frown in puzzlement.
   
"M-M-Mireille! W-W-W-What rubbish are you saying!"
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"M-M-Mirelle! W-W-W-What rubbish are you saying!"
   
 
"Huh? Doesn't sister always write in her letters to me... ooo, ooo..."
 
"Huh? Doesn't sister always write in her letters to me... ooo, ooo..."
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"I know, little pet dog of your teammate and my elder sister, right?"
 
"I know, little pet dog of your teammate and my elder sister, right?"
   
Mireille smiled sweetly and said.
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Mirelle smiled sweetly and said.
   
 
"L-Little pet dog, what the hell?"
 
"L-Little pet dog, what the hell?"
   
"M-Mireille! Stop talking nonsense!"
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"M-Mirelle! Stop talking nonsense!"
   
Rinslet quickly hushed her, but Mireille simply wore an innocent look and continued:
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Rinslet quickly hushed her, but Mirelle simply wore an innocent look and continued:
   
 
"Huh, that's not right? Then, is it... boyfriend?"
 
"Huh, that's not right? Then, is it... boyfriend?"
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While this scene was indeed hilarious, to be mistaken for Kamito's lover or girlfriend was certainly not very nice for Rinslet.
 
While this scene was indeed hilarious, to be mistaken for Kamito's lover or girlfriend was certainly not very nice for Rinslet.
   
Kamito gently placed his hand on Mireille's head.
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Kamito gently placed his hand on Mirelle's head.
   
 
"Ai!"
 
"Ai!"
   
Mireille squealed as if she was being tickled.
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Mirelle squealed as if she was being tickled.
   
 
"I am neither Rinslet's pet dog, nor her boyfriend. You shouldn't vex your sister like that."
 
"I am neither Rinslet's pet dog, nor her boyfriend. You shouldn't vex your sister like that."
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"... Oh... uh-huh. Kamito-kun, I'm sorry."
 
"... Oh... uh-huh. Kamito-kun, I'm sorry."
   
Blushing slightly, Mireille nodded.
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Blushing slightly, Mirelle nodded.
   
 
It seemed that, like her sister, she was a naturally honest and good child.
 
It seemed that, like her sister, she was a naturally honest and good child.
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This little sister was really something, to say such odd things.
 
This little sister was really something, to say such odd things.
   
Carol cleared her throat, pinched the back of Mireille's neck and said:
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Carol cleared her throat, pinched the back of Mirelle's neck and said:
   
"All right, Mireille-san... your elder sister has things to do, so let's be good and go back to our room."
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"All right, Mirelle-san... your elder sister has things to do, so let's be good and go back to our room."
   
 
"Oooh... but I still want to play more with Kamito-kun."
 
"Oooh... but I still want to play more with Kamito-kun."
   
Seeing that Mireille was about to defiantly shake her head in refusal, Carol whispered in her ear:
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Seeing that Mirelle was about to defiantly shake her head in refusal, Carol whispered in her ear:
   
 
"Be good, you mustn't disrupt your sister's private time!"
 
"Be good, you mustn't disrupt your sister's private time!"
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"Oh... t-true. I see, Carol."
 
"Oh... t-true. I see, Carol."
   
Mireille abruptly stopped her fuss and grasped Rinslet's arm tightly.
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Mirelle abruptly stopped her fuss and grasped Rinslet's arm tightly.
   
 
"Sister, I'll be cheering you on tomorrow, you must save Judia and bring her back!"
 
"Sister, I'll be cheering you on tomorrow, you must save Judia and bring her back!"
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"I know, leave it to me."
 
"I know, leave it to me."
   
Mireille gently released her sister's arm, broke out into her original smile, and turned towards Kamito.
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Mirelle gently released her sister's arm, broke out into her original smile, and turned towards Kamito.
   
 
"Kamito-kun, after the Blade Dance ends, you must come visit our Laurenfrost area."
 
"Kamito-kun, after the Blade Dance ends, you must come visit our Laurenfrost area."
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"Huh?"
 
"Huh?"
   
With those words, which left Kamito shaken, Mireille
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With those words, which left Kamito shaken, Mirelle
   
 
Exited from the other end of the hallway, accompanied by Carol.
 
Exited from the other end of the hallway, accompanied by Carol.
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Rinslet rumpled her long hair, a little embarrassed.
 
Rinslet rumpled her long hair, a little embarrassed.
   
Kamito suddenly grew curious about the name Mireille had mentioned in passing.
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Kamito suddenly grew curious about the name Mirelle had mentioned in passing.
   
 
"Oh yes, who was that Judia person you two were talking about just now?"
 
"Oh yes, who was that Judia person you two were talking about just now?"

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