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Kamito returned to his own room and gathered the things he would take with him tomorrow.
 
Kamito returned to his own room and gathered the things he would take with him tomorrow.
   
The items he put into the bag included some easy-to-carry food, a lantern made of spirit crystals, and other necessities for survival in the forest.
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The items he put into the bag included some easy-to-carry food and a lantern made of spirit crystals, and other necessities for survival in the forest.
   
 
As the rules of the game limited the weight of things he could bring with him, the items had to be carefully selected
 
As the rules of the game limited the weight of things he could bring with him, the items had to be carefully selected
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Looking at the two of them, Kamito could not hold back a smile.
 
Looking at the two of them, Kamito could not hold back a smile.
   
(... Silly Rinslet, losing all dominance before her little sister.)
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''... Silly Rinslet, losing all dominance before her little sister.''
   
 
While this scene was indeed hilarious, to be mistaken for Kamito's lover or girlfriend was certainly not very nice for Rinslet.
 
While this scene was indeed hilarious, to be mistaken for Kamito's lover or girlfriend was certainly not very nice for Rinslet.
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"I h-hate her... taking care of this little sister really gives me a headache..."
 
"I h-hate her... taking care of this little sister really gives me a headache..."
   
"But you sure are an elder sister who really knows how to take care of people, Rinslet."
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"But Rinslet is an elder sister who really knows how to take care of people."
   
 
"B-But of course, I am after all the eldest sister of the house."
 
"B-But of course, I am after all the eldest sister of the house."
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Tearfully, Rinslet told the whole story to Kamito.
 
Tearfully, Rinslet told the whole story to Kamito.
   
The second daughter of the Laurenfrost family, Judia Laurenfrost, was originally a highly ranked, excellent princess maiden of the Divine Ritual Institute. However, just a few years ago, while performing a sacrificial ritual towards the Water Elemental Lord, she made a mistake. In a fury, the Elemental Lord imprisoned her in a curse of never-melting ice.
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The second daughter of the Laurenfrost family, Judia Laurenfrost, was originally a highly ranked, excellent princess maiden of the «Divine Ritual Institute». However, just a few years ago, while performing a sacrificial ritual towards the Water Elemental Lord, she made a mistake. In a fury, the Elemental Lord imprisoned her in a curse of never-melting ice.
   
 
Margrave Laurenfrost had recruited elementalists from all over the empire in an attempt to break the curse, but to no avail. Despite possessing the power of a variety of high-level spirits, they could not break the curse.
 
Margrave Laurenfrost had recruited elementalists from all over the empire in an attempt to break the curse, but to no avail. Despite possessing the power of a variety of high-level spirits, they could not break the curse.
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"Yes, there remains only one way to save Judia."
 
"Yes, there remains only one way to save Judia."
   
Clenching her fists, Rinslet continued: "That is the reward of the Blade Dance victors – the Elemental Lord's blessing. My Wish will be for the Water Elemental Lord to have mercy and bestow his forgiveness, to let me save Judia."
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Clenching her fists, Rinslet continued: "That is the reward of the Blade Dance victors – the Elemental Lord's blessing. My «wish» will be for the Water Elemental Lord to have mercy and bestow his forgiveness, to let me save Judia."
   
 
"Rinslet..."
 
"Rinslet..."
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Her words rekindled a fire in Kamito's mind.
 
Her words rekindled a fire in Kamito's mind.
   
(Yes, it's not just me...)
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''Yes, it's not just me...''
   
Claire, Ellis, Fianna... and Rinslet as well. His partners in the Blade Dance all had a strong unshakeable motivation.
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Claire, Ellis, Fianna... and Rinslet as well. His partners in the «Blade Dance» all had a strong unshakeable motivation.
   
 
The disappearance of Est, right before his very eyes, had dampened Kamito's spirits and made him a little more withdrawn.
 
The disappearance of Est, right before his very eyes, had dampened Kamito's spirits and made him a little more withdrawn.
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Fianna was standing at Kamito's door, and appeared to have been there for quite a while.
 
Fianna was standing at Kamito's door, and appeared to have been there for quite a while.
   
"How was it? Have a good date with Claire and the rest?"
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"How was it? Had a good date with Claire and the rest?"
   
 
The second royal princess smiled and teased Kamito.
 
The second royal princess smiled and teased Kamito.
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At Kamito's reaction, Fianna sighed, dumbfounded, and said:
 
At Kamito's reaction, Fianna sighed, dumbfounded, and said:
   
"Ah... I see Kamito now is not just the Demon King of the Night, but the Demon King of the Daytime as well."
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"Ah... I see Kamito now is not just a devil at night, but a devil in the daytime as well."
   
"... Demon King of the Daytime, what's that?"
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"... Devil in the daytime, what's that?"
   
 
"Never mind, it was I who got you guys to go out and have fun... from now on it'll be my turn to show you my moves."
 
"Never mind, it was I who got you guys to go out and have fun... from now on it'll be my turn to show you my moves."
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"Really!?"
 
"Really!?"
   
While Kamito and the others were touring the streets, Fianna had been searching for people who could destroy the Brand of Darkness.
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While Kamito and the others were touring the streets, Fianna had been searching for people who could destroy the «Brand of Darkness».
   
 
"... Fianna, thank you very much."
 
"... Fianna, thank you very much."
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Fianna gazed into the distance, trying to brush over the issue.
 
Fianna gazed into the distance, trying to brush over the issue.
   
(She's definitely enjoying this...)
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''She's definitely enjoying this...''
   
 
Kamito muttered testily.
 
Kamito muttered testily.
   
Indeed, the reflected girl in the mirror was Kamito, wearing the ceremonial outfit of the Divine Ritual Institute.
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Indeed, the reflected girl in the mirror was Kamito, wearing the ceremonial outfit of the «Divine Ritual Institute».
   
 
There was a black wig on his head and makeup powder on his face.
 
There was a black wig on his head and makeup powder on his face.
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Kamito turned in the direction of the sound –
 
Kamito turned in the direction of the sound –
   
"Ka-Ka-Kamito!? W-What in hell are you doing!?"
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"Ka-Ka-Kamito!? W-what in hell are you doing!?"
   
 
It was Claire, an expression of shock and horror on her face. Scattered on the floor were things that had fallen from her hands.
 
It was Claire, an expression of shock and horror on her face. Scattered on the floor were things that had fallen from her hands.
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Claire gave her a puzzled look.
 
Claire gave her a puzzled look.
   
"It's a long story... Kamito and I are about to sneak into the Grand Shrine, to ask a high-ranked princess maiden to destroy the Brand of Darkness on his body.
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"It's a long story... Kamito and I are about to sneak into the Grand Shrine, to ask a high-ranked princess maiden to destroy the «Brand of Darkness» on his body.
   
 
"You mean... the Grand Shrine?"
 
"You mean... the Grand Shrine?"
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At this, Claire's jaw dropped in shock.
 
At this, Claire's jaw dropped in shock.
   
That was a perfectly understandable reaction. The Grand Shrine was after all the most sacred area of the entire floating island, not accessible to even Blade Dance participants.
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That was a perfectly understandable reaction. The Grand Shrine was after all the most holy area of the entire floating island, not accessible to even Blade Dance participants.
   
 
"W-What do you intend to do there! Don't you know that there are very powerful guardian spirits keeping watch over the place?"
 
"W-What do you intend to do there! Don't you know that there are very powerful guardian spirits keeping watch over the place?"
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No one alive today knew when it had been constructed, or even for what purpose.
 
No one alive today knew when it had been constructed, or even for what purpose.
   
There was a figure standing in this place where even the highest ranked princess maidens were ordered to stop.
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There was a figure standing at this place where even the highest ranked princess maidens were ordered to stop.
   
 
She was the girl in the bright red mask – Ren Ashbell.
 
She was the girl in the bright red mask – Ren Ashbell.
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She was Muir Alenstarl.
 
She was Muir Alenstarl.
   
She, who had been missing since the battle last night, was the second-ranked "Monster" of the Instructional School.
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She, who had been missing since the battle last night, was the second-ranked «beast» in the Instructional School.
   
 
"It seems that the fourth person is finally here. Lily is fetching her here now."
 
"It seems that the fourth person is finally here. Lily is fetching her here now."
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"... And this is?"
 
"... And this is?"
   
"I got this mythical class ancient artifact from the old fogeys at Alphas. The three militarized spirits sealed within are all weapons that were scrapped by the international guidelines."
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"I got this «Mythical Class» ancient artifact from the old fogeys at Alphas. The three military spirits sealed within are all weapons that were scrapped by the international guidelines."
   
 
"Do you think Muir will be so easily bribed by this toy of yours?"
 
"Do you think Muir will be so easily bribed by this toy of yours?"
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Ren Ashbell was placing a chain of jewels on the sarcophagus.
 
Ren Ashbell was placing a chain of jewels on the sarcophagus.
   
That was the Blood Stone – found only in the original spirit world, such a highly prized spirit crystal contained power that ordinary spirit crystals could not possibly rival.
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That was the «Blood Stone» – found only in the original spirit world, such a highly prized spirit crystal contained power that ordinary spirit crystals could not possibly rival.
   
 
Next, in a clear bright voice, she started singing a chant that sounded like a curse.
 
Next, in a clear bright voice, she started singing a chant that sounded like a curse.
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Bump, bump – from the black sarcophagus came sounds like a heartbeat.
 
Bump, bump – from the black sarcophagus came sounds like a heartbeat.
   
Suddenly, the bright red Blood Stone shattered!
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Suddenly, the bright red «Blood Stone» shattered!
   
 
Then –
 
Then –
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Ren Ashbell's voice echoed brightly in the stone room suffused with the smell of rotting flesh.
 
Ren Ashbell's voice echoed brightly in the stone room suffused with the smell of rotting flesh.
   
"He is also – the fifth member of Team Inferno."
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"He is also – the fifth member of «Team Inferno»."
   
 
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