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On top of the comfortable bed, the rolled up expensive looking blanket-------started to wiggle about.
 
On top of the comfortable bed, the rolled up expensive looking blanket-------started to wiggle about.
   
And after a whole, the blanket lump continued squirming around, but there were no other actions other than that. Having broken free from his numbness, Tooi let out his voice.
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And after a whole, the blanket lump continued squirming around but, there were no other actions other than that. Having broken free from his numbness, Tooi let out his voice.
   
 
“Shii! It’s me. Tooi.”
 
“Shii! It’s me. Tooi.”
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“………..Hnaaa~~”
 
“………..Hnaaa~~”
   
A young and cute voice appeared, it was impossible to distinguish whether it was a yawn or not .
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A young and cute voice appeared, was it a yawn or not because it was impossible to distinguish which.
   
 
The person that appeared from inside the blanket----was a young girl wearing one shirt.
 
The person that appeared from inside the blanket----was a young girl wearing one shirt.
   
She has the height of a 10 year old. She also has glowing blonde hair, but spiky bed hair could be seen all over her head. The face is extremely cute, but she was blinking repeatedly and yawning. She looked really sleepy.
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She has the height of a 10 year old. She also has glowing blonde hair but, spiky bed hair could be seen all over her head. The face is extremely cute but, she was blinking repeatedly and was yawning. She looked really sleepy.
   
 
The word [Time & Space] was written largely with Sinology-----Sinology used in modern Japan on the loose shirt that is totally not her size.
 
The word [Time & Space] was written largely with Sinology-----Sinology used in modern Japan on the loose shirt that is totally not her size.
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“Heh~~ Is that so~~”
 
“Heh~~ Is that so~~”
   
She replied back with a useless answer and an extremely laid-back tone.
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She replied back with a useless answer with an extremely laid-back tone.
   
 
“……..You don’t change huh.”
 
“……..You don’t change huh.”
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This happened right after the [Demon King] was destroyed.
 
This happened right after the [Demon King] was destroyed.
   
On pro-forma terms, the {{Furigana|12 Goddesses|Nebulosa}} that are affiliated with the Empire as Tooi Cross’s contract Deities, cut off their ties with the Empire the same time they lost their master, and scattered about the continent.
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On pro-forma terms, the {{Furigana|12 Goddesses|Nebulosa}} that are affiliated with the Empire as Tooi Cross’s contract Deity, cut off their ties with the Empire the same time they lost their master, and scattered about the continent.
   
 
However, within them-----the Deity of [Time & Space], La Shii Fomalhaut was the only one who------got in contact with the Empire Military and brought up a certain deal.
 
However, within them-----the Deity of [Time & Space], La Shii Fomalhaut was the only one who------got in contact with the Empire Military and brought up a certain deal.
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Once La Shii released such a carefree answer, the arguments reached its conclusion.
 
Once La Shii released such a carefree answer, the arguments reached its conclusion.
   
If they had to hand over a grand power known as a Deity then it’s better to have her here in their country no matter what price they have to pay. Having thought that, the Empire gave her a condition of being confined deep underground, in return they would accept all of La Shii Fomalhaut’s requests.
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If they had to hand over a grand power known as a Deity then, it’s better to have her here in their country no matter what price they had to pay. Having thought that, the Empire gave her a condition of being confined deep underground in return, they would accept to all of La Shii Fomalhaut’s requests.
   
 
No matter how crazy the request may be, everyone was in complete fear but-------once the lid was opened up, the requests La Shii brought up were all anticlimactic simple tasks.
 
No matter how crazy the request may be, everyone was in complete fear but-------once the lid was opened up, the requests La Shii brought up were all anticlimactic simple tasks.
   
Things like buying the toys, books and baked sweets in the city. The bed and blanket she first requested were the only high quality items but, everything else were goods that can be bought with a child’s pocket change.
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Things like buying the toys, books and baked sweets in the city. The bed and blanket she first requested was the only high quality but, everything else were goods that can be bought with a child’s pocket change.
   
 
She would sleep all day long and once in a while when she wakes up as if she recalled something, she would ask for toys and baked sweets on whim before going back to slacking.
 
She would sleep all day long and once in a while when she wakes up as if she recalled something, she would ask for toys and baked sweets on whim before going back to slacking.
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Tooi thought.
 
Tooi thought.
   
In terms of pure power, La Shii Fomalhaut is at the top even in the {{Furigana|12 Goddesses|Nebulosa}}. With time and space under her control, she is the owner of a power that can separate herself from the others.
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In terms of pure power, La Shii Fomalhaut is at the top even in the {{Furigana|12 Goddesses|Nebulosa}}. With time and space under her control, she is the owner with a power that can separate herself from the others.
   
 
However, there was one problem.
 
However, there was one problem.
   
And that is-----she’s a bum.
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And that’s-----she’s a bum.
   
 
La Shii Fomalhaut has a lazy personality that is so serious that it’s scary.
 
La Shii Fomalhaut has a lazy personality that is so serious that it’s scary.
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Everything is troublesome to her, every event is annoying to her. Her sleep time is overwhelmingly longer than her time when she’s awake-----and more importantly, she doesn’t move.
 
Everything is troublesome to her, every event is annoying to her. Her sleep time is overwhelmingly longer than her time when she’s awake-----and more importantly, she doesn’t move.
   
While having tremendous power that no one else has, she would not use it by saying that it’s [Troublesome].
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While having tremendous power that no one else have, she would not use it by saying that it’s [Troublesome].
   
 
It’s so serious that she formed a [{{Furigana|Deity Equipment|Deus Alma}}] with Tooi only once.
 
It’s so serious that she formed a [{{Furigana|Deity Equipment|Deus Alma}}] with Tooi only once.
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“………Hnaa~~”
 
“………Hnaa~~”
   
Shii opened her mouth as wide as it could open and let out a big yawn.
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Shii opened her mouth wide as it could open and let out a big yawn.
   
 
She stood up on the bed and tried stretching her arms but……….since she’s currently naked with only one shirt on, it was quite a dangerous pose in a lot of ways.
 
She stood up on the bed and tried stretching her arms but……….since she’s currently naked with only one shirt on, it was quite a dangerous pose in a lot of ways.
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While saying that in a carefree tone, Shii pressed down the hem of her shirt.
 
While saying that in a carefree tone, Shii pressed down the hem of her shirt.
   
The appearance and clothes of Deities or high ranking Spirits are determined by the wearer's will. Fundamentally, they would wear clothes or armor according to their personality or attributes; many of them have mystical yet noble appearances but----in Shii’s case, she would manifest only a shirt because of the reason that it’s [Troublesome].
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The appearance and clothes of Deities or high ranking Spirits are determined by the wearer's will. Fundamentally, they would wear clothes or armors according to their personality or attributes; many of them have mystical and yet noble appearances but----in Shii’s case, she would manifest only a shirt because she of the reason that it’s [Troublesome].
   
 
It’s dangerous in 2 ways.
 
It’s dangerous in 2 ways.
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“Hnn~~, Ah~~, we are kind of like always naked based on how you think about it~~. It’s just clothes made based on our mood anyways. So I guess there’s nothing to be embarrassed of~~”
 
“Hnn~~, Ah~~, we are kind of like always naked based on how you think about it~~. It’s just clothes made based on our mood anyways. So I guess there’s nothing to be embarrassed of~~”
   
“Have some shame. That would increase your charm as a female.”
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“Have some shame. That would increase your charm of a female.”
   
 
“Hnn.if Too-kun says that then I’ll do it~~””
 
“Hnn.if Too-kun says that then I’ll do it~~””
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“Un~~. It’s my word that Too-kun taught me~~. Cool right~~?”
 
“Un~~. It’s my word that Too-kun taught me~~. Cool right~~?”
   
'It’s not cool at all……….rather honestly, it's lame' was what he thought but since she looked satisfied, Tooi did not say anything. It’s probably like how foreigners put on word tattoos without knowing what it means.
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It’s not cool at all……….rather honestly, it's lame was what he thought but since she looks satisfied, Tooi did not say anything. It’s probably like how foreigners put on word tattoos without knowing what it means.
   
 
“Well~~, for now, welcome home~~, Too-kun. You came back huh. Did you enjoy your world?”
 
“Well~~, for now, welcome home~~, Too-kun. You came back huh. Did you enjoy your world?”
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“……..Y-yes, hi………”
 
“……..Y-yes, hi………”
   
Alua lowered her head while her cheeks were twitching. Judging by the side of her face, she was showing anger along the lines of [That’s something I don’t want to be told by you!] but she is well aware that she’s dealing with a deity.
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Alua lowered her head while her cheeks were twitching. Judging by the side of her face, she was showing anger along the lines of [That’s something I don’t want to be told by you!] but, she is well aware that she’s dealing with a deity.
   
 
“So~~, Too-kun, Laila-chin, and Alua-chi. What business do you have with me? Hnaa~~”
 
“So~~, Too-kun, Laila-chin, and Alua-chi. What business do you have with me? Hnaa~~”
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“Though I say that, I pretty much have an idea~. It’s probably related to the {{Furigana|12 Goddesses|Nebulosa}} problem right?”
 
“Though I say that, I pretty much have an idea~. It’s probably related to the {{Furigana|12 Goddesses|Nebulosa}} problem right?”
   
Tooi was slightly shocked because she hit the bulls-eye.
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Tooi was slightly shocked because she hit a bulls-eye.
   
 
“How did you know? You have been sleeping in here for 10 years right?”
 
“How did you know? You have been sleeping in here for 10 years right?”
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However, Laila did not bother much about it and lightly raised her hand to make a pose. It’s a reaction showing that she predicted this to happen to a certain extent.
 
However, Laila did not bother much about it and lightly raised her hand to make a pose. It’s a reaction showing that she predicted this to happen to a certain extent.
   
“Sorry but I don’t want to come out from here~~. Rather, I don’t want to do anything~~. I want to be lazy every day and sleep sleep and sleep when I want to~~”
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“Sorry but, I don’t want to come out from here~~. Rather, I don’t want to do anything~~. I want to be lazy every day and sleep sleep and sleep when I want to~~”
   
 
“What do you mean by sleep sleep and sleep? Isn’t that supposed to be sticky sticky.”
 
“What do you mean by sleep sleep and sleep? Isn’t that supposed to be sticky sticky.”
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At least make it sleep eat and sleep, Tooi said that.
 
At least make it sleep eat and sleep, Tooi said that.
   
La Shii [Ahaha~ true~] laughed as if she didn’t care and while rolling around the bed, she wrapped herself in her blanket.
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La Shii [Ahaha~ true~] laughed as if she didn’t cared and while rolling around the bed, she wrapped herself in her blanket.
   
 
“Even Too-kun hates troublesome matters right~~? Just ignore it. Give up on me and the other deities.”
 
“Even Too-kun hates troublesome matters right~~? Just ignore it. Give up on me and the other deities.”

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