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A hysterical voice beside them rang out to the cloudless blue sky. For all ages and countries, the “instructors” at army facilities are basically “demon instructors.” According to them, the training of subordinates, starting with the smashing of the sparkling treasures which new recruits enclosed in the chamber of their chests- mainly those naive illusions called free will or individual dignity- into tiny, tiny pieces.
 
A hysterical voice beside them rang out to the cloudless blue sky. For all ages and countries, the “instructors” at army facilities are basically “demon instructors.” According to them, the training of subordinates, starting with the smashing of the sparkling treasures which new recruits enclosed in the chamber of their chests- mainly those naive illusions called free will or individual dignity- into tiny, tiny pieces.
   
“What's the matter, Warrant Officer Matthew Tetdrich! Wasn't 'Moving Blubber' supposed your selling point!? A blockhead meatball ain't nothing but a human shield on the battlefield!”
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“What's the matter, Warrant Officer Matthew Tetdrich! Wasn't 'Moving Blubber' supposed to be your selling point!? A blockhead meatball ain't nothing but a human shield on the battlefield!”
   
 
“...S-sir, yes, sir!”
 
“...S-sir, yes, sir!”
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“The Offensive of Avhelia—more accurately, the ‘Individual Offensives of the Avhelia Wetlands’, when considering the norms of the time, had been begun from a strikingly disadvantageous state of affairs for the Empire. It was a critical moment in which the 800 soldiers of the independent battalion under Captain Irsim’s direction were attacked from three directions, north, east, and west according to the Yaponik Army’s Three-Battalion, 1600-Solider Plan and, failing to retreat immediately, were completely surrounded by twice as many forces.
 
“The Offensive of Avhelia—more accurately, the ‘Individual Offensives of the Avhelia Wetlands’, when considering the norms of the time, had been begun from a strikingly disadvantageous state of affairs for the Empire. It was a critical moment in which the 800 soldiers of the independent battalion under Captain Irsim’s direction were attacked from three directions, north, east, and west according to the Yaponik Army’s Three-Battalion, 1600-Solider Plan and, failing to retreat immediately, were completely surrounded by twice as many forces.
   
“However, at a point where retreat would be the only option for a normal commander, Captain Irsim took the complete opposite action. In addition to making the soldiers under his command discard half of their provisions and air [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mortar_(weapon) mortar cannons], which had become deadweight, and lightening the bodies of all his troops, he forced an advance which could be considered insane.
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However, at a point where retreat would be the only option for a normal commander, Captain Irsim took the complete opposite action. In addition to making the soldiers under his command discard half of their provisions and air [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mortar_(weapon) mortar cannons], which had become deadweight, and lightening the bodies of all his troops, he forced an advance which could be considered insane.
   
“His goal was simple. To deal with enemy soldiers closing in from three directions, north, east, and west, by ‘fighting them one at a time before they merge’- that is, the Individual Offensive Strategy. Even if his entire forces were inferior to those of the enemy, if the enemy forces were broken up in three units, they were stronger than each of the enemy groups. If they fight against their enemy after they merge their forces, there is no doubt that they’d lose at once, but if they fight with the enemy three times in succession before that happened, then they’d win. Confident in that, Captain Irsim engaged in a series of battles and ultimately acquired a dramatic victory as per his intentions.”
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His goal was simple. To deal with enemy soldiers closing in from three directions, north, east, and west, by ‘fighting them one at a time before they merge’- that is, the Individual Offensive Strategy. Even if his entire forces were inferior to those of the enemy, if the enemy forces were broken up in three units, they were stronger than each of the enemy groups. If they fight against their enemy after they merge their forces, there is no doubt that they’d lose at once, but if they fight with the enemy three times in succession before that happened, then they’d win. Confident in that, Captain Irsim engaged in a series of battles and ultimately acquired a dramatic victory as per his intentions.”
   
 
The instructor’s face distorted in an increasingly loathsome expression as Ikta spoke smoothly.
 
The instructor’s face distorted in an increasingly loathsome expression as Ikta spoke smoothly.
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“I believe that having Irsim’s victory function simply as the foundation of the army spirit is a waste. ‘A tactical victory reversed a strategic defeat’ is one aspect of the act, but for soldiers in the times to come, we must enter that act into calculations and develop tactics. Therefore, we shouldn’t simply praise Captain Irsim’s standplay here, we should read into the tactical superiority of which only he took notice.
 
“I believe that having Irsim’s victory function simply as the foundation of the army spirit is a waste. ‘A tactical victory reversed a strategic defeat’ is one aspect of the act, but for soldiers in the times to come, we must enter that act into calculations and develop tactics. Therefore, we shouldn’t simply praise Captain Irsim’s standplay here, we should read into the tactical superiority of which only he took notice.
   
“There are three places where Captain Irsim’s forces were better compared to the Yaponik Army. First, unlike the enemy, who were divided into three units, his military forces were collected. Second, they were overwhelmingly light of foot compared with the enemy and superior in mobility. And third, due to their survey in advance, they had a thorough knowledge of the terrain of the Avhelia Wetlands. These three factors painted a much more realistic transition in the war in his mind than compared to the leaders of the Yaponik Army.
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There are three places where Captain Irsim’s forces were better compared to the Yaponik Army. First, unlike the enemy, who were divided into three units, his military forces were collected. Second, they were overwhelmingly light of foot compared with the enemy and superior in mobility. And third, due to their survey in advance, they had a thorough knowledge of the terrain of the Avhelia Wetlands. These three factors painted a much more realistic transition in the war in his mind than compared to the leaders of the Yaponik Army.
   
“If I put it simply. First, the leaders of the Yaponik Army saw ‘the forces of allies and enemies in the Avhelia Wetlands’ and had confidence in the superiority of their own army. But for Captain Irsim, he was able to read into ‘where the enemy-ally forces were deployed in the Avhelia Wetlands at each point time’. As a result, the merits of both armies were reversed in his mind.”
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If I put it simply. First, the leaders of the Yaponik Army saw ‘the forces of allies and enemies in the Avhelia Wetlands’ and had confidence in the superiority of their own army. But for Captain Irsim, he was able to read into ‘where the enemy-ally forces were deployed in the Avhelia Wetlands at each point time’. As a result, the merits of both armies were reversed in his mind.”
   
 
The students in the classroom barring none, including even the instructor at this point, were listening to Ikta’s speech. …No, to be accurate there was just one exception. The fiery haired girl sitting in the front row hadn’t even been listening until now.
 
The students in the classroom barring none, including even the instructor at this point, were listening to Ikta’s speech. …No, to be accurate there was just one exception. The fiery haired girl sitting in the front row hadn’t even been listening until now.

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