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The 1st Imperial capital prison.
 
The 1st Imperial capital prison.
   
The prison closed in by tall outer walls, it’s an imprisonment facility directly controlled by the Empire Military. Of the prisons within the country, it’s the strictest in terms of security; it’s a place secured with first class criminals like mass murderers, terrorist leaders that planned to overturn the country, and so on.
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The prison closed in by tall outer walls, it’s an imprisonment facility directly controlled by the Empire Military. Within the prisons within the country, it’s the strictest in terms of security; it’s a placed secured with first class criminals like mass murderers, terrorist leaders that planned to overturn the country, and so on.
   
Every part of the outer wall is buried by a metal that Spirits hate called [Ginite Alloy], making Spirits avoid the prison and Spirit techs are heavily restricted inside.
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Every part of the outer wall is buried by a metal that Spirit hates called [Ginite Alloy], making Spirits avoid the prison and Spirit techs are heavily restricted inside.
   
“Crimes caused by Spirit practitioners have been on the rise. If possible I want all the prisons in the country to put Ginite alloy into practice but…………..the cost is just too burdening. Because of that all the crazy criminals are settled here.”
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“Crimes caused by Spirit practitioner has been on the rise. If possible I want all the prison the country to put Ginite alloy into practice but…………..the cost is just too burdening. Because of that all the crazy criminals are settled here.”
   
 
Inside the prison.
 
Inside the prison.
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Guided by Laila, Tooi and Alua were walking down the dull corridor.
 
Guided by Laila, Tooi and Alua were walking down the dull corridor.
   
This prison is completely shut off from the public, and even the families of the criminals are not allowed for an audience unless they undergo a mountain of documents, but they were easily permitted to accompany because of general Laila’s words. This is probably what “A voice of authority is always correct” meant.
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This prison is completely shut off from the public, and even the families of the criminals is not allowed for an audience unless they undergo a mountain of documents but, they were easily permitted to accompany because of general Laila’s words. This is probably what “A voice of authority is always correct” meant.
   
“So Ginite alloy is still a high class resource. I thought it would be distributed more since 10 years passed.”
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“So Ginite alloy still a high class resource. I thought it would be distributed more since 10 years passed.”
   
“Refining skills are being developed now but the prices of the ore ingredients are increasing everywhere. Etherium is especially bad. Just one that can fit in between my fingers has a value similar to buying a whole castle.”
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“Refining skills are being developed now but, the prices of the ore ingredients are increasing everywhere. Etherium is especially bad. Just one that can fit in between my finger has a value similar to buying a whole castle.”
   
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Whistle~~* Tooi whistled.
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Whistle~~* Tooi whistled.
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It’s a metal with high concentrated holy attribute and has an extremely high compatibility rate with Spirits.
 
It’s a metal with high concentrated holy attribute and has an extremely high compatibility rate with Spirits.
   
In simple terms, it’s a metal closest to Spirits in this world.
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In a simple term, it’s a metal closest to Spirits in this world.
   
“Incidentally, are Etherium refining techniques established?”
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“Incidentally, is Etherium refining techniques established?”
   
 
“Not at all.”
 
“Not at all.”
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Alua answered the question.
 
Alua answered the question.
   
“Not only is the production rate extremely small, if a human touches it even a little bit, all the holy attribute of the alloy will disappear. Researchers and Spirit practitioners are researching it but……..there’s no noteworthy progress for almost a 100 years.”
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“Not only is the production rate extremely small, if a human touches it even by a little bit, all the holy attribute of the alloy will disappear. Researchers and Spirit practitioners are researching it but……..there’s no noteworthy progress for almost a 100 years.”
   
 
It’s ideal to use a weapon made from Etherium as a medium for [Ray Alma]; that’s the best but----the current problem is that it’s an impossible pipe dream.
 
It’s ideal to use a weapon made from Etherium as a medium for [Ray Alma]; that’s the best but----the current problem is that it’s an impossible pipe dream.
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Because of that, when [Etherium Weapons] are mentioned in the country, it’s either referred as a fantasy weapon or maybe an impractical theory on the table.
 
Because of that, when [Etherium Weapons] are mentioned in the country, it’s either referred as a fantasy weapon or maybe an impractical theory on the table.
   
“An Etherium sword is currently legendary-----no, it’s plain fantasy, Tooi………….Oops, it’s right here.”
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“An Etherium sword is currently legendary-----no, it’s plain fantasy, Tooi………….Oopps, it’s right here.”
   
 
The 3 of them went further into the prison.
 
The 3 of them went further into the prison.
   
Soon----they reached the lowest floor. They passed through the door with [No access] written on it with the key received from the personals there and went down the stairs which were inside.
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Soon----they reached the lowest floor. They passed through the door with [No access] written on it with the key received from the personals there and went down the chairs which was inside.
   
 
What they saw was a long path. Since there were no windows at all, it felt somewhat oppressing. The Ether lights buried into the ceiling were pouring cold light as they pass each one.
 
What they saw was a long path. Since there were no windows at all, it felt somewhat oppressing. The Ether lights buried into the ceiling were pouring cold light as they pass each one.
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Alua was making a half-doubtful expression.
 
Alua was making a half-doubtful expression.
   
“This 1st prison is certainly the biggest prison in the Empire………..but, I think it’s impossible to imprison a deity no matter how much I think…….In the first place, how did you catch her? It’s weird for me to not know if 1000 soldiers moved……….”
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“This 1st prison, is certainly the biggest prison in the Empire………..but, I think it’s impossible to imprison a deity no matter how much I think…….In the first place, how did you catch her? It’s weird for me to not know if 1000 soldiers moved……….”
   
 
“You’ll get it once you see it. Tooi probably has an idea why right?”
 
“You’ll get it once you see it. Tooi probably has an idea why right?”
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Tooi nodded with a face as if he was suppressing a sour face.
 
Tooi nodded with a face as if he was suppressing a sour face.
   
First off, it’s probably impossible to connect prison and a deity that is named within the {{Furigana|12 Goddesses|Nebulosa}}. The thought that a human made a cage able to restrain a deity, is wrong by itself.
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First off, it’s probably impossible to connect prison and a deity that is named within the {{Furigana|12 Goddesses|Nebulosa}}. The thought that a human made cage is able to restrain a deity, is wrong by itself.
   
 
(But, things changes when it comes to Shii…………)
 
(But, things changes when it comes to Shii…………)
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Imprisonment, and escaping. Most likely, it’s beyond that level.
 
Imprisonment, and escaping. Most likely, it’s beyond that level.
   
The 3 of them were walking down the path.
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3 of them were walking down the path.
   
 
After walking down the straight path, they finally reached the deepest part of the prison.
 
After walking down the straight path, they finally reached the deepest part of the prison.
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“Wha!?”
 
“Wha!?”
   
First, Alua shouted in shock. Tooi was shocked too but, since he had knowledge of the Deity’s personality, his shock was lesser than Alua’s.
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First, Alua shouted in shock. Tooi was shocked too but, since he has knowledge of the Deity’s personality, his shock was lesser than Alua’s.
   
 
The underground prison in front of them------was not a place that deserves to be called prison.
 
The underground prison in front of them------was not a place that deserves to be called prison.
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Although there’s a thick looking cell there, the interior deserves the word [Complex].
 
Although there’s a thick looking cell there, the interior deserves the word [Complex].
   
There were many dolls shaped like dogs and bears and it came in big and small. Chess board, sugoroku, Spinning top, playing cards, darts and other toys of that such. Countless books and pictures.
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There were many dolls shaped like dog and bears and it came in big and small. Chess board, sugoroku, Spinning top, playing cards, darts and other toys of that such. Countless books and pictures.
   
Anyways, there were many things and, on top of that, everything was not kept tidy or in order. All the dolls were shoved to one corner. Since the books were stacked so it’s still okay but, most of it was on the floor while half-opened. The pieces for the Chess and Sugoroku ended up outside the cell.
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Anyways, there were many things and, on top of that, everything was not kept tidy and in order. All the dolls were shoved to one corner. Since the books were stacked so it’s still okay but, most of it was on the floor while half-opened. The pieces for the Chess and Sugoroku ended up outside the cell.
   
 
“Is the entire prison cell in the country like this?”
 
“Is the entire prison cell in the country like this?”
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At that moment------there was a movement inside the prison cell.
 
At that moment------there was a movement inside the prison cell.
   
It was not a hard shabby bed that’s imagined when asked about prison, rather there were luxurious bed tools that do not lose to the bed that Tooi is currently sleeping in the Schut house.
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It was not a hard shabby bed that’s imagined when asked about prison and rather, there were luxurious bed tools that do not lose to the bed that Tooi is currently sleeping in the Schut house.
   
On top of the comfortable bed, the rolled up expensive looking blanket-------started to wiggle about.
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On top of the comfortable bed, the rolled up expensive looking blanked-------started to wiggle about.
   
 
And after a whole, the blanket lump continued squirming around, but there were no other actions other than that. Having broken free from his numbness, Tooi let out his voice.
 
And after a whole, the blanket lump continued squirming around, but there were no other actions other than that. Having broken free from his numbness, Tooi let out his voice.

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