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She thought that he was some decoration.
 
She thought that he was some decoration.
   
It was only when he started smiling that Elsie realized that he was a living person. His teeth were almost completely gone, and there were only 2-3 of them left. He had a cap on his head as he was sitting in a seiza position beside the cashier.
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It was only when he started smiling that Elsie realized that he was a living person. His teeth were almost completely gone, and there were only 2,3 of them left. He had a cap on his head as he was sitting in a seiza position beside the cashier.
   
 
His eyeballs were yellow as he gave a mysterious smile.
 
His eyeballs were yellow as he gave a mysterious smile.
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The moment she stepped into the shop, she had a mysterious chill.
 
The moment she stepped into the shop, she had a mysterious chill.
   
Right now, it was right in the middle of the hot summer.
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Right now, it's was right in the middle of the hot summer.
   
 
It was definitely sunny outside,
 
It was definitely sunny outside,
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Keima tilted his head. The boss gave a thumbs up, and Keima frowned.
 
Keima tilted his head. The boss gave a thumbs up, and Keima frowned.
   
“1? 10,000 yen?”
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“1? 10, 000 yen?”
   
 
“...”
 
“...”
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Elsie used her fist to press against her face as she remembered Keima’s room that was used as a storeroom of bishoujo games. The room was neatly stacked with an amazing amount of games. To Elsie, even if someone told her that all the games in the world were over there, she wouldn’t doubt it at all.
 
Elsie used her fist to press against her face as she remembered Keima’s room that was used as a storeroom of bishoujo games. The room was neatly stacked with an amazing amount of games. To Elsie, even if someone told her that all the games in the world were over there, she wouldn’t doubt it at all.
   
Also, there weren’t just games inside. There were even ‘Initial Limited Edition’ and ‘Director’s Cut’ versions of the games, and Elsie couldn’t even tell the differences between them as they were all packed within Keima’s collection.
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Also, there weren’t just games inside. There were even ‘Initial limited Edition’ and ‘Director’s Cut’ version of the games, and Elsie couldn’t even tell the differences between them as they were all packed within Keima’s collection.
   
 
“…I hope so.”
 
“…I hope so.”
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Elsie had a bad feeling as she silently tugged at Keima’s sleeve. Keima’s expression seemed to be full of memories as it also looked like he was looking forward.
 
Elsie had a bad feeling as she silently tugged at Keima’s sleeve. Keima’s expression seemed to be full of memories as it also looked like he was looking forward.
   
“That game itself had an outstanding script and an enigmatic female lead. The graphics and music were all rather dated, but the potential wouldn’t lose in those outstanding works. That’s an out-of-place artifact in the history of galge, and in other words, it’s an outstanding work that probably wouldn’t exist.)
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“That game itself had an outstanding script and an enigmatic female lead. The graphics and music were all rather dated, but the potential wouldn’t lose to that outstanding works. That’s an out-of-place artifact in the history of galge, and in other words, it’s an outstanding work that probably wouldn’t exist.)
   
 
“Ka, kami nii-sama.”
 
“Ka, kami nii-sama.”
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She was the one who got Elsie to join in at the beginning.
 
She was the one who got Elsie to join in at the beginning.
   
If it were the normal Elsie, once she heard Chihiro say that,
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If it were the normal Elsie, once she hear Chihiro say that,
   
 
“Okay, I would like to!”
 
“Okay, I would like to!”
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“…Un, I do have a mother.”
 
“…Un, I do have a mother.”
   
Then, Keima looked unconcerned as he continued to be immersed in his game of PFP. Even though he had spent a lot of effort trying to conquer that ‘Favor of the Western Lantern’, it seemed that he left that world completely.
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Then, Keima looked unconcerned as he continued to be immersed in his game of PFP. Even though he did spent a lot of effort trying to conquer that ‘Favor of the Western Lantern’, it seemed that he left that world completely.
   
 
He said that the ending was near, which meant that it should be true.
 
He said that the ending was near, which meant that it should be true.
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Even beautiful.
 
Even beautiful.
   
Under the light of the screen, Keima seemed to be giving off light as he shone all around. That extremely fast hand movement seemed to give off afterimages.
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Under the light of the screen, Keima seemed to giving off light as he shone all around. That extremely fast hand movement seemed to give off afterimages.
   
 
“Chi!”
 
“Chi!”

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