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Even though it hadn’t rained, the earth was partially liquefied due to being heated.
 
Even though it hadn’t rained, the earth was partially liquefied due to being heated.
   
The ancient tree, which was so huge that you had to look up, had its roots sticking out from several locations of the ground. If you lowered your attention even for a moment, you would find yourself tripping on the roots.
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The ancient tree, which was so huge that you had to look up, had its root sticking out from several locations of the ground. If you lowered your attention even for a moment, you would find yourself tripping on the roots.
   
 
“Eww……what the heck is that creepy insect? A strange liquid is pouring from its beak.”
 
“Eww……what the heck is that creepy insect? A strange liquid is pouring from its beak.”
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The former Demon King made a mysterious smile and chuckled.
 
The former Demon King made a mysterious smile and chuckled.
   
“The forests of the Underworld isn’t this nice. The forest itself moves and will attack you. And there will be swamps all over the places. And the magnetic field is a complete mess so you can't use a compass. That’s why it has more thrills and is more fun over there. I will take you there one day as well.”
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“The forests of the Underworld isn’t this nice. The forest itself moves and will attack you. And there will be swamps all over the places. And the magnetic field is a complete mess so there’s no use of magnets. That’s why it has more thrills and is more fun over there. I will take you there one day as well.”
   
 
“……Sure. Though not for a while.”
 
“……Sure. Though not for a while.”
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They chased Kyelse who was leading them and Fear who was just behind her.
 
They chased Kyelse who was leading them and Fear who was just behind her.
   
From the looks of it they didn’t have a map or compass. There were getting their direction by using the slight bit of sunlight which was coming from above, and they therefore had a complete grasp of where they currently were and where they were heading to.
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From the looks of it they didn’t have a map or compass. There were getting their direction from using the slightest sunlight which were coming from above and therefore had a complete grasp of where they currently were and where they were heading to.
   
 
“Found it. Over here.”
 
“Found it. Over here.”
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Roughly two hours after they had progressed through the forest.
 
Roughly two hours after they had progressed through the forest.
   
Kyesle who was leading the party raised her voice right after Ren had wiped away his sweat.
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Kyesle who was leading the party raised her voice right after Ren had wiped away his sweats.
   
 
The ancient tomb.
 
The ancient tomb.
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The entrance that was heavily covered by ferns and creeping plants.
 
The entrance that was heavily covered by ferns and creeping plants.
   
It was made from an armful of huge rocks that had been piled onto each other and then had been hardened with clay. There was nothing which could be distinguished as a door. It was simply a widely opened entrance that led into a dark passage.
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It was made from armful of huge rocks that had been piled onto each other and then had been hardened with clay. There was nothing which could be distinguished as a door. It was simply a widely opened entrance that leads into a dark passage.
   
 
''……Three-hundred years ago.''
 
''……Three-hundred years ago.''
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“You, go.”
 
“You, go.”
   
“I have high hopes for you.”
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“I have high hopes of you.”
   
 
“……I knew all of you would say that.”
 
“……I knew all of you would say that.”
   
Ren started to walk into the entrance of the ancient tomb after the three girls push his back as if it was the obvious choice.
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Ren started to walk into the entrance of the ancient tomb after he had the three girls push his back as if this was the obvious choice.
   
 
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