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……I see. She somewhat understood. Looking up, she exchanged glances with Mirror, who stood in front of her. She and Mirror both nodded slightly.
 
……I see. She somewhat understood. Looking up, she exchanged glances with Mirror, who stood in front of her. She and Mirror both nodded slightly.
   
“I understand the situation. So you’re saying that while the first-year students go on their summer camp, we should go complain to the head of the branch facility, right?
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“I understand the situation. You’re saying that while the first-year students go on their summer camp, we should go to express our complaints to the head of the branch facility.
   
 
“……Zessel.”
 
“……Zessel.”
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Instead of sighing, Enne closed her eyes. If this wasn’t the headmaster’s office, she would have pinched the back of that idiot standing beside her.
 
Instead of sighing, Enne closed her eyes. If this wasn’t the headmaster’s office, she would have pinched the back of that idiot standing beside her.
   
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“Eh? You’re joking, right?”<!--Is this line really alright (in terms of translation)? I mean, why would Zessel say that?-->
“Eh? Ah, I was joking, of course.”
 
   
 
Her childhood friend smiled deceptively with a carefree expression. ……Why hadn’t this guy fixed his childish habits?
 
Her childhood friend smiled deceptively with a carefree expression. ……Why hadn’t this guy fixed his childish habits?

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