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Ryner couldn’t stop himself,
 
Ryner couldn’t stop himself,
 
 
"Ah…uh, woah."
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“Ah…uh, woah.
 
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And his voice actually resounded from his mouth.
 
And his voice actually resounded from his mouth.
 
 
"Sound" and "voice", both of which have never existed till this moment, now resounded in his surroundings.
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“Sound” and “voice”, both of which have never existed till this moment, now resounded in his surroundings.
 
 
 
Taken aback, Ryner stared at the sky once again. He widened his eyes and looked up at the dimension’s cracks.
 
Taken aback, Ryner stared at the sky once again. He widened his eyes and looked up at the dimension’s cracks.
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But,
 
But,
 
 
"…I can’t cry."
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“…I can’t cry.
 
 
 
He whispered to himself.
 
He whispered to himself.
 
 
"Someone might’ve come all this way for me, but I might just drive them away if they see me crying."
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“Someone might’ve come all this way for me, but I might just drive them away if they see me crying.
 
 
 
Ryner whispered to himself.
 
Ryner whispered to himself.
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Waited for someone who opened up the distortion of dimensions to come and take him away.
 
Waited for someone who opened up the distortion of dimensions to come and take him away.
 
 
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“….”
"…."
 
 
 
 
He waited.
 
He waited.
 
 
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“…”
"…"
 
 
 
 
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He waited.
 
He waited.
 
 
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“….”
"…."
 
 
 
 
But nobody came.
 
But nobody came.
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Ryner tilted his head,
 
Ryner tilted his head,
 
 
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“….maybe”
".....Maybe"
 
 
 
 
He said.
 
He said.
 
 
"Maybe it’s alright for me to go out?"
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“Maybe it’s alright for me to go out?
 
 
 
He said.
 
He said.
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Despite that, Ryner looked around,
 
Despite that, Ryner looked around,
 
 
".....Can I go out?"
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“…can I go out?"
 
 
 
He asked.
 
He asked.
 
 
"Can I leave this place now?"
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“Can I leave this place now?
 
 
 
He asked.
 
He asked.
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Hope swelled within him. Maybe someone would answer him. Because the world is now connected. Because this place is now connected to somewhere else, so he thought that somebody might answer his inquiry.
 
Hope swelled within him. Maybe someone would answer him. Because the world is now connected. Because this place is now connected to somewhere else, so he thought that somebody might answer his inquiry.
 
 
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“…”
"…"
 
 
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He couldn’t bear it anymore.
 
He couldn’t bear it anymore.
 
 
"…I’m going out."
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“…I’m going out.
 
 
 
He muttered in a somewhat timid, yet resolved voice.
 
He muttered in a somewhat timid, yet resolved voice.
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He saw something thrown into this side from the dimension crack.
 
He saw something thrown into this side from the dimension crack.
 
 
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“….eh.”
"….Eh."
 
 
 
 
He made such a sound at the sight of that.
 
He made such a sound at the sight of that.
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And was surprised again that his voice actually resounded,
 
And was surprised again that his voice actually resounded,
 
 
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“…ah.”
"…Ah."
 
 
 
 
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He said.
 
He said.
 
 
And that 'ah' actually emerged from his mouth. From his throat. He touched his throat, which was finally able to produce sounds,
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And that ‘ah’ actually emerged from his mouth. From his throat. He touched his throat, which was finally able to produce sounds,
 
 
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“Ehehe.”
"Ehehe."
 
 
 
 
Ryner laughed.
 
Ryner laughed.
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And,
 
And,
 
 
"Wait, now’s not the time for this."
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“Wait, now’s not the time for this.
 
 
 
Looked up at the sky again.
 
Looked up at the sky again.
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Ryner looked at it and said.
 
Ryner looked at it and said.
 
 
"Wonder what that is."
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“Wonder what that is.
 
 
 
When he took a closer look, he could see that it’s a man cloaked in black. He could see that it’s a man clothed in black armor.
 
When he took a closer look, he could see that it’s a man cloaked in black. He could see that it’s a man clothed in black armor.
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So Ryner said,
 
So Ryner said,
 
 
"Wonder who that is."
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“Wonder who that is.
 
 
 
Golden hair and golden eyes.
 
Golden hair and golden eyes.
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The man was shouting.
 
The man was shouting.
 
 
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“….”
"…."
 
 
 
 
He was shouting something.
 
He was shouting something.
 
 
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“…”
"…"
 
 
 
 
But in a language that Ryner has never heard before.
 
But in a language that Ryner has never heard before.
 
 
"I can’t really hear it properly."
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“I can’t really hear it properly.
 
 
 
He said with a troubled expression.
 
He said with a troubled expression.
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And Ryner commanded that area,
 
And Ryner commanded that area,
 
 
"Influence the world."
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“Influence the world.
 
 
 
And the area sprang into motion, beginning its influence upon the world.
 
And the area sprang into motion, beginning its influence upon the world.
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Expand the grayness.
 
Expand the grayness.
 
 
And the equation that Ryner had created—
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And the equation that Ryner had created-
 
 
 
 
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"Not yet. I can’t die here yet."
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“Not yet. I can’t die here yet.
 
 
 
 
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"I’ll kill you all. I am destruction. I’ll kill you all."
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“I’ll kill you all. I am destruction. I’ll kill you all.
   
 
 
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Ryner tilted his head,
 
Ryner tilted his head,
 
 
"Kill you all?"
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“Kill you all?
 
 
 
He whispered.
 
He whispered.
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That blood colored the previously gray world with gold.
 
That blood colored the previously gray world with gold.
 
 
"….Aha."
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“….aha.
 
 
Ryner couldn’t stop himself from smiling.
 
Ryner couldn’t stop himself from smiling.
 
 
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But the man was making a pained face, so Ryner controlled his smile and said,
 
But the man was making a pained face, so Ryner controlled his smile and said,
 
 
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“Hey.”
"Hey."
 
 
 
 
There was a hint of nervousness to his voice.
 
There was a hint of nervousness to his voice.
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So even whilst feeling his own anxiety, Ryner said,
 
So even whilst feeling his own anxiety, Ryner said,
 
 
"Hey, you."
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“Hey, you.
 
 
But the man wouldn’t answer.
 
But the man wouldn’t answer.
 
 
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Or is it..
 
Or is it..
 
 
"…Do you not understand my language?"
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“…do you not understand my language?
 
 
 
And he touched his throat again.
 
And he touched his throat again.
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Once again, Ryner looked up at the man who continued to fight while screaming,
 
Once again, Ryner looked up at the man who continued to fight while screaming,
 
 
"….Hey you. Can you hear my words?"
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“….hey you. Can you hear my words?
 
 
 
He said.
 
He said.
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Because he didn’t make himself smile just now.
 
Because he didn’t make himself smile just now.
 
 
Even though he’s been planning to do so for a long time. He’s been mulling over the thought for an unbelievable amount of time to smile if somebody ever came into this world. But he couldn’t find it in himself to smile just now.
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Even though he’s been planning to do so for a long time. He’s been mulling over the thought for an unbelievable amount of time to smile if somebody ever came into this world. But he couldn’t find it in himself to smile just now.
 
 
"U-um, excuse me."
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“U-um, excuse me.
 
 
 
He said and tried to smile again. Tried to smile so he can express how happy he was at the man’s coming.
 
He said and tried to smile again. Tried to smile so he can express how happy he was at the man’s coming.
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But the man looked down at him and said,
 
But the man looked down at him and said,
 
 
"…Another enemy?"
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“…another enemy?
 
 
 
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Ryner shook his head.
 
Ryner shook his head.
 
 
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“No…”
"No…"
 
 
 
 
But the man said,
 
But the man said,
 
 
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“Sword.”
"Sword."
 
 
 
 
And a sword is created before the man. Because he’d created the sword, he momentarily let down his guard. He let down his guard against whoever he’s been fighting till now.
 
And a sword is created before the man. Because he’d created the sword, he momentarily let down his guard. He let down his guard against whoever he’s been fighting till now.
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Ryner said,
 
Ryner said,
 
 
"W-watch ou…"
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“W-watch ou…”
 
 
 
But the man commanded his sword.
 
But the man commanded his sword.
 
 
"Kill that monster."
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“Kill that monster.
 
 
 
The sword reacted.
 
The sword reacted.
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Ryner narrowed his eyes.
 
Ryner narrowed his eyes.
 
 
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“….”
"…."
 
 
 
 
Looking at the sword heading towards him, he narrowed his eyes in sadness,
 
Looking at the sword heading towards him, he narrowed his eyes in sadness,
 
 
"…Monster…monster…I see, I look like a monster in your world, huh."
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“…monster…monster…I see, I look like a monster in your world, huh.
 
 
 
He said and easily dodged the sword. It passed beside Ryner’s neck and struck the gray floor.
 
He said and easily dodged the sword. It passed beside Ryner’s neck and struck the gray floor.
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"…Maybe that’s why I’m locked up here, all by myself."
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“…maybe that’s why I’m locked up here, all by myself.
 
 
 
He muttered.
 
He muttered.
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And the man couldn’t resist anymore.
 
And the man couldn’t resist anymore.
 
 
"Shit, shit."
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“Shit, shit.
 
 
 
He shouted.
 
He shouted.
 
 
"Shit, shit, shit."
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“Shit, shit, shit.
 
 
 
The man shouted.
 
The man shouted.
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Ryner looked up at him,
 
Ryner looked up at him,
 
 
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“….um.”
"….Um."
 
 
 
 
He said in an insecure voice.
 
He said in an insecure voice.
 
 
"Should I…help?"
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“Should I…help?
 
 
 
And the man said,
 
And the man said,
 
 
"Shit, shit, you monsters, I’ll kill you all."
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“Shit, shit, you monsters, I’ll kill you all.
 
 
 
He said.
 
He said.
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And Ryner,
 
And Ryner,
 
 
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“…ah.”
"…Ah."
 
 
 
 
Withdrew his outstretched hand.
 
Withdrew his outstretched hand.
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The man’s blood splattered.
 
The man’s blood splattered.
 
 
"Shit, shit, shit."
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“Shit, shit, shit.
 
 
 
His golden blood splattered.
 
His golden blood splattered.
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Ryner looked at that,
 
Ryner looked at that,
 
 
"…Not under my watch."
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“…not under my watch.
 
 
 
He said and kicked off the ground.
 
He said and kicked off the ground.
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He wove equations.
 
He wove equations.
 
 
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They were probably the ones assaulting the black-clothed man. Those women looked at him with surprise evident on their faces.
 
They were probably the ones assaulting the black-clothed man. Those women looked at him with surprise evident on their faces.
 
 
"What are you."
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“What are you.
 
 
"Why is there a being at «the ends of time»?"
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“Why is there a being at <<the ends of time>>?
 
 
"Hey, this thing is trying to come over…devour. Devour it and close the dimension."
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“Hey, this thing is trying to come over…devour. Devour it and close the dimension.
 
 
 
They exchanged such words.
 
They exchanged such words.
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The women were surprised once again. No, their faces contorted in fear, and,
 
The women were surprised once again. No, their faces contorted in fear, and,
 
 
"What are you."
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“What are you.
 
 
 
They asked once again, and Ryner replied,
 
They asked once again, and Ryner replied,
 
 
 
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"Well, I don’t actually have the answer to that myself…"
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“Well, I don’t actually have the answer to that myself…”
 
 
 
However, a woman interrupted his words,
 
However, a woman interrupted his words,
 
 
"You monster."
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“You monster.
 
 
 
The next woman spoke up as well.
 
The next woman spoke up as well.
 
 
"You monster."
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“You monster.
 
 
 
The woman beside her said so too.
 
The woman beside her said so too.
 
 
"You monster."
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“You monster.
 
 
 
And Ryner went silent.
 
And Ryner went silent.
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But the women continued,
 
But the women continued,
 
 
"Eliminate it."
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“Eliminate it.
 
 
"Shove it into the dimension beyond."
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“Shove it into the dimension beyond.
 
 
 
And the women attempted to close the dimensional crack again. They drew up tremendous power and attempted to close the dimensional crack.
 
And the women attempted to close the dimensional crack again. They drew up tremendous power and attempted to close the dimensional crack.
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So it’s very easy for him to open up the crack.
 
So it’s very easy for him to open up the crack.
 
 
 
However, the women spoke up once again.
 
However, the women spoke up once again.
 
 
"Seal this monster."
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“Seal this monster.
 
 
"Don’t let the monster come to this side."
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“Don’t let the monster come to this side.
 
 
"The monster."
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“The monster.
 
 
"The monster."
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“The monster.
 
 
"The monster."
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“The monster.
 
 
Hearing those words, Ryner—
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Hearing those words, Ryner-
 
 
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“…”
"…"
 
 
 
 
Took his hands off the dimensional crack.
 
Took his hands off the dimensional crack.
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So, with faces contorted in fear, they said,
 
So, with faces contorted in fear, they said,
 
 
"Gather our comrades. Gather all the '''Goddesses'''. We’re going to use a curse. The biggest one of them, so that this monster can never come out again."
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“Gather our comrades. Gather all the '''Goddesses'''. We’re going to use a curse. The biggest one of them, so that this monster can never come out again.
 
 
 
They shouted as if they were truly looking at an ugly monster.
 
They shouted as if they were truly looking at an ugly monster.
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"…Am I really that ugly…"
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“…am I really that ugly…”
 
 
 
He muttered.
 
He muttered.
 
 
"….I’ve never seriously looked at myself, so I can’t tell."
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“….I’ve never seriously looked at myself, so I can’t tell.
 
 
 
He muttered.
 
He muttered.
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He lifted his face and called out to the women beyond the closing crack in an apologetic voice,
 
He lifted his face and called out to the women beyond the closing crack in an apologetic voice,
 
 
"…I’m sorry for surprising you."
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“…I’m sorry for surprising you.
 
 
"Seal the monster!"
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“Seal the monster!
 
 
"I really wanted to get along with you…"
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“I really wanted to get along with you…”
 
 
"Seal those monsters!"
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“Seal those monsters!
 
 
"…I’m really sorr…."
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“…I’m really sorr….
 
 
 
But Ryner’s voice trailed off.
 
But Ryner’s voice trailed off.
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And,
 
And,
 
 
"…It seems like there’s no place for me in the outside world."
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“…it seems like there’s no place for me in the outside world.
 
 
 
He said and looked at the gray-stained world once again.
 
He said and looked at the gray-stained world once again.
 
 
 
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The gray world he’d been locked into for who knows how long, all alone.
 
The gray world he’d been locked into for who knows how long, all alone.
 
 
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“…”
"…"
 
 
 
 
And he found a black spot in the center of that gray expanse.
 
And he found a black spot in the center of that gray expanse.
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Ryner looked down at him, narrowed his eyes and said,
 
Ryner looked down at him, narrowed his eyes and said,
 
 
"…You still alive?"
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“…you still alive?
 
 
  +
“…”
"…"
 
 
 
 
But there was no answer.
 
But there was no answer.
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The question that was most important to Ryner.
 
The question that was most important to Ryner.
 
 
"….Hey, since you’re here, does that mean that you’re despised as well?"
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“….hey, since you’re here, does that mean that you’re despised as well?
 
 
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“….”
"…."
 
 
 
"…Hey, since you’re here, does that mean that you’re an outsider, just like me?"
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“…hey, since you’re here, does that mean that you’re an outsider, just like me?
 
 
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“…”
"…"
 
 
 
 
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"…Hey, will you stay here with me forever and ever?"
 
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“…hey, will you stay here with me forever and ever?”
 
 
 
When the '''Lonesome Demon'''[Ryner Eris Reed] finished, the man lifted his face.
 
When the '''Lonesome Demon'''[Ryner Eris Reed] finished, the man lifted his face.
 
 
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