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The sea wasn’t blue like it had been at noon, and the horizon was dyed by the sunset. It was just before night fell. Therefore, it was probably during this time when he felt the closest to the sun.
 
The sea wasn’t blue like it had been at noon, and the horizon was dyed by the sunset. It was just before night fell. Therefore, it was probably during this time when he felt the closest to the sun.
   
Suddenly, mixed in with the ocean spray, the sharp sound of something slicing through the air reached his ears.
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Suddenly. Mixed in with the ocean spray, the sharp sound of something cutting air reached his ears.
   
 
—Eh?
 
—Eh?
   
Directly ahead of him, the figure of a person appeared on the beach he'd previously thought was empty. As he advanced closer, the tempo of the sound increased. It didn’t just become faster, but also more powerful.
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Directly ahead in the direction he had been going, the figure of a person appeared on the beach which he had thought was empty. As he advanced closer, the sounds of wind sped up. It didn’t just become faster, but also more powerful.
   
 
Deja-vu.
 
Deja-vu.
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Seeming like she felt both troubled and embarrassed, with a complicated expression, Ada smiled bitterly.
 
Seeming like she felt both troubled and embarrassed, with a complicated expression, Ada smiled bitterly.
   
“U-Um. Is it special training with your spear again?”
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“U-Um. It is special training with your spear again?”
   
 
“Half right and half wrong. But I guess you could interpret it that way.”
 
“Half right and half wrong. But I guess you could interpret it that way.”
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No matter how long he gazed at the girl’s face, the depths of her wavering eyes hid something important and only reflected a distant scenery.
 
No matter how long he gazed at the girl’s face, the depths of her wavering eyes hid something important and only reflected a distant scenery.
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===Part 5===
 
===Part 5===

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