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Elsie reached her hands out to block the sun and looked a little troubled as the heat that was reflected off the tarmac road would make anyone standing around sweat crazily.
 
Elsie reached her hands out to block the sun and looked a little troubled as the heat that was reflected off the tarmac road would make anyone standing around sweat crazily.
   
Sweat flowed past Elsie’s white face.
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The sweat flowed past Elsie’s white face.
   
 
Speaking of which…
 
Speaking of which…
   
Elsie started to think. She had never gotten off at this stop. This place gave a rather empty feeling as it doesn’t seem as if anyone else is around.
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Elsie started to think. She had never gotten off from this stop. This place gave a rather empty feeling as there didn’t seem to be anyone else around.
   
The sunlight was really vicious and the scenery was clearly divided into light and shadow.
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The sunlight was really vicious and all of the scenery was clearly divided into light and shadow.
   
 
“…A lot of shops aren’t open.”
 
“…A lot of shops aren’t open.”
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Elsie ran and chased up to Keima, and both of them walked together side by side. After moving about 200m,
 
Elsie ran and chased up to Keima, and both of them walked together side by side. After moving about 200m,
   
“Eh? Kami nii-sama, shouldn’t we be going this way,”
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“Eh? Kami nii-sama, shouldn’t we be going this way>:
   
Keima suddenly went into a branched road, and Elsie raised her doubts in surprise. They should be walking another 100 meters before reaching the bus stop.
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Keima suddenly went into a branched road, and Elsie raised her doubt in surprise. They should be walking for another 100 meters before the reach the bus stop.
   
 
However, Keima,
 
However, Keima,
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Even he himself tilted his head in a puzzled manner,
 
Even he himself tilted his head in a puzzled manner,
   
“But it feels like I have to walk here.”
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“But it feels that I have to walk here.”
   
 
As he said that, he continued to walk forward quickly.
 
As he said that, he continued to walk forward quickly.
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“Wa, wait for me, kami nii-sama!”
 
“Wa, wait for me, kami nii-sama!”
   
Keima turned 2, 3 times from the road to the lane, and he was walking faster and faster.
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Keima turned 2, 3 times from the road to the lane, and his was walking faster and faster.
   
 
He didn’t run.
 
He didn’t run.
   
Even so, it seemed like he was pulled by something as he quickly moved his feet. His speed itself was really fast.
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Even so, it seemed that he was pulled by something as he quickly moved his feet. His speed itself was really fast.
   
As the lower half of his body was too fast, the upper body that was holding the bag tilted backwards as it couldn’t keep up.
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As the lower half of his body was too fast, the upper body that was holding the bag was tilting backwards as it couldn’t keep up.
   
 
“Hau? Oh?”
 
“Hau? Oh?”
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“Ka, kami nii-sama?”
 
“Ka, kami nii-sama?”
   
Elsie started to panic and flailed her arms around as she chased Keima with all she had. Keima himself however continued to move down the lane.
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Elsie started to panic and flailed her arms around as she chased Keima with all she had. Keima himself however continued to move down this lane.
   
 
And he walked deeper and deeper in.
 
And he walked deeper and deeper in.
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“That shop.”
 
“That shop.”
   
He reached out his slender white fingers.
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He reached out the slender white fingers.
   
 
“…Oh.”
 
“…Oh.”
   
Elsie looked where Keima pointed to and responded.
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Elsie looked at where Keima pointed to and responded.
   
 
“Don’t you feel that the shop there is glowing? Golden, no, pink?”
 
“Don’t you feel that the shop there is glowing? Golden, no, pink?”
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(What’s with kami nii-sama?)
 
(What’s with kami nii-sama?)
   
She thought. The ’10,000 Old Bookstore’ written on the signboard of that shop in the alley wasn’t even glowing, but was shrouded in an ominous atmosphere. It seemed that the house itself was a little shaky. It had an outer wall with ivy climbing all over it and a tightly closed glass door, and looked really dark.
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She thought. The ’10,000 Old Bookstore’ that was written on the signboard of that shop in the alley wasn’t even glowing, but shrouded in an ominous atmosphere. It seemed that the house itself was a little shaky. It had an outer wall with ivy climbing all over it and a tightly closed glass door, and looked really dark.
   
 
Even if this shop’s door was opened, Elsie didn’t want to enter at all.
 
Even if this shop’s door was opened, Elsie didn’t want to enter at all.
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“…”
 
“…”
   
Then, he started to move forward with light steps. This time, it didn’t feel as if he was dragged around by something, but something out of his own will.
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Then, he started to move forward with light steps. This time, it didn’t feel like he was dragged around by something, but something out of his own will.
   
 
“…Kami nii-sama?”
 
“…Kami nii-sama?”
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(Ka, kami nii-sama.)
 
(Ka, kami nii-sama.)
   
Elsie's eyes were teary as she looked at Keima as if she wanted help.
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Elsie's eyes were teary as she looked at Keima like she wanted help.
   
However, Keima was completely hypnotized and it seemed like he didn't want to be bothered by her. Ever since just now, he was flipping around in the cramped shop and energetically walking around.
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However, Keima was completely hypnotized as it seemed that he didn't want to be bothered by her. Ever since just now, he was flipping around in the cramped shop and energetically walking around.
   
 
He twitched his nose, and for a while, it seemed that he was looking at a certain bookshelf, only to suddenly kneel on the ground and then climb up to the area near the roof.
 
He twitched his nose, and for a while, it seemed that he was looking at a certain bookshelf, only to suddenly kneel on the ground and then climb up to the area near the roof.
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After a while, he came out from the bookshelf, and then disappeared after a while.
 
After a while, he came out from the bookshelf, and then disappeared after a while.
   
To Elsie, it seemed like Keima's ears became dog ears and his backside had a tail that grew out.
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To Elsie, it seemed that Keima's ears became dog ears and his backside had a tail that grew out.
   
 
He looked completely excited as his eyes were dazzling.
 
He looked completely excited as his eyes were dazzling.
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“Fufu, this smell's not hidden at all! It's right nearby.”
 
“Fufu, this smell's not hidden at all! It's right nearby.”
   
His answer was too abnormal as he ran straight to a corner. Even in this mysterious shop that had tattered metal and books, that corner looked really unnatural. Elsie couldn't help but tug at Keima's collar to try and stop him.
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His answer was too abnormal as he ran straight to cover. Even in this mysterious shop that had tattered metal and books, that corner looked really unnatural. Elsie couldn't help but tug at Keima's collar to try and stop him.
   
 
“Ka, kami nii-sama!”
 
“Ka, kami nii-sama!”
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'Favor of the Western Lantern'.
 
'Favor of the Western Lantern'.
   
Such a label was on it, and the packaging was rather weird as there was only the side of a white-haired girl's face on it. This should be a bishoujo game itself, but to be honest, it didn't look really attractive. However, for some reason, Keima showed a look like a child finding treasure as he delightfully patted away the dust on it before walking to the cashier.
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Such a label was on it, and the packaging was rather weird as there was only the side of a white-haired girl's face on it. This should be a bishoujo game itself, but to be honest, it didn't look really attractive. However, for some reason, Keima showed a look like a child getting some treasure as he delighted patted away the dust on it before walking to the cashier.
   
 
“How much?”
 
“How much?”
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Keima ignored Elsie and said directly,
 
Keima ignored Elsie and said directly,
   
“Time and space.”
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“Time and spce.”
   
 
“…Time?”
 
“…Time?”

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