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"A-Are you okay, Kamito-kun?"
 
"A-Are you okay, Kamito-kun?"
   
Fianna opened her dusk-colored eyes wide and examined Kamito with a worried expression.
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Fianna opened wide her dusk-colored eyes and examined Kamito with a worried expression.
   
 
"...!?"
 
"...!?"
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"Kamito-kun..."
 
"Kamito-kun..."
   
Fianna spoke softly, then she suddenly leaned herself tightly against Kamito.
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Fianna spoke softly then she suddenly leaned herself tightly against Kamito.
   
 
"Fianna?"
 
"Fianna?"
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"She's always been like this, as soon as it's hot pot time, she likes to show off..."
 
"She's always been like this, as soon as it's hot pot time, she likes to show off..."
   
"Hot pot is indeed a simple method of cooking, but exactly because it is simple, it is profound. Do not look down on the Laurenfrost's traditional hot pot cuisine!"
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"Hot pot is indeed a simple type of cooking, but exactly because it is simple, it is profound. Do not look down on the Laurenfrost's traditional hot pot cuisine!"
   
 
Lady Rinslet crossed her arms and stared at everyone.
 
Lady Rinslet crossed her arms and stared at everyone.
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All he knew was that his homeland was an island country on the eastern border, one that did not even have a name.
 
All he knew was that his homeland was an island country on the eastern border, one that did not even have a name.
   
But no matter what, simply from her well intentions in making this dish specially for Kamito were extremely gratifying for him.
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But no matter what, simply her well intentions in making this dish specially for Kamito were very gratifying.
   
 
"Rinslet, thank you."
 
"Rinslet, thank you."
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"Woah, this is really good!"
 
"Woah, this is really good!"
   
With a smooth texture and rich taste, it really was quite delicious.
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With smooth texture and rich taste, it really was quite delicious.
   
 
"I will try it too... Ah, it really is!"
 
"I will try it too... Ah, it really is!"
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"E-Eating hot pot together, umm... D-Does it not constitute as indirect kissing?"
 
"E-Eating hot pot together, umm... D-Does it not constitute as indirect kissing?"
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"...!?"
 
"...!?"
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Kamito made a wry expression as he waved his hand and spoke.
 
Kamito made a wry expression as he waved his hand and spoke.
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"Y-Yeah, y-yes that's right, th-this level, i-i-indirect kiss whatever...!"
 
"Y-Yeah, y-yes that's right, th-this level, i-i-indirect kiss whatever...!"
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"Just now, Claire went to pick some herbs which are very effective for eliminating fatigue."
 
"Just now, Claire went to pick some herbs which are very effective for eliminating fatigue."
   
"That girl seems to become inexplicably hardworking whenever someone gets sick or injured."
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"That girl seems to become inexplicably hardworking whenever some gets sick or injured."
   
 
Claire was clearly ordering Kamito around like a slave all the time, but whenever he got hurt in school matches or anything like that, she always visited him and brought canned peaches.
 
Claire was clearly ordering Kamito around like a slave all the time, but whenever he got hurt in school matches or anything like that, she always visited him and brought canned peaches.
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Then he immediately noticed a serious problem.
 
Then he immediately noticed a serious problem.
   
(...Hmm? Then what am I currently grabbing in my hand?)
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(...Hmm? Then what am I current grabbing in my hand?)
   
 
Boing boing.
 
Boing boing.
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(How childish of me to make matters like this. I must apologize to her later.)
 
(How childish of me to make matters like this. I must apologize to her later.)
   
Just as Fianna thought this to herself, she suddenly realized.
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Just as Fianna thought to herself, she suddenly realized.
   
 
(...But isn't this something that cannot be helped?)
 
(...But isn't this something that cannot be helped?)
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If she missed this opportunity, another one might not arrive again.
 
If she missed this opportunity, another one might not arrive again.
   
(...On occasion, it should be fine to act according to my feelings in a forthright manner, right?)
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(...On occasion, it should be fine to act according to my feelings in forthright manner, right?)
   
 
"Very well. Just for a little while should be okay."
 
"Very well. Just for a little while should be okay."
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The youth's tone of voice -- no, the entire voice became completely different.
 
The youth's tone of voice -- no, the entire voice became completely different.
   
"I even attempted to use a bit of mental manipulation magic... But the result is still a failure."
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"I even attempted to use a bit of mental manipulation magic... But the result is still failure."
   
 
Immediately, Kamito's figure distorted to take on a girl's appearance.
 
Immediately, Kamito's figure distorted to take on a girl's appearance.

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