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In a small castle standing on a slightly elevated hill-----the Shrine of [Violent Wind].
 
In a small castle standing on a slightly elevated hill-----the Shrine of [Violent Wind].
   
A male and female were standing on the highest balcony that allows the full view of the surroundings.
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A male and female was standing on the highest balcony that allows the full view of the surroundings.
   
 
One of them was a young man with a calm face----Tooi Cross.
 
One of them was a young man with a calm face----Tooi Cross.
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“No no, you’re mistaken Ryura! In my world, that line is basically an iron rule for this kind of situation……….but, I understood it once I said it myself……….It’s kind of tough, or just lame so……..UAaAAaaa”
 
“No no, you’re mistaken Ryura! In my world, that line is basically an iron rule for this kind of situation……….but, I understood it once I said it myself……….It’s kind of tough, or just lame so……..UAaAAaaa”
   
In response to Tooi’s groaning, Ryura was shocked at first but she started bursting in laughter soon after.
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In response to Tooi’s groaning, Ryura was shocked at first but she started bursting in laughter soon later.
   
 
[[File:The Reunion With Twelve Fascinating Goddesses Volume 1 Non-Colour 5.png|thumb]]
 
[[File:The Reunion With Twelve Fascinating Goddesses Volume 1 Non-Colour 5.png|thumb]]
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Ryura said that.
 
Ryura said that.
   
“Only people who conquered my Shrine----basically, the people I recognized, are able to come to this place. Which means, you’re the first visitor to come to this place aside from me.”
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“Only people who conquered my Shrine----basically, the people I recognized, is able to come to this place. Which means, you’re the first visitor to come to this place aside from me.”
   
“I see. Ryura has not made any contract with others except for me.”
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“I see. Ryura has not made any contract with others before except for me.”
   
 
“Yes. Tooi, is my fist male. Tooi’s the first person who took my first.”
 
“Yes. Tooi, is my fist male. Tooi’s the first person who took my first.”
   
“…………That sentence is going to bring so many misunderstandings.”
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“…………That sentence is going to bring so much misunderstandings.”
   
 
“Well, I am the one who took Tooi’s first anyway.”
 
“Well, I am the one who took Tooi’s first anyway.”
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Tooi got flustered from being stared at. After getting satisfied by that flustered scene, Ryura spilled a giggle.
 
Tooi got flustered from being stared at. After getting satisfied by that flustered scene, Ryura spilled a giggle.
   
“Fufu, it’s just a joke. I know full well that we still need more power to defeat the [Demon King], and Tooi is working hard to complete our newly joined comrade’s [{{Furigana|Deity Equipment|Deus Alma}}]”
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“Fufu, it’s just a joke. I know full well that, we still need more power to defeat the [Demon King], and Tooi is working hard to complete our newly joined comrade’s [{{Furigana|Deity Equipment|Deus Alma}}]”
   
 
“Ryura………..”
 
“Ryura………..”
   
“You praised me with a [Beautiful] just now. That’s enough. I can eat 3 times more now.”
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“You praised me with a [Beautiful] just now. That’s enough. I can eat 3x more now.”
   
 
Ryura said that happily. Tooi scratched his head because it was embarrassing but, he soon looked at Ryura with a serious gaze.
 
Ryura said that happily. Tooi scratched his head because it was embarrassing but, he soon looked at Ryura with a serious gaze.
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<nowiki>*</nowiki>Gulp* Ryura’s expression tensed up.
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Gulp* Ryura’s expression tensed up.
   
“………….I-I wonder what you are talking about. I just wanted to come back to my castle since it’s been a long time. Y-yes, it's homesickness.”
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“………….I-I wonder what you are talking about. I just wanted to come back to my castle since it’s been a long time. Y-yes, it’s homesick.”
   
 
Since it’s embarrassing that her plan was seen through, she averted her sights away by reflex. However, Tooi looked over to her with a straightforward gaze.
 
Since it’s embarrassing that her plan was seen through, she averted her sights away by reflex. However, Tooi looked over to her with a straightforward gaze.
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“I’m glad you made a contract with me.”
 
“I’m glad you made a contract with me.”
   
There were no decorations in his words, it was just plain straightforward appreciation, respect and affection.
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There’s no decorations in his words, it was just plain straightforward appreciation, respect and affection.
   
 
A hot emotion swelled up in Ryura’s chest. Having spent time lonely deep inside her Shrine for eternity and not exchanging any contracts with any humans before, this emotion was a first for her.
 
A hot emotion swelled up in Ryura’s chest. Having spent time lonely deep inside her Shrine for eternity and not exchanging any contracts with any humans before, this emotion was a first for her.
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The wind came by again.
 
The wind came by again.
   
The wind carrying the scent of flowers passed by them and shook the scenery seen from the balcony. The scene of the vegetation swaying and the forest rustling looked like the earth was laughing and dancing.
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The wind carrying the scent of flowers passed by them and shook the scenery seen from the balcony. The scene of the vegetation swaying and forest rustling looks like the earth was laughing and dancing.
   
 
“It’s beautiful.”
 
“It’s beautiful.”
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It’s a single glowing gold page that can never be returned again.
 
It’s a single glowing gold page that can never be returned again.
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===Part 2===
 
===Part 2===

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