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“…Time?”
 
“…Time?”
   
Elsie was curious and couldn’t help but ask. Keima nodded hard.
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Elsie was curious and couldn’t help but ask. Keima nod his head hard.
   
 
“That’s right. In other words, the ‘God’s window’ that only a living body has.
 
“That’s right. In other words, the ‘God’s window’ that only a living body has.
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It seemed that she wasn’t willing to give up. However, Keima spoke first,
 
It seemed that she wasn’t willing to give up. However, Keima spoke first,
   
“I’m not really trying to force things. It’s regrettable, but amongst the games that I have never collected, most of the game data values are more valuable than the work itself. For example, a little modification to the same game, or a game that wasn’t really much, or a game that couldn’t proceed on because of a really serious bug.”
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“I’m not really trying to force things. It’s regrettable, but amongst the games that I had never collected, most of the game data value were more valuable than the work itself. Like for example, a little modification to the same game, or a game that wasn’t really much, or a game that couldn’t proceed on because of a really serious bug.”
   
 
“Eh, as for that.”
 
“Eh, as for that.”
   
“But amongst the works I couldn’t collect, there were really a few outstanding works.”
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“But amongst them works I couldn’t collect, there were really a few outstanding works.”
   
 
“Well.”
 
“Well.”
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Keima pressed against his chest and revealed a pained expression.
 
Keima pressed against his chest and revealed a pained expression.
   
He looked just like an astronaut who dreamt of being able to land on Mars, which no one else had done before.
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He looked just like an astronaut who dreamed of being able to land on Mars, which no one else had done before.
   
 
The endless romance and thirst of knowledge were clearly shown on his face.
 
The endless romance and thirst of knowledge were clearly shown on his face.
   
He’s an adventurer, an explorer, a researcher, and one who seeks the truth.
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He’s an adventurer, an explorer, a researcher, and one who seek the truth.
   
 
In this peaceful era, not everyone could show such an expression. In a certain manner, the side of his face looked extreme~ly manly.
 
In this peaceful era, not everyone could show such an expression. In a certain manner, the side of his face looked extreme~ly manly.
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However, he was only interested in bishoujo games.
 
However, he was only interested in bishoujo games.
   
“I’ve always heard of this rumor about a few rare bishoujo games that were cursed within the world.”
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“I always heard of this rumor about a few rare bishoujo games that were cursed within the world.”
   
 
Keima suddenly diverted the topic.
 
Keima suddenly diverted the topic.
   
“The game itself, through the network, in a specialized publication.
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“The game itself, through the network, in a specialized publishcation.
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
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Keima continued,
 
Keima continued,
   
“How did it end up like this? I don’t really understand what happened, but this was already a game that was released by a small company and had limited numbers. Soon after the game was released, there was a huge controversy as the games were taken back, and most of the products were taken off the shelves.”
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“How did it end up like this? I don’t really understand what happened, but this was already a game that was released by a small company and had limited numbers. Soon after the game was released, there was a huge controversy as the games were taken back, and most of the products who taken off the shelves.”
   
 
He frowned slightly,
 
He frowned slightly,
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“Favor of the Western Lantern.”
 
“Favor of the Western Lantern.”
   
He quickly raised the software in his hands right in front of himself.
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He quick raised the software in his hands right in front of himself.
   
 
“This is the original version.”
 
“This is the original version.”
   
On seeing this mysterious packaging, Elsie nearly screamed. Keima shook Elsie’s hand away and immediately entered his room.
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On seeing this mysterious packaging, Elsie nearly screamed. Keima shook Elsie’s hand away and immediately entered his own room.
   
 
He closed the door slightly and poked his head out.
 
He closed the door slightly and poked his head out.
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It was a strand she never saw before.
 
It was a strand she never saw before.
   
And one that shouldn’t be here in the house, white hair that was of unnatural length.
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And one that shouldn’t be here in the house, white hair that’s of unnatural length.
   
   
 
At the same time, while Keima was locked inside his own room and when Elsie picked up the white hair, in a certain shrine that’s far away from the Majima City, a miko suddenly widened her eyes.
 
At the same time, while Keima was locked inside his own room and when Elsie picked up the white hair, in a certain shrine that’s far away from the Majima City, a miko suddenly widened her eyes.
   
As she sat in a seiza position on the wooden-floored room, the knees of both her thighs were slightly separated, and her hands were placed on the knees. That straightened back and the seiza position showed serenity and discipline.
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As she sat in a seize position on the wooden-floored room, the knees of both her thighs were slightly separated, and her hands were placed on the knees. That straightened back and the seize position showed serenity and discipline.
   
 
She was about 25 years old.
 
She was about 25 years old.
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“Un. Looks like someone got that again.”
 
“Un. Looks like someone got that again.”
   
The miko narrowed her eyes and looked over, and a shriveled old granny was sitting there. It seemed that she was already over 100 years. As her clothing was extremely dull looking and she was extremely small, she could hide her presence such that she wouldn’t be discovered. The old granny slowly opened her closed eyes and looked over at the miko.
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The miko narrowed her eyes and looked over, and a shriveled old granny was sitting there. It seemed that she was already over 100 years. As her clothing were extremely dull looking and that she was extremely small, she could hide her presence such that she wouldn’t be discovered. The old granny slowly opened her closed eyes and looked over at the miko.
   
 
“What do you think?”
 
“What do you think?”
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“Besides, that thing was always hiding in these bad places.”
 
“Besides, that thing was always hiding in these bad places.”
   
“…That thing returned to this world. Which means someone appreciated that thing.”
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“…That thing returned back to this world. Which means that someone appreciated that thing.”
   
 
“Granny?”
 
“Granny?”
   
The miko stared sharply at the old granny, who in turn nodded again.
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The miko stared sharply at the old granny sharply, who in turn nodded her head again.
   
 
“Un, that person’s life is in danger.”
 
“Un, that person’s life is in danger.”
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“…Shino, where are you going?”
 
“…Shino, where are you going?”
   
The miko’s reply was simple, looking as if she didn’t want the old granny to worry for her.
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The miko’s reply was simply, looking like she didn’t want the old granny to worry for her.
   
“Where else? I’m going to exterminate that thing!”
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“What else? I’m going to exterminate that thing!”
   
 
The old granny sighed.
 
The old granny sighed.
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“Don’t say it! I’ll listen to your muttering later. I’ll head out first!”
 
“Don’t say it! I’ll listen to your muttering later. I’ll head out first!”
   
The miko raised her sleeves slightly and quickly walked out to the exit.
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The miko raised her sleeves slightly and quickly walked out to the exit of the room.
   
 
“Ah.”
 
“Ah.”
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“KYAAAHHHH!!!”
 
“KYAAAHHHH!!!”
   
She let out an ear-piercing scream. The sight of the old granny vanished from behind her. It seemed that she forgot that there were steps outside.
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She let out a ear-piercing scream. The sight of the old granny vanished from behind her. It seemed that she forgot that there were steps outside.
   
 
Soon after, the sound of something landing on the ground could be heard.
 
Soon after, the sound of something landing on the ground could be heard.
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Chihiro’s appearance, personality and interests, all her parameters (according to Keima) were all normal. She just wasn’t outstanding. However, as she had the personality of being a big sister and had the drive to bring people around for good or bad, she often ended up being the leader.
 
Chihiro’s appearance, personality and interests, all her parameters (according to Keima) were all normal. She just wasn’t outstanding. However, as she had the personality of being a big sister and had the drive to bring people around for good or bad, she often ended up being the leader.
   
She was the one who got Elsie to join in at the beginning.
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She was the once who got Elsie to join in at the beginning.
   
 
If it were the normal Elsie, once she heard Chihiro say that,
 
If it were the normal Elsie, once she heard Chihiro say that,
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“Okay, I would like to!”
 
“Okay, I would like to!”
   
She would happily raise her head. But today,
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She would be happily raising her heads. But today,
   
 
“Ah, okay…”
 
“Ah, okay…”
   
Though she took the bento and stood up, she looked somewhat depressed as she looked at Keima’s seat that was somewhat far away.
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Though she took the bento and stood up, she looked somewhat depressed as she looked at Keima’s seat that was somewhat away.
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
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Terada Miyako was like Chihiro, someone who looked ordinary. However, she, unlike Chihiro, wasn’t the type to lead others. She was someone who was steady and hardworking, and amongst friends, she’s one who would take care of others.
 
Terada Miyako was like Chihiro, someone who looked ordinary. However, she, unlike Chihiro, wasn’t the type to lead others. She was someone who was steady and hardworking, and amongst friends, she’s one who would take care of others.
   
That’s why she noticed that Elsie was a little weird.
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That’s why she would notice that Elsie was a little weird.
   
 
Miyako was the keyboardist.
 
Miyako was the keyboardist.
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Elsie and Miyako nodded their heads after being prompted.
 
Elsie and Miyako nodded their heads after being prompted.
   
They’re all girls in the growing stage, and even though they would say ‘I’ve grown a little fat’ or ‘sigh, looks like I have to start dieting tomorrow’, they would finish their bread or bento.
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They’re all girls in the growing stage, and even though they would say ‘I’ve grown a little fat’ or ‘sigh, looks like I have to start dieting tomorrow’, but they would finish their bread or bento.
   
 
Most notably, Ayumi, who’s from the track and field team, would eat a lot more than an ordinary person because of the calories she would use up.
 
Most notably, Ayumi, who’s from the track and field team, would eat a lot more than an ordinary person because of the calories she would use up.
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“In the end, at that time, the sempais,”
 
“In the end, at that time, the sempais,”
   
Ayumi was chatting away, and when she paused, she stuffed large mouthfuls of bread into her mouth. Her cute appearance was only second to Elsie in this gang of friends. Her hairstyle had a pure sense that was befitting of a girl from an athletic club as her figure was rather slender too.
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Ayumi was chatting away, and while she paused, she stuffed large mouthfuls of bread into her mouth. Her cute appearance was only second to Elsie in this gang of friends. Her hairstyle had a pure sense that was befitting of a girl from an athletics’ club as her figure was rather slender too.
   
 
Because of this, she was rather popular in class too.
 
Because of this, she was rather popular in class too.
   
However, she herself didn’t seem to be a girl who would mind.
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However, she herself didn’t seem to be a girl who would mind about this.
   
On a side note, she was a guitarist, like Chihiro, in the band. Whether it’s the band or between friends, she was always the one being hot-blooded.
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On a side note, she was a guitarist like Chihiro in the band. Whether it’s the band or between friends, she was always the one being hot-blooded.
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
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“What’s wrong, Elly?”
 
“What’s wrong, Elly?”
   
Since just now, Elsie had been putting her hand on her chin and her elbow on the table as she looked at Keima worriedly. It seems that she had not listened to Ayumi’s random chat.
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Ever since just now, Elsie had been putting her hand on her chin and her elbow on the table as she looked at Keima worriedly. It seemed that she had not listened to Ayumi’s random chat.
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
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Even when Chihiro called her, she didn’t respond.
 
Even when Chihiro called her, she didn’t respond.
   
It seemed she didn’t notice Chihiro calling her too. Chihiro, Ayumi and Miyako silently exchanged glances with each other and nodded their heads.
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It seemed that she didn’t notice Chihiro calling her too. Chihiro, Ayumi and Miyako silently exchanged glances with each other and nodded their heads.
   
 
“““ELSIE!!!”””
 
“““ELSIE!!!”””
   
The trio shouted her name. Elsie was really shocked as she straightened her back and frantically turned around to look at them.
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The trio shouted out her name. Elsie was really shocked as she straightened her back and frantically turned around to look at them.
   
 
“Ye, yes? Wha, what’s the matter? What happened?”
 
“Ye, yes? Wha, what’s the matter? What happened?”
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“What’s wrong? You don’t seem to be paying attention? Katsuragi isn’t so handsome that you are engrossed in him, right?”
 
“What’s wrong? You don’t seem to be paying attention? Katsuragi isn’t so handsome that you are engrossed in him, right?”
   
Miyako seemed a little worried.
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Miyako seemed to be a little worried.
   
 
Elsie was giving a somewhat shy expression as she reached her hand out to scratch her hand.
 
Elsie was giving a somewhat shy expression as she reached her hand out to scratch her hand.
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But Ayumi and Chihiro trembled slightly, though it wasn’t really obvious.
 
But Ayumi and Chihiro trembled slightly, though it wasn’t really obvious.
   
Both of them blushed slightly, but probably no one noticed it, even them.
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Both of them blushed slightly, but probably no one noticed it, even it.
   
 
Elsie nodded her head, and seemed like she was ready.
 
Elsie nodded her head, and seemed like she was ready.
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“Wha, what are you saying~ isn’t that too sudden?”
 
“Wha, what are you saying~ isn’t that too sudden?”
   
“Oi oi, Elly. Don’t tell any jokes while we’re eating, okay?”
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“Oi oi, Elly. Don’t say any jokes while we’re eating, okay?”
   
The trio started laughing. Elsie didn’t know what they were laughing about as she widened her eyes. At this moment, they suddenly spoke in unison,
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The trio started laughing. Elsie didn’t knew what they were laughing about as she widened her eyes. At this moment, they suddenly spoke in unison,
   
   
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From the students to the teachers, everyone felt that Katsuragi Keima was a ‘weirdo’. But when it came to his mother, she was a rather normal person.
 
From the students to the teachers, everyone felt that Katsuragi Keima was a ‘weirdo’. But when it came to his mother, she was a rather normal person.
   
As a female, she single-handedly settled all the matters in the café ‘Grandpa’, and even took the load of the Katsuragi family over Keima’s father who hardly returns home.
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As a female, she single-handedly settled all the matters in the café ‘Grandpa’, and even took the load of the Katsuragi family over Keima’s father who hardly return home.
   
As she was once a reckless person, anyone who made her angry would have a horrible outcome. However, she was normally a good mother who would take care of people, very tolerant and very reasonable. She raised her child, Keima, who had a really weird personality (actually, she was somewhat worried deep inside), and even took in Elsie, her husband’s illegitimate daughter (though she misunderstood). From her gracious attitude, one could tell that she wasn’t someone ordinary.
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As she was once the reckless person, anyone who made her angry would have a horrible outcome. However, she was normally a good mother who would take care of people, very tolerant and very reasonable. She raised her child, Keima, who had a really weird personality (actually, she was somewhat worried deep inside), and even took in Elsie, her husband’s illegitimate daughter (though she misunderstood). From her gracious attitude, one could tell that she wasn’t someone ordinary.
   
From the way she courteously greeted the customers at the café counter, it may be hard to imagine that she was a mother with lots of nerves.
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From the way she was courteously greeting the customers at the café counter, it may be hard to imagine that she was a mother with lots of nerves.
   
 
“Hm~hm~☆”
 
“Hm~hm~☆”
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She was humming away, alone in the kitchen after work ended.
 
She was humming away, alone in the kitchen after work ended.
   
That skill of making delicious meals balanced in nutrition was something Elsie, a fellow female, really admired.
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That skill of making delicious meals that were balanced in nutrition was something Elsie, a fellow female really admired.
   
 
Elsie was beside her, helping to prepare dinner by peeling snow peas. Suddenly, she asked curiously,
 
Elsie was beside her, helping to prepare dinner by peeling snow peas. Suddenly, she asked curiously,
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She swallowed her saliva.
 
She swallowed her saliva.
   
“Hasn’t kami nii-sama been acting weird recently?”
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“Hadn’t kami nii-sama been acting weird recently?”
   
 
For a moment, Mari turned around and looked at Elsie straight on, even forgetting to put down the stirring chopsticks in her hands.
 
For a moment, Mari turned around and looked at Elsie straight on, even forgetting to put down the stirring chopsticks in her hands.
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“…”
 
“…”
   
Elsie didn’t know how to answer as she rolled her eyeballs side to side.
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Elsie didn’t know what to answer as she rolled her eyeballs side to side.
   
 
“Speaking of which.”
 
“Speaking of which.”
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Elsie looked completely teary, and Mari continued,
 
Elsie looked completely teary, and Mari continued,
   
“The house looks dark too. Are the lights spoilt?”
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“The house looks dark too. Is the lights spoilt?”
   
 
She looked up at the ceiling.”
 
She looked up at the ceiling.”
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Elsie suddenly turned around curiously. At this moment, Keima took off the visor and got up. Most likely, he was going to the toilet. He slowly moved his feet and was about to leave the living room.
 
Elsie suddenly turned around curiously. At this moment, Keima took off the visor and got up. Most likely, he was going to the toilet. He slowly moved his feet and was about to leave the living room.
   
“The toilet is so humid, and the house was shaking for a while at midnight. It felt like someone was moving around. Should we find some people who specialize in this to check this out?”
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“The humidity in the toilet so much, and the house was shaking for a while at midnight. It felt like someone was moving around. Should we find some people who specialize in this to check this out?”
   
 
Just when Mari used her fingers to stroke her chin as she muttered,
 
Just when Mari used her fingers to stroke her chin as she muttered,
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Was actually because he was no different from usual.
 
Was actually because he was no different from usual.
   
Keima got a game he never thought that he would be able to buy, and it was a game that he’d always dreamt of. However, he didn’t become engrossed in the game just to conquer it, but went to school as usual (though he was playing), he would eat his meals normally at home (though he was playing), and was sleeping like usual (most likely, he locked himself inside the room and continued to play his game.)
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Keima got a game he never thought that he would be able to buy, and it was a game that he always dreamt of. However, he didn’t become engrossed in the game just to conquer it, but went to school as usual (though he was playing), he would eat his meals normally at home (though he was playing), and was sleeping like usual (most likely, he locked himself inside the room and continued to play his game.)
   
 
Even so,
 
Even so,
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That game called ‘Favor of the Western Lantern’.
 
That game called ‘Favor of the Western Lantern’.
   
Elsie understood well that once Keima got serious, he could break through that game at a speed that far exceeds human ability. However, even after buying the game and spending some time, it didn’t look like he managed to conquer the ‘Favor of the Western Lantern’. He did explain everything about the game to Elsie. If he conquered it, he would at least describe his feelings.
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Elsie understood well that once Keima got serious, he could break through that game at a speed that far exceed human ability. However, even after buying the game and spending some time, it didn’t look like he managed to conquer the ‘Favor of the Western Lantern’. He did explain everything about the game to Elsie. If he conquered it, he would at least describe his feelings.
   
 
Speaking of which,
 
Speaking of which,
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What’s going on?
 
What’s going on?
   
A pile of questions spun inside her head as she frantically looked for a way out barefooted. Just as she was about to reach the door leading out of the bathroom,
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A pile of questions spun inside her head as she frantically looked for a way out barefooted. Just when she was about to reach the door leading outside the bathroom.
   
 
“!”
 
“!”
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If it was Mari.
 
If it was Mari.
   
Why would they crouch down over here silently and not make a sound?
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Why would they be crouched down over here silently and not making a sound?
   
 
In pitch darkness.
 
In pitch darkness.
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And let out a strange sound.
 
And let out a strange sound.
   
The door was being forced open as the white hands swarmed and struggled in. The hands and feet were all messily reaching in.
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The door was being forced opened as the white hands swarmed and struggled in. The hands and feet were all messily reaching in.
   
 
“Chichichichichi!”
 
“Chichichichichi!”
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Mari seemed to be really bothered.
 
Mari seemed to be really bothered.
   
“It is like Keima said. It was really a coincidence that I came out from the toilet. You know that the toilet in this house is right beside the bathroom, so I immediately opened the bathroom door once I heard you scream.”
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“It was like what Keima said. It was really a coincidence that I came out from the toilet. You know that the toilet in this house is right beside the bathroom, so I immediately opened the bathroom door once I heard you scream.”
   
 
At this moment, Elsie finally understood what they were trying to say.
 
At this moment, Elsie finally understood what they were trying to say.
   
Mari added.
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Mari added on.
   
 
“Of course, I knew the moment I opened the door. There wasn’t anything strange inside the changing room, and the lights in the bathroom were all on.”
 
“Of course, I knew the moment I opened the door. There wasn’t anything strange inside the changing room, and the lights in the bathroom were all on.”
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However,
 
However,
   
She still felt that it happened before…
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She still felt that it did happen before…
   
Elsie did not really understand things at all, and used her fist to thump against her chin as she sank into deep thought.
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Elsie was really not understanding things at all, and used her fist to thump against her chin as she sank into deep thought.
   
 
“Hau~”
 
“Hau~”
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Then, Mari said,
 
Then, Mari said,
   
“Here, Ell-chan, hurry up and change and come to the kitchen. You look tired. Let me prepare some ginger ale to wake you up.”
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“Here, Ell-chan, hurry up and change up and come to the kitchen. You look tired. Let me prepare some ginger ale to wake you up.”
   
 
She smiled and followed Keima. Thud, the door was slammed shut.
 
She smiled and followed Keima. Thud, the door was slammed shut.
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In such a place…
 
In such a place…
   
Is there such a strand of hair?
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Is there such a strand of hair.
   
 
Elsie’s thoughts were linked together. That mysterious figure, the game software Keima bought back, and the strand of white hair that dropped right in front of his room.
 
Elsie’s thoughts were linked together. That mysterious figure, the game software Keima bought back, and the strand of white hair that dropped right in front of his room.

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