Editing Tasogare-iro no Uta Tsukai:Volume2 Introductory Play

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After coming to understand the burden of his physique, bones, and internal organs, his meticulously calculated figure didn’t have even one gram of inconsistency.
 
After coming to understand the burden of his physique, bones, and internal organs, his meticulously calculated figure didn’t have even one gram of inconsistency.
   
Unattainable by even ancient artistic statues, his form was so perfect that even physiologists had nothing to complain about.
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Unattainable by even ancient artistic statues, he had the perfect form in the field of ergonomics. <!--this sentence reads strangely, could just end it at form-->
   
 
“Anyway, it’s Senpai’s turn.”
 
“Anyway, it’s Senpai’s turn.”

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