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“Even Too-kun hates troublesome matters right~~? Just ignore it. Give up on me and the other deities.”
 
“Even Too-kun hates troublesome matters right~~? Just ignore it. Give up on me and the other deities.”
   
“It’s true that I hate troublesome problems……but I can’t just ignore this. I have my responsibility for having you all serve under me.”
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“It’s true that I hate troublesome problems……but, I can’t just ignore this. I have my responsibility for having you all serve under me.”
   
“Responsibility huh~~………….There might be a few things to think about the current situation of the {{Furigana|12 Goddesses|Nebulosa}}~~. But I think Too-kun doesn’t have the right to say anything. You revoked our contracts in such a one-sided manner and went back to your world after all…………”
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“Responsibility huh~~………….There might be a few things to think about the current situation of the {{Furigana|12 Goddesses|Nebulosa}}~~. But, I think Too-kun doesn’t have the right to say anything. You revoked our contracts in such a one-sided manner and went back to your world after all…………”
   
 
'''''Also''''', La Shii continued.
 
'''''Also''''', La Shii continued.
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“………….Yesterday, I had the same conversation with Tooi Onii-chan when we came to the imperial capital. It’s not that people gather to the city, it’s because people gather here that it’s a city……………”
 
“………….Yesterday, I had the same conversation with Tooi Onii-chan when we came to the imperial capital. It’s not that people gather to the city, it’s because people gather here that it’s a city……………”
   
“Yes. That is correct. It might sound like Tautology but the reason why people gather to the city is because people are gathered in the city---------same as that, this is the reason why this man was able to make contracts with 12 deities.”
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“Yes. That is correct. It might sound like Tautology but, the reason why people gather to the city is because people are gathered in the city---------same as that, this is the reason why this man was able to make contracts with 12 deities.”
   
 
Laila spoke fluently.
 
Laila spoke fluently.
   
The events that occurred 10 years ago in this world-------since she was traveling in this world with Tooi Cross as his partner, she was able to say this.
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The events that occurred 10 years ago in this world-------since she was traveling in this world with Tooi Cross as his partner, she is able to say this.
   
“Within the 12, only 3 or 4 of them were deities that Tooi made a contract with through the formal steps------they were the deities that accepted Tooi Cross as their masters from the bottom of their heart. Most of them took advantage of this by making contracts with him because Tooi was already a Deity knight”
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“Within the 12, only 3 or 4 of them were deities that Tooi made a contract with through the formal steps------they were the deities that accepted Tooi Cross as their masters from the bottom of their heart. Most of them, took advantage of this by making contracts with him because Tooi was already a Deity knight”
   
 
“Took advantage……….”
 
“Took advantage……….”
   
“You can call it a blind following if you want. There was value on using him-----once they step onto the chance of victory; they decided to lend their power to Tooi.”
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“You can call it blind following behind if you want. There was value on using him-----once they step onto the chance of victory; they decided to lend their power to Tooi.”
   
 
Chance of victory.
 
Chance of victory.
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Everything was just as Laila said.
 
Everything was just as Laila said.
   
For an organization to stay an organization, they must have the existence of a clear [Enemy]. By having an enemy that has to be defeated, order and control is born in the organization.
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For an organization to stay an organization, they must the existence of a clear [Enemy]. By having an enemy that has to be defeated, order and control is born in the organization.
   
 
Because there is an [Enemy] called the Demon King Hadar, the {{Furigana|12 Goddesses|Nebulosa}} turned into a strong organization with one goal----into a force that shared the same fate. Everyone wasn’t that obedient to Tooi but even so, there was control there.
 
Because there is an [Enemy] called the Demon King Hadar, the {{Furigana|12 Goddesses|Nebulosa}} turned into a strong organization with one goal----into a force that shared the same fate. Everyone wasn’t that obedient to Tooi but even so, there was control there.
   
In order to fight Hadar who possessed tremendous power as if it did not belong to the world’s structure, they needed to join forces.
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In order to fight Hadar who possessed tremendous power as if it did not belonged to the world’s structure, they needed to join forces.
   
 
That’s why-------he won’t think that his decision was wrong.
 
That’s why-------he won’t think that his decision was wrong.
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A relationship with no trust and is only connected by benefits.
 
A relationship with no trust and is only connected by benefits.
   
One with using each other by greed.
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One with, using each other by greed.
   
 
“Of course, it’s not like everyone did not accept Too-kun~~”
 
“Of course, it’s not like everyone did not accept Too-kun~~”
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“Me? Let’s see~~. Hnaa~~. I like Too-kun………..but, I have no intentions to obey you~~”
 
“Me? Let’s see~~. Hnaa~~. I like Too-kun………..but, I have no intentions to obey you~~”
   
Her tone was soft but her words were sharp.
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Her tone was soft but, her words were sharp.
   
 
“I didn’t want to make a contract in the first place after all~~. Last time, I had no choice but to work to defeat Hadar. I hate going through troublesome matters------Hadar is going to resurrect sooner or later so, things might change for me if it’s going to do something to the world again~~”
 
“I didn’t want to make a contract in the first place after all~~. Last time, I had no choice but to work to defeat Hadar. I hate going through troublesome matters------Hadar is going to resurrect sooner or later so, things might change for me if it’s going to do something to the world again~~”
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Is it about to resurface again?
 
Is it about to resurface again?
   
The violent battles from 1 year ago reappeared in Tooi’s mind. Disgusting sweat flowed out from his back. The feeling of stabbing into the demon king’s chest vividly reappeared in his hands.
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The violent battles from 1 year ago reappeared in Tooi’s mind. Disgusting sweat flowed out form his back. The feeling of stabbing into the demon king’s chest vividly reappeared in his hands.
   
 
Alua’s face was looking pale. Laila somehow managed to suppress her bewilderment but even so the uneasiness and shock which she could not hide were oozing out form her expression.
 
Alua’s face was looking pale. Laila somehow managed to suppress her bewilderment but even so the uneasiness and shock which she could not hide were oozing out form her expression.
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When no one could make any replies, La Shii continued talking at her own pace.
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When no one could make nay replies, La Shii continued talking in her own pace.
   
“Well~~, I might have said [sooner or later] but it’s a [sooner or later] based on my standards~~. It might be around 100 years later or so, so it’s something you humans should not be worrying about I guess? By the way Too-kun.”
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“Well~~, I might have said [sooner or later] but, it’s a [sooner or later] based on my standards~~. It might be around 100 years later or so, so it’s something you humans should not be worrying about I guess? By the way Too-kun.”
   
 
The eyes of the deity of [Time & Space] were looking at Tooi.
 
The eyes of the deity of [Time & Space] were looking at Tooi.
   
“Within the 21 Deities of the world, you made contracts with 12 of them. Although it’s just merely for form’s sake, that number crosses over half. Do you understand what that means, Too-kun?”
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“Within the 21 Deities of the world, you made contracts with 12 of them. Although it’s just merely for form’s sake, that number crosses over half. Do you understand, what that means, Too-kun?”
   
 
“…………………..”
 
“…………………..”
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Because of that.
 
Because of that.
   
If someone possesses more than 51 percentage of the stock, the company becomes that person’s possession in reality. There are many corporations and unions in various parts of the modern world using this system.
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If someone possesses more than 51 percentage of the stock, the company becomes that person’s possession in reality. There are many corporate and unions in various parts of the modern world using this system.
   
 
Controlling more than half------has the same meaning as controlling everything.
 
Controlling more than half------has the same meaning as controlling everything.
   
Then, since Tooi had more than half of the deities under his command-----
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Then, Since Tooi had more than half of the deities under his command-----
   
 
“------'''''You understand this''''', Too-kun?”
 
“------'''''You understand this''''', Too-kun?”
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“Un~~. Having Ryu-tan as the opponent is just too burdening to the currently powerless Too-kun so………how should I say this, it’s not fair at all~~. Also~~, Laila-chi has been taking care of me for 10 years after all~~”
 
“Un~~. Having Ryu-tan as the opponent is just too burdening to the currently powerless Too-kun so………how should I say this, it’s not fair at all~~. Also~~, Laila-chi has been taking care of me for 10 years after all~~”
   
The words that came out from the personification of laziness- La Shii, had a whimsical proposal which he did not wish for.
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The words that came out from the personification of laziness- La Shii, was a whimsical proposal which he did not wish for.
   
 
(This was all Laila’s plan huh………..)
 
(This was all Laila’s plan huh………..)
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Tooi crouched down. He then finally was at the same eye height as the short La Shii.
 
Tooi crouched down. He then finally was at the same eye height as the short La Shii.
   
While both of their gazes tangled with each other at equal height, Tooi told her this.
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While both of their gazes are tangled to each other at equal height, Tooi told her this.
   
 
“I’m glad I met you today, Shii. I have been getting shocked at every fact, ever since I got to this world so I've forgotten this……….but now, I remember it clearly. The reason why I came to this world.”
 
“I’m glad I met you today, Shii. I have been getting shocked at every fact, ever since I got to this world so I've forgotten this……….but now, I remember it clearly. The reason why I came to this world.”
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Laila said that sarcastically.
 
Laila said that sarcastically.
   
The 3 of them then went back to the path but-----
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3 of them then went back to the path but-----
   
 
The space in front of them suddenly distorted.
 
The space in front of them suddenly distorted.
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“Uh!?”
 
“Uh!?”
   
The impossible phenomenon gave the 3 of them a fright, but they entered alert mode in an instant. The distortion in space slowly became bigger and slowly turned into a hole.
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The impossible phenomenon gave the 3 of them a fright but, they entered alert mode in an instant. The distortion in space slowly became bigger and slowly turned into a hole.
   
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Pyokon* a young girl jumped out----from a light sucking black hole.
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Pyokon* a young girl jumped out----from a light sucking black hole.
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She instantly got tension up and started talking with an energetic pace.
 
She instantly got tension up and started talking with an energetic pace.
   
“The ultimate sword forged by the Deity of [Weapon Empress]---Zesca Aldebaran using refined Etherium which was mined up by the deity of [Earth]---Gushana Rigel. Even the Etherium which rejects the hands of humans can be forged into the strongest weapon as long it’s the deity performing it. The created sword that was then completed by mixing the blood of Tooi Cross and the souls of every member of the {{Furigana|12 Goddesses|Nebulosa}}, is this black short sword. There is no other sword better than this to act as a medium for the [Deus Alma]…………10 years ago, it is said that this is the sword that put the final blow in the demon king Hadar……….but, wasn’t Zodiac lost together with the death of the demon king……!?”
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“The ultimate sword forged by the Deity of [Weapon Empress]---Zesca Aldebaran using refined Etherium which were mined up by the deity of [Earth]---Gushana Rigel. Even the Etherium which rejects the hands of humans can be forged into the strongest weapon as long it’s the deity performing it. The created sword that was then completed by mixing the blood of Tooi Cross and the souls of every members of the {{Furigana|12 Goddesses|Nebulosa}}, is this black short sword. There is no other sword better than this to act as a medium for the [Deus Alma]…………10 years ago, it is said that this is the sword that put the final blow in the demon king Hadar……….but, wasn’t Zodiac lost together with the death of the demon king……!?”
   
 
“……yup. Thanks for the explanation, Alua-chan.”
 
“……yup. Thanks for the explanation, Alua-chan.”
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Apparently, she holds an unbeatable admiration towards Tooi Cross.
 
Apparently, she holds an unbeatable admiration towards Tooi Cross.
   
Of course, rather than calling it feelings towards a single human, it's more like the feeling of admiration towards a historical great person or fictitious person.
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Of course, rather than calling it feelings towards a single human, it's more towards the feeling of admiration towards a historical great person or fictitious person.
   
 
If this keeps up, it feels as if she’s going to turn into an explanation character but----well, let’s leave that aside.
 
If this keeps up, it feels as if she’s going to turn into an explanation character but----well, let’s leave that aside.
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Deity sword Zodiac.
 
Deity sword Zodiac.
   
A weapon made from Etherium, and only one exists in the world.
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A weapon made from Etherium and only one exists in the world.
   
The sword that he had not grabbed for 1 year was so comfortable in his hands to the point of horror. It felt as if the sword and his hand were one. It’s true that this sword was made just for Tooi.
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The sword that he has not grabbed for 1 year was so comfortable in his hands to the point of horror. It felt as if the sword and his hand was one. It’s true that this sword was made just for Tooi.
   
 
“……….hey, Laila. Incidentally, how much is it if I sell this?”
 
“……….hey, Laila. Incidentally, how much is it if I sell this?”
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“Come back once you become strong enough to beat me. Then let’s have a fight~~”
 
“Come back once you become strong enough to beat me. Then let’s have a fight~~”
   
There was an innocent light in her half opened sleepy eyes. There were no bad intentions or schemes, the innocent glow similar to a newly born baby, was inside her eyes.
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There’s an innocent light in her half opened sleepy eyes. There were no bad intentions or schemes, the innocent glow similar to a newly born baby, was inside her eyes.
   
 
“Enough to defeat you huh…….that’s going to be tough even after I gather more than half of the {{Furigana|12 Goddesses|Nebulosa}}”
 
“Enough to defeat you huh…….that’s going to be tough even after I gather more than half of the {{Furigana|12 Goddesses|Nebulosa}}”
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“U~`nn. I guess I’ll make you lick my asshole when that happens~~”
 
“U~`nn. I guess I’ll make you lick my asshole when that happens~~”
   
Aren’t both sides a prize? There’s only gain whether I win or lose------he thought that but he didn’t say it out as expected.
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Aren’t both sides a prize? There’s only gain whether I win or lose------he thought that but, he didn’t say it out as expected.
   
 
“Ahaha~~, how about it, Too-kun. It’s insulting to lick the asshole of a little girl like me right~~? You don’t want to right~~?”
 
“Ahaha~~, how about it, Too-kun. It’s insulting to lick the asshole of a little girl like me right~~? You don’t want to right~~?”
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His beloved deity sword Zodiac.
 
His beloved deity sword Zodiac.
   
And-----a promise with a little girl to have their assholes licked.
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And-----a promises with a little girl to have their asshole licked.
   
   

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